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Sunset returns home for the holidays seeking forgiveness and reconciliation.

Warning contains: Comforting and excessive tears.

Cover art credits to Mrs.1989, who graciously gave me permission to use his art.

Graciously edited by MikeWalker.

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Very heartwarming :twilightsmile:

6768938 Thank you! ^^

Hmm, unique style. And rather adorable.

Sunset: how can you forgive me so easily! I thought you would be furious with me?

Celestia: I was never angry with you, I was sad because I thought you had lost your way.

Sunset: :applecry: I did lose my way.
Celestia: but you found it again.

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That scene fits this so perfectly too. :applecry:

6770275 Thank you,. :)

Awww. I love this.

I've written my own, yeah, but that doesn't stop me from enjoying the efforts of others on scenes like this.

This was okay. The problem is that the buildup kept building up, and then the payoff didn't live up to the buildup.

That was such a sweet and heartwarming story.

6770597 I can see that, but sometimes half the battle is in the mind. The hardest part, I find, in life, is over-coming self-doubt.

I know its just a oneshot, but this REALLY deserves to be a series.

6770675 Been mulling over a follow up. ;)

I love sunset redemption stories. this one is no exception

Look, *sniff sniff*, if you want to cheer up *falls on floor rolling back and forth with tears*. LISTEN TO THIS OKAY?!

6773290 Thank you for your kind comment. I enjoyed the video. Have a great day. ^^

I'm not sure if I should put this in my holiday folder or not...

I agree with Sunset_Shimmer83, I love a good Sunset redemption story. I hope the show writers (if there's a season six) will include one. I've always felt that Sunset was destined to be Celestia's, eventual, replacement and Twilight was Luna's, eventual, replacement.

6773384 The image you're using is unsettling. I don't know what to feel when i look at your user image.

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I'm sorry if my face unsettles you. >_>

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truth be told, I was trying to be funny.v

Awwww... Wish they would do this in the next movie or season. :fluttercry:

To me what's funny is that my story is named the same name! Please know that this is a coincidence, and if you want me to change mine, it's fine.

6801021 Not at all! I shall read it now in fact. :)

Okay thanks! But right now, it's rrreeeaaallly short!

Aww, that was sweet. A beautiful piece that really captures how a reunion between the two would go. I especially love the ending line-just seems like a nice note to go out on.

All in all, a beautiful, if short little piece.

Sunset is her prodigal son- er, daughter. :fluttercry:

*sniff*

I am not crying!!

*sniffle*

un like others i was not impressed by this as i was thinking it was a vacation for sunset to resolve things with celestia not a move back to equestria and throw away the friends you have made becuse friendship is only magic if it involves ponies

sunsets home is in the human world thats where her friends are the freinds she loves like family

The ending scene is extremely similar to zukos apology to iroh in the atla.

the marble houses and store that glistened proudly with royal banners around the regal presence of the palace where she had learned her magic.

Not sure if you meant stores or stone here.

It must have been the same, she thought , as she remembered it.

thought, as

i feel like this was inspired by a comic dub Wubcake did on her YT channel, as was mine XD. I really want to see Sunny come home to Equestria Fall, i really hope that happens at some point in the next EG movie or something.

7135216 You know what, that's me. I'm supposed to be the one editing these. I must have missed those.

7019559 Did you even read the story? She IS just visiting for the holidays.

“Time does have a way of getting away from us.”

It sure does. I'm almost 20 and I still feel like I'm 16.

“No problem,” Twilight replied. “I always carry a few anyway. You never know when you might need one.”

Always best to be prepared. :ajsmug:

“For a friend, I'd do anything.”

A sign of true friendship and trust that twilight proves wealthy at it.

For a moment she hesitated, nearly stepping away in intimidation before a reassuring hand clasped its fingers with hers. Sunset looked to Twilight, who stood ready by her with a firm resolve, and Sunset found courage in the Princess of Friendship stood by her side.

You can do this sunset. :fluttershysad:

The Princess held her close, as the tears flowed unabated from them both.

A good story with a perfect and happy ending. :twilightsmile:

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