After attending an assertiveness seminar by Iron Will, the Cutie Mark Crusaders set out on a mission which they should have done long ago: Give Diamond Tiara the worst day of her life.
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After that the CMC would get the cutie marks they deserved as well.
I was waiting for a story like this! I love it!
damn
Ha, ridiculous. Filthy is least successful parent.
This is brilliant. Many cheers and one like to you.
The whole time I was reading this, all I was thinking was...
Great job on this one, but it seems a little TOO mean-spirited for the CMC. But it still makes me smile that DT is finally getting her comeuppance.
Hm... as cathartic as that ought to have felt, it just doesn't quite work for me.
I know Diamond Tiara is a jerk and all, but there's only so much that being a mild jerk deserves. The CMC managed to be a hundred times worse than Diamond Tiara ever had been in one day.
So, yeah, I'm depressed...
Now I enjoyed that! Consider it liked and faved, good sir.
^~^ I really liked this.
And to Filthy Rich: YOU HAVE FAILED
*sing-song voice* "I needed this"
The feelings... I... don't know how to feel.
Diamond Tiara's punishments from Mrs. Cheerilee and Filthy Rich seem a "bit" too harsh. Of course they could've happened, but not from one mere incident. Great story, needs more fill-in details.
3738718 In taking extreme pleasures from inflicting and relishing in other ponies pain? Yup, a well earned cutie mark indeed.
3738829 So you've waited this whole time to see a story where Sweetie Belle, Apple Bloom, and Scootaloo become heartless villains, and even get Silver Spoon to betray Diamond Tiara for no good reason and thus revealing what a disgusting two-faced monster she's really been this whole time, just to get Diamond Tiara in trouble with Cheerilee? Who ends up kicking Diamond out of school, DT's father disowning her, and the cutie mark crusaders actually relishing every agonizing moment Diamond suffers as they follow her around to ensure they don't miss a beat of Diamond's suffering?
I'm honestly surprised they left out the scene with Diamond Tiara hanging herself with a noose on a tree branch that overlooks the town she's no longer welcomed in with the CMC having been actually helping her get the supplies she needed to get things ready for the suicide as they sat on their chairs and cheered Diamond to get on with it as they stuffed themselves with popcorn, making cracks on Diamond as she makes sickening noises and gurgles the CMC would make fun of and do silly imitations of Diamond Tiara's barely audible last breaths and muffled cries of not wanting to die as her neck finally gives way and lets that snapping sound go through that quiets the CMC...
... Who then burst into a ruckus cheer!
Maybe we can see that bonus chapter later on. I'm sure you must be salivating at the very thought of this "Director's Cut".
@Author: Cheers. I've read many a story with CMC, and while this isn't the worst they've done by far, it's certainly ended up being the worst natured CMC I've ever read, and damn it I read that CMC fic with Sweetie Belle taunting Diamond with a knife as they hunted her down in her own home. These CMC even make the Mafia ones seem tame.
I didn't think it was possible to dislike the CMC. While Silver Spoon's part was expected, as per the usual CMC focused stories go, the CMC going to these lengths and LOVING all that stuff? Doing that to the CMC is worst than what they did to Diamond. Especially given the context of her just having a normal, relaxing day. One typical remark to their crusading ends up leading to the worst day of her life.
This story was BRILLIANT!
Seriously, it's on a level of brilliance I can't even express. Bravo author, bravo. I'm not even kidding. You really achieved your goal here. The comments alone prove that. Bravo.
3739257 ditto... I'm not sure what to make of this exactly... Glad they stood up for themselves but... I'm also a bit depressed.
Is this supposed to be funny? It's fine to get "revenge" and stuff, like in stories with Trixie teasing or playing around with Twilight. But...seriously? Just...no. Diamond Tiara gets enough hate and abuse as it is, and taking the Crusaders out-of-character like this just for a laugh at a misunderstood antagonist's expense is wrong. Really hope you feel proud of yourself. What's next, huh? You going to make Rarity ruin Suri's life? Or maybe Rainbow Dash ruins Lightning Dust's? Or, heck, how about Luna gets back at Celestia?
