When a duck named Fluffy Feather wakes up in the royal dungeons, everything goes crazy. She brings the attention of the Princesses and the Elements of Harmony, the most powerful ponies in Equestria. This...cannot be good. At all...
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Ok, I put all of the chapters into one chapter!
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There are execution errors in Luna's dialogue. Also, I'm sure Celestia has seen weirder things than a fluffy yellow elephant, so her sudden madness makes no sense. Anyway, I don't get it. Needs more events, more detail, and less wackiness to be coherent. Sorry, but I'm downvoting.
That was magnificient.
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Thank you.
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It's supposed to not make sense.
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Meh, it's okay about the downvote. It's supposed to not make sense, I just wrote it because I was bored.
Amusing, but with all the stuff happening at once after the duck got polymorphed, it was sort of hard to follow what was going on.
I don't even.
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It's supposed to be confusing...
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By the way, do you still go on GalacticArc? I never see you on.
I love how you use the duck as a stand in for Mans search for the truth of his/her life wile the world (the dirty pony) try's to pluck what sense of self they have in a attempt to fill the hole in it's (the dirty pony) own lack of a moral center. The act of fighting back could be seen to an outside observer (represented by Celestia and the main 6) as futile madness and a threat to the status quo.
Luna eating the bagel symbolizes...that she was hungry.
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You brilliant monster.
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This .... just what?! XD
I had to create a whole new bookshelf for stories like these. So far, this remains the king of them all!
The only thing that bothered me was Luna's dialogue; I'm a stickler for Middle English. I'm not honestly sure if it was intentionally bad or if you just don't really know the dialect, but either way, I'm able to pass it off as just another part of the wackiness of the story.