The Final Lesson

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When Twilight gets diagnosed with cancer, she just wants to escape all of it, until she starts realizing what she needs to do.

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wiiman

wiiman #1 · Jan 26th, 2014 · · ·

Ow, right in the feels.

spideremblembrony

spideremblembrony #2 · Jan 29th, 2014 · 1 · ·

A really good story.

One of the things I liked is, I liked the fact that it was in first person. That's something you don't see a lot in fan fiction. So I was really glad to see it done here. It was a nice change of pace and it just felt right for this story. It was nice to see everything from Twilight's perspective. To hear her thoughts and voice. That was a good move on your part. So kudos.

I liked the ending. It thought it was very sweet and it was definitely unexpected. I thought that it was a perfect way for the story to end. It was a great ending and I'm glad it ended the way it did. A lot of writers would have gone the other way and I'm glad this one didn't.

A great story. Very well written. Very well done and executed. Thank you for letting me read it and I'll catch you later. Take care.