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Epsilon-Delta


I like things that are spooky or cute. Now with kofi.

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After the defeat of Nightmare Moon the thestrals were scattered to the most remote corners of the world In deep caves and forgotten mountains they lived, isolated from the outside world. As a thousand years past the rest of the world forgot them, and the thestrals grew stagnant in their isolation.

As the outside world grows and expands, their once isolated homes become less remote. As outside forces begin to invade, one thestral is forced from her home to seek aid and reunite the fragmented thestral clans on the eve of Nightmare Moon's return.

Takes place a few months before episode 1.

Chapters 1-3 edited by SweetieBotError

Chapters (9)
Comments ( 49 )

Interesting, I'll be keeping my eye on this.

3843523

Thank you very much for your interest!

You should write more of this story, Ninja Epsilon-Delta of Calculus I've Not Seen In Some Time.

3876287

Have we met before? You aren't form that place, are you?

Also the next chapter should be finished tonight.

3881386
Nope. I'm not a time traveler, looper, rifter or anything magic like that. I was referring to your name because I've not seen it since college.

an interesting prologue, will you be editing the other two chapters?

3918232

No. Nothing major at any rate.

This was originally going to be put in the story later, but chapter 3 is taking longer than I had planned. I want to update every Saturday, but it wouldn't have been ready in time so I posted this instead. It takes place before the first chapter so I guess it makes sense to put it here.

Next week will be chapter 3.

This story looks really good! I'm looking forward to seeing where Silverstar goes from here. Who will she turn to in order to save her people? Who? WHO?

:trollestia: "Hiiiiiiiii!"

Also, you'll probably want to fix this:

Onyx laughed again. “The thing about shape shifters is that we’re kind of hard to poison. We can just change our anatomies to protect us from our anatomies something that can survive it. We’re immune to almost every poison and this gas is no exception.

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I'm glad you like it. I fixed the mistake, thanks.

:trollestia: "Hiiiiiiiii!"

It's too bad Celestia is evil, huh?

3970357 That's why the Trollestia icon is so perfect. :rainbowlaugh: I can just imagine Silverstar imagining Celestia as Mr. Popo from DBZ Abridged.

:trollestia: "Pecking order!"

In all seriousness, though, I'm both expecting and hoping for a team-up with Lyra.

No one likes a joker, Roach, on team vengeance.

3987522

I'm sure Roach will get the last laugh. Well, probably not. I'm sure someone will, though!

Hadrian Mountains. Where exactly did you get that name?

4021982

Dunno, brah. It just sort of came to me. :trollestia:

I kid, though. It's just a shout out to your story. There's a few references to other bat-pony stories in there. You don't mind, right?

“Anyway, my name is Lyra and we’re friends now. Can I ask you hundreds, if not thousands of questions?”

Oh, Lyra. :rainbowlaugh:

Hmm... interesting story so far. These Thestrals are frighteningly ignorant and seems to believe only the worst of the worst :applejackunsure:

I'll keep an eye out for more :unsuresweetie:

So he was that Thestral Lyra found... Interesting. That explains how he came to stay in Canterlot for two years.

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I really doubt Celestia is evil :unsuresweetie: The Thestrals are just ignorant :derpytongue2:

Now I'm just waiting for Starlight to get out somehow, find Midnight and get to the surface and get Celestia to help them and roll over these insects and stray dogs :rainbowdetermined2:

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Ah! So many comments. Thank you.

These Thestrals are frighteningly ignorant and seems to believe only the worst of the worst :applejackunsure:

That's sort of what I'm going for with the eastern clans, so... hurray? :applejackunsure:

I really doubt Celestia is evil :unsuresweetie: The Thestrals are just ignorant :derpytongue2:

I know, I was just joking. Unless it turns out that Midnight was lying and she is made of fire! :trollestia:
Spoiler: she isn't

Now I'm just waiting for Starlight to get out somehow, find Midnight and get to the surface and get Celestia to help them and roll over these insects and stray dogs :rainbowdetermined2:

Hopefully it will be that easy. As long as nothing unexpected happens I'm sure they'll be fine.

Thanks again for reading.:twilightsmile:

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Bugs don't usually do well with fire and, well, Celestia xP

And yeah, i figured that you were going for the Eastern clans being ignorant xP

Well dang, Whisper is just evil there.

4122545 Nah, just a fanatic.

Welp, ain't that an eye opener for Silver. Nightmare Moon ain't the good guy, she's the villain.

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You still can't be too sure. I mean, would you trust Celestia?

4197244 Well no, but I'm a Duscordian so...

4197659 No, the IRL religion of Discordianism, based on the teachings of the Principas Discordia. All conflict stems from False Order and the Curse of Grey. Chaos is a way to achieve true understanding of the universe. Celestia may have benevolent intentions, but intentions don't matter as much as consiquences.

4197734

Ah! That type of Discordian.

Are you a discordian for real? The only discordians I've ever met all turned out to be people who were just pretending to be discordians.

4197751 Well yeah I am. Also, how doyou pretend to be a Discordian? It's rediculously loose and doesn't even require exclusivity. I'm also Roman Catholic for example, and I can reconcile the two together very easily. For example the Curse of Grey comes from humans trying to break something as complex and vast beyond all comprehension as the Universe down into easy to understand simple parts that are perfectly defined and categorized. And then something like matter/energy equivilance or light wave/photon duality comes out and proves the Universe can't be broken down into simple ideas. Likewise God and his works are beyond mortal comprehension, and to claim to truly understand is hubris. People can only try their best to understand God in their own personal way.

Can't wait for chapter 9 great story so far

4231957

Thanks for reading. I'm glad you like it.:twilightsmile:

The next chapter should be up this weekend.

4233252 that's great would your oc be Sliverstar

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Technically, all the thestrals in this story are OCs.

4236517 I know that but would sliverstar be yours specifically

4237548

Silverstar isn't supposed to be the pony version of me or my avatar like some people have. She's just a character in my story. I am the one who made her up, if that's what you're asking, though.

4241922 yes that is what I meant danke

Did not see that one coming.

I have this Star Trek the Next Generation To be continued theme playing in my head now.

You know, I can't help but think that while all this is going on, Twilight is probably just happily studying away and humming to herself in a tower somewhere.

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Actually Twilight should be appearing in the next chapter as long as the next scene doesn't take longer than expected.

I don't know if this counts as a spoiler, but Twilight is the one who defeats Nightmare Moon in the end, so she will be having an impact on the story later on.

4278820 I know, I know, it's just that since this has yet to directly involve her or have an effect on her search for the Elements of Harmony, it's just so easy to picture her studying away, blissfully oblivious to what's going on because it hasn't interfered with her reading.

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I guess you could say she went
[Puts on sunglasses]
Over the edge.

YEEEEAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH!!!

4387976

I would have gone with "off the rails".

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Eh, both work.
But for now, Celestia is being
[Puts on sunglasses]
left in the dark.

YEEEEAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH!!!

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ISWYDT.

Update soon please?

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