When Trixie is sent to a nunnery in the Equestrian countryside, she must give up what she is accustomed to and live a simpler existence among the sisters. However, everything is not as it seems. Secrets are revealed and hidden desires are made known as events play out that will change two ponies lives' forever.
Set in an Alternate Universe before Season One.
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Huh, this is certainly different. Can't say I've seen this concept before.
I will keep track of it. The promise of something sinister going on in the background has my interests, along with the mysterious Sister Sparkle.
Also, besides a few typos here and there, the writing is good. Always a plus.
Looking forward to more!
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Thank you for commenting! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Haha, yeah, the concept was pretty random for me too. A friend of mine even said that it would get flamed because of the subject matter involved, but one has to take risks every now and then, right?
Anyways, I hope to have another chapter up soon (a week or two, maybe?) so stay tuned.
Again, thanks commenting. ;)
what an interesting life Trixie had. Never really thought religion has a distinct place in Equestria other than the ponies just live in good praise/fear of Celestia but this does pretty well and a bit more believable.
Not even a day.
I guess that's Trixie for ya. No sense having rules if you can break 'em. Twilight seems eager to get in on this as well.
Cute interactions between the two. It's funny to think that they are humanoid horses pulling and guiding that plow. It must be sweltering during the Summer in those robes. I also found it funny how it was Trixie that was uptight about the bath rather than Twilight. In other stories, it's usually the other way around.
Glad to see this continue! Carry on.
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Thanks again for your kind words. I hope to have another chapter ready soon. ^^
A lot of typos and a few structural mistakes, like calling Cheerilee by her name before her name actually comes up, but that aside the concept's solid, and it has a decent enough pace and flow that I enjoyed it. I'd suggest getting a proof reader to help catch a few of these mistakes, but other than that keep doing what you're doing.
4037415 Thanks for pointing out that Cheerilee part - I fixed it! :D
Hey, I really have a hard time finding a proofreader, but you seem like you have keen eye for pointing out mistakes, perhaps you'd like to give it a go?
I know I make a lot of mistakes, so I'd be really grateful if you did. ^^
4038019 Sure, I have work all day Tuesdays and Thursdays so I won't get anything sent to me on those days until late, but every other day I'm mostly free so I think I'll be able do that.
Just as a heads up I've never done this before, so if I make a few mistakes myself I hope you'll forgive me.
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No, no, please - I'm sure you'll do fine. Just send me the revised chapters whenever you're done. If you have any questions or whatever, just skype me. My name is: blut.eisen.
Thanks again, this really means a lot. ^^
Blood Iron? You sure know how to pick your screen names, anyway I should be able to get the first chapter back to you soon.
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Yes, it's actually a reference from a speech made by Bismarck. Hehe. Anyways, thanks again.
If it's set in an alternate universe (as it appears to be), how can it be "before Season One"?
Okami Amaterasu?
They pray to Ammy?
Neat.
I know it's Fausticorn but come on it fitsThis story is different from the normal stories I've read.
I like it.
Wish there where more chapters, because I want to see how Twi and Trixie's secret friendship goes.