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This is awesome keep it up
3790872 I'm in the process of finishing the First chapter right now!
I wont lie to you here... I mean the story itself is... umm how to say this... good in my opinion few things here and there but over all enjoyable.
You have my attention.
this chapter felt incredibly rushed. Slow down okay.
3792150 Will do officer :) I'm not a good writer at all yet so you'll have to see my work progress through out the chapters. This is my very first Fanfic too!
listen just take your time and do some more writing. the thing about writing is, the more you do it the better you get at writing.
Want to watch me write? go ahead and click this link it's my live stream! http://www.twitch.tv/asg16_4
Finally finished the first chapter! and I think i'm going to go
after a while xD
3792063 awesome
3794657 Thank you I'm currently working on the 2nd addition to the story you can watch me write it if you go to my live stream VV
Don't think I will be able to read the story myself. It just seems to...mary sue. However don't think it's bad to the point to where I have downvote it either.
3798237 I'm actually not like the person in my fic. I just try to have a different view on this so things like Mary sue won't happen.
Not many grammatical errors, but a lot of punctuation errors.
Still, the story's alright.
3801061 Thanks for letting me know i'll take a look at it and ill also have one of my friends pour over it.
skilled
to the conductor
know where the market
why she gave
dead
you that you could take
do
goodbye
all that
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Hey look i'm an editor
TBS AlexDK
i've just changed my name a bit
anon cmon g...you cant handle some horse liquor?
that you had
on
to the wheel
sat the jar down and began
i have a meeting with
for
So you started walking towards the edge
got
Applejack
Canterlot
they
make it to
3833441 OMG LOL I would think that it's probably the equivalent to Vodka ;)
so i take it this story goes full out yolo?....
3857697 Kinda because The character didn't really have the life he wanted on earth so I guess your right xD Sorry for taking so long on the new chapter i'm just busy with high school
3861003 so does it go full out yolo or not?....
3861462 No it does not because this is not going to be a romance not a full on clop till you drop!
Plus with everything that's going on I might just put the story on hiatus when i'm finished with the chapter.
3861500 till you drop?....
that sounds like full on yolo to me.....
3861533 That was a typo, read that again. The story will be on Hiatus until further notice.
3885847 but it's still full of you obviously love octavia eh?.....
3885879 Not really actually I'm more of a Rainbow Dash guy xD
3898077 omg you still don't get it do you?....
3899452 Nope please explain yourself...
3902226 p.twimg.com/AyvjyrBCAAAsVz9.jpg:large
3902420 OMG LOL I didn't get it until I saw that lol I just never saw that picture so that's why I was confused xD Much love toward Octi! :D
This story is officially cancelled I will release what ever I had for the next chapter...
Why did this update if it's listed as cancelled?
I updated it before I cancelled it kinda like a peek into what I had for he next chapter... I only stopped the story because I don't have anymore time to write anymore.