Maybe Love Bites Twice

by Fat1thatyoulove

Bonus Chapter

Epilogue 2

It has been a few long months since Celestia almost brought Equestria to its knees, however despite the fact of only a few select ponies actually knowing what happened the sun keeper has started to stay in the shadows a lot more. Luckily though the Princess of the night has taken on a much more active role in Equestria, which as of lately has been rewarded with one of the most prosperous times so far in Equestria's history.

Of course though, the world's problems and triumphs mean nothing to a certain light orange pegasus who continues to pace back and forth the bright pale pink crystal lobby he has been stuck into since he jumped from the bed over two hours ago.

Sparky's unbrushed mane is flared out more then his anxious wings as he continues to whittle down the hard stone floor he trots to.

"Mr.Wave..."

The feminine voice echoes through the almost empty lobby as the stallion quickly turns his attention to the nurse hat wearing light blue mare, who continues to trot from one of the hallways, "...Will you please follow me?"

Without a moment of hesitation the young pegasus brings his trot up as he moves to the mare's side, "I-is everything okay?"

The mare turns her head back to the hall as she brings her voice out again, "Like doctor Garnet said, an early birth is nothing to truly worry about."

Sparky just nods his head as continues to follow the mare pass a few more rooms, but her trot is quick to come to an end as she gives a smile and stops in front of one of the last rooms on the right, "Here you are."

Her smile does little to the young stallion's nerves as he slowly brings himself to the closed door.

However, as the brighter lights of the crystal room come into view Sparky shifts his eyes to the tired light purple mare sitting up right in the bed. On the right side of the room stands one of the doctors who's head is just buried to the clipboard he writes something to, but his presence does not change Sparky's eyes as he stares to the light pink bundled up foal in Violet's hold.

Spark's legs wobble a little as he slowly comes to the side of the bed, "H-hey, how are you doing?"

The question brings a faint smile to the mare's face, but she nods her head to the foal in her hold as she moves the blanket a little more for the stallion to see.

Sparky's own pride filled smile starts to spread across his face as he lowers his head to the closed eyed light yellow coated and almost grape maned pegasus filly. He sighs as he feels his own emotion starting to get the better of him, "H-hey..."

The stallion's voice continues to hold a slightly giggly tone as he moves his head a little closer to the filly's, "You're going to do great things Astral." He kisses the little pony's mane as he continues, "Welcome to the world."

End

Comments

[Fat1thatyoulove]

Art for Astral will be posted whenever I stop being lazy

[Leux]

That, was a very nice lil story~~~ ^^ more?
You can even count it as a good little pre-ending story a little story that prepares the end of the entire legend ... soooo...

EDIT:
OHHHH yes... forgot totally... two times in Milkies Plan (at first in the Christal Castle and the second in Canterlot ) you mention the Crown instead of (I guess you wanted to mention) the Cristal Heart

Really that was some nice arc you have woven there, maybe a bit out of sync, don't ask me why... at some point I simply asked my self "Ok, De Heck's going on here?!?"
You lead the plot through the events at some points, like you dragged it on a leash.
No Questioning or describing the bigger situation sometimes ^^"
But non the less, nice work.

[Fat1thatyoulove]

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That is pretty much the end. I do not want to drag the MAybe series on for another year. So, I figured ending it with everyone in the thing at least to a point of being happy was good.

If I dragged it on it would be following Violet's foal.

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Also thanks for pointing out the crown thing

[Leux]

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If you truly want to end the MAybe saga here, how about a obituary?
Like
"And here we close the book of MAybes, even so many more years of happiness and trials, love and adventures are to come. it is simply not our place to pry further in there lives and give them finally some privacy... unless one of you think differently and want to form the future, and discover the past by your self..."

Opinion?

ADD:
Well, now that MAybe ended...
What have you planed now?

[Fat1thatyoulove]

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The end of a series is never the end. In truth I could go further, with ease actually, but there are only like a few people from the past who still even read any more. And all the new people have hundreds of other stories to read.

I want to leave it open in case I ever continue, but as it stands right now everyone is happy and "safe" for now. Thanks for your support and comments over our long year and a half of knowing each other. Perhaps I will add a new part, but for now everyone is happy and the story is over.

[Sabspaz]

Ok so I have just read the whole maybe series over the past few months whenever I had down time from work it feels like it was one continuous story... And now I want more but as it seams it might be over. Well it had a good run and I liked every one of them.

Sad to see the universe end good luck in whatever you move on to next.

[Sabspaz]

Actually you have to continue this story with Tirek the magic stealing villein from g1 that twilight has to fight in seasion 4s finale.

I just hope it still stays as twilights husband staying the bad ass of the story.

[Fat1thatyoulove]

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Well it is not over. Currently I am writing a real book, and am on book 4 so ya, that takes priority. (Not a writer yet) Although, my preliminary readers say the stories are good. Also yes, I take it a lot more serious than a fanfic lol, so it has way less mistakes and is much more in depth. Currently I am awaiting my publisher to answer. So far though I'm pretty confident from what they have said.

Still, fanfic writing was rather enjoyable and I may have to take it up again, it is free and fun. I was going to post a blog about coming back maybe during the summer. I really do owe my creative world designing to this site and my own series, I may have to continue this series soon.

TLDR???

Will be posting a blog near the start of June to ask readers if they want more. SO STAY UP ON IT.

Thanks for reading thus far