• Member Since 11th Dec, 2012
  • offline last seen Apr 15th, 2023

lunabrony


I write stories.

E
Source

Presents and packages are one thing. Unlabeled parcels of mysterious origin are quite another. Twilight Sparkle must decide what to do with her newest shipment, before she herself gets shipped off to the looney bin.

Disclaimer: Cover Photo is merely an appropriate nostalgic placeholder. The story is not in any way bandicoot related.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 27 )

Well, this looks rather interesting.

I would've used the Question Block from Mario.

Ah! The destructive power of the CMC will open the box. Twilight your problems are solved.:scootangel:

...it's for Spike, isn't it? It opens to dragon fire.

"Or it could be nothing. Or old cheese. Spike pointed out.

it's old cheese isn't it
Oh yeah you forgot end quotes

3912205 Yay, Friendship is Grammar! Thanks for pointing it out. And no, no it isn't.

Comment posted by Wagonwheel deleted Feb 8th, 2014

Wait...Chrysalis used to live in the library? When?

3939937 That was my question too. I was almost sure it was going to be Trixie, you know from when she took over Ponyville.

...Fluffle Puff?

...HILARIOUS!

3951860 I mean, what else could possibly be in a box of mysterious origin? I'm worried I kinda pushed my luck there near the end but screw it. :ajsleepy:

3952345 NO. NO WE ARE NOT TALKING ABOUT THAT.

3952363
What? Imagine if Fluffle Puff comes out when it's opened?

6021881 Honestly the review is accurate and I cant even be mad. I'm only disappointed that this was the story chosen for review, this story is terrible and I have done so much better... I would have gone with Goodnight Woon, truthfully.

6023844
I read Goodnight Woon, but that was back before I was doing reviews. No worries, I have other stories by you on my RiL that I'll get to... eventually.

6024558 Thank you, and thank you for your honest critique. It sucks being portrayed as unfavorable, but I'm not going to let it get me down. I'm more mature than tha- OH HEY LOOK A BUTTERLY!

"The story is not in any way bandicoot related."
Darn it.

Login or register to comment