Apparently, I had become a bat pony during the night, and that's just the begining. I soon met Rainbow Dash, which is where it began?
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Somehow I think Discord is behind this.
And you really need to work on grammar. It's a big issue in this story. I do remember seeing that your first language is not english, from a previous comment. But, please send this to an editor. It would help things flow and work out right.
4957893 I guess he could be, but I can never revela it all this early on.
I can make further attemts in getting the grammar better here, if I can find a way to see how to make this better.
I came up with a way to make some use of that detail, since a translation would point out some details both grammarly and spellcheck would miss, or just explain parts of why it works, doesn't work the way I put it in the first place.
I have been looking for editors throughout most of my stay, but it feels as if it isn't worth the efforts, since they don't help me.
I had one who offered me some help, but it seems he vaniched.