This story is a sequel to Should be Something...
Part 61 in the Maybe series... Love is a strange and wondrous thing, however how far can somepony go before love becomes an obsession; and how far can a pony be pushed before love becomes dangerous. For one family in Equestria being blinded by feelings could have more impact then any villain's actions, especially when the line between hero or not can get blurred.
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Not over yet, but thanks
Art for Astral will be posted whenever I stop being lazy
That, was a very nice lil story~~~ ^^ more?
You can even count it as a good little pre-ending story a little story that prepares the end of the entire legend ... soooo...
EDIT:
OHHHH yes... forgot totally... two times in Milkies Plan (at first in the Christal Castle and the second in Canterlot ) you mention the Crown instead of (I guess you wanted to mention) the Cristal Heart
Really that was some nice arc you have woven there, maybe a bit out of sync, don't ask me why... at some point I simply asked my self "Ok, De Heck's going on here?!?"
You lead the plot through the events at some points, like you dragged it on a leash.
No Questioning or describing the bigger situation sometimes ^^"
But non the less, nice work.
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That is pretty much the end. I do not want to drag the MAybe series on for another year. So, I figured ending it with everyone in the thing at least to a point of being happy was good.
If I dragged it on it would be following Violet's foal.
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Also thanks for pointing out the crown thing
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If you truly want to end the MAybe saga here, how about a obituary?
Like
"And here we close the book of MAybes, even so many more years of happiness and trials, love and adventures are to come. it is simply not our place to pry further in there lives and give them finally some privacy... unless one of you think differently and want to form the future, and discover the past by your self..."
Opinion?
ADD:
Well, now that MAybe ended...
What have you planed now?
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The end of a series is never the end. In truth I could go further, with ease actually, but there are only like a few people from the past who still even read any more. And all the new people have hundreds of other stories to read.
I want to leave it open in case I ever continue, but as it stands right now everyone is happy and "safe" for now.
Thanks for your support and comments over our long year and a half of knowing each other. Perhaps I will add a new part, but for now everyone is happy and the story is over.
Ok so I have just read the whole maybe series over the past few months whenever I had down time from work it feels like it was one continuous story... And now I want more but as it seams it might be over. Well it had a good run and I liked every one of them.
Sad to see the universe end good luck in whatever you move on to next.
Actually you have to continue this story with Tirek the magic stealing villein from g1 that twilight has to fight in seasion 4s finale.
I just hope it still stays as twilights husband staying the bad ass of the story.
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Well it is not over. Currently I am writing a real book, and am on book 4 so ya, that takes priority. (Not a writer yet) Although, my preliminary readers say the stories are good. Also yes, I take it a lot more serious than a fanfic lol, so it has way less mistakes and is much more in depth. Currently I am awaiting my publisher to answer. So far though I'm pretty confident from what they have said.
Still, fanfic writing was rather enjoyable and I may have to take it up again, it is free and fun. I was going to post a blog about coming back maybe during the summer. I really do owe my creative world designing to this site and my own series, I may have to continue this series soon.
TLDR???
Will be posting a blog near the start of June to ask readers if they want more. SO STAY UP ON IT.
Thanks for reading thus far