3857734 thanks for pointing it out, that should be dealt with now.

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oh, have some more:

including Angle, the white bunny. She cast me a suspicious glance

You misspelled Angel's name, and you use "she" when you should have used "he". Angel is male.

farmers, like Apple Jack

"Applejack" is one word.

My cottage is even inside of the forest, just out of ear shot from the village popper.

Fluttershy's cottage is just outside of the forest, not inside of the forest. In any case, "earshot" is one word" and "proper" is supposed to be "proper".

3857849 I guess I tend to take everyone for femals? ohwell, that should take cared of the bunny.
Thanks, this would look much better, even if it wasn't all that many typos.
I came across another while I was going over the text in the upcoming chapter. I guess it does help, checking for something someone else pointed out.
I'm basically blind to my own mistakes, I guess it is common.