Losing a sibling can be tough, especially a sister. Rarity tries to cope in the aftermath of sister's unexpected passing as she thinks back about what was and what could have been.
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Well... I don't know what anyone else might think, but I personally liked it. This isn't my all-time favorite category of stories but aside from some grammar errors its a well-written fic. I look forward to more stories in the future.
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Pretty good though a bit rushed in spots.
R.I.P Sweetie Belle.
Could be good.
This should be featured because it made my feels high
This was pretty damn awesome. I shed a tear.
Only recommendation would be to make a pass for editing. Otherwise, this was a lovely little piece.
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Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.
I'll definitely revise it when I get a chance. Anything noticeable though you spotted?
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Nothing too big. Just watch your comma use, mostly. I don't think I spotted any misspellings, just some dialogue punctuation and missing commas.
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I'll be sure to look it over!
Thanks once again!
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You're welcome!
Bravo! You have successfully made me cry
that is the mark of an awesome writer...I don't usually don't cry....
This wasn't too bad.
Great job it was
but also very good well done 
Well that was one bitter-sweet ending... Gah! My chest hurts now...
My chest! It hurts!
Brilliantly done.
This is was so beautiful!
The ending felt like I was being punched in the heart.
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Thanks so much for reading! I'm glad you liked it!
3531628 same here
it is very rare that i cry at a sad story so i applaud you
Looking at Remembrance, and then this...
You've improved dramatically, but it's still a beautiful story.
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Haha, how so? X3
4451176 that might've been the wrong word. i think. Remembrance tugs my feelstrings a little more.
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Well, nonetheless, I feel flattered that you think I've improved. ^^
Though I am sorta disappointed more people haven't read "Remembrance". :/
4451204 It's been a few days, more people will read it.
on a side note, I'm now editor for someone else, too.
still your editor though, that won't change unless you want it to.
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Oh no, not at all. I really appreciate everything you do Mike. It really means a lot to me.
4451334 Wonderful. I'll be waiting for the next chapter then.
I wasn't aware I was about to take a feels trip.
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Clever play on words there...
Glad you liked it. ^^
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I agree whole heartily