Honestly, Diamond Tiara does not deserve that harsh of a punishment. I mean, getting disowned because she got expelled? That seems a bit extreme. Okay, DT is a bully, but the CMC are JERKS in this story. They totally ruined DT's life, and laugh as she walks out of town with NOWHERE to go. You must be SO proud of yourself.
Excuse me while I rage.
3739898 Yeah. I dislike suffering in general, especially when it happens to young people.
Well, the grammar was good.
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Do you see a comedy tag up there, dumbass?
I can't help it I was laughing so hard through this story I think I gave myself a hernia.... Does that make me a bad person.
PS. I don't care about your negativity, if you hate it, click on deslike and leave. Have a good day! =D
Everything Wrong with CUTIE MARK CRUSADER LIFE RUINERS, YAY!
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Didn't they do that before? Sure, it was the Mane 6, but they could choose any(pony) else. So why are they repeating themselfs? +1
They could've asked the ponies at the town market, after all, they had nothing to do. +1
Did they just forget their goal out from scratch, and none of them mentioned it? (Now, i know this once is probably forced, so i'll leave it as it is.)
This bag wasn't mentioned previously. +1
Im going to assume that this fic is played at the same time at Putting the Hoof Down because Fluttershy is there, however, you do not mention it anywhere (Not even on this fic's cape) So..or this is playing at the same time, or Fluttershy is just PLAIN STUPID and is back there. +1
This grammar error. +1
Coincidence that this is also used by an ass? +1
Why did she do that? +1
So? One of them is sister of the Element of
BitchynessGenerosity, why does he prioritize Applejack is unknown. Sure, it may be because she's from the Apple Family and all that, but he doesn't say anything about why he prioritized Applejack to begin with. +1Okay, now that's simply overreacting. Seriously. +1
WHAT THE FUCK!? +1
Scootaloo is dicks to Diamond Tiaras. +1
WHAT THE FUCK 2 = The Return of Darth Vader +1
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They usually say that before they do the..Crusadin'. +1
Sin Tally: 13
Sentence: GET OUTTA HERE! (Ya fuckin' Toadhead!)
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I was originally just going to have the CMC make fun of Diamond Tiara but that didn't really cut it. I don't think getting expelled and disowned is reasonable, but I threw it in there just because. And yeah, they were out of character and the punishments just stacked on top of each other without enough logical reasoning, but I didn't want to have ten thousand words of Diamond Tiara sitting in the principal's office/getting chewed out by her dad.
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Makes sense, and I respect that.
Overall very entertaining! Thumbs up.
At last, they have revenge!
I thought it was an assertiveness seminar, not assholery.
Wow...This...Is a bit TOO harsh.
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Who cares about logical reasoning? Have you seen Flight to the Finish? If only she hadn't run out of stuff to take away from her.
Also, right after the ending of the story, all three get their cutie marks.
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Not at all, dark humor is still humor. I remember a European movie clip, I think it was Swedish, where a punchline was a guy shooting a cow in the head. Might have been a headcheese joke.
3741089 And it only cost all three of them their very souls! :D
3741857 Check the mark on that banner a little more closely ;3
3742948 You should write a sequel to this:
Imagine Sweetie Belle returning to the Boutique after the Crusaders' quest of vengeance. And she finds Rarity crying in her bedroom. What's going on? At first, all Rarity can mutter is "Fluttershy." You know where I'm going with this, don't you?
3743336 You'll have to ask the author of this story, I wouldn't know how the CMC would be able to take on Fluttershy within the context of the show beyond doing things to her and or Angel Bunny which people seem to dislike so much during the whole time Fluttershy had had herself tied up.
No pony makes Sweetie Belle's sister cry.
Lots of things can happen then.
Hmm. I guess you reached your goal here. As mentioned by others the punishments were way too harsh and I actually disliked the CMC in the story. Nobody deserves this amount of cruelty not even DT. But meh. It´s just a story
Okay, I am for punishing DT, but that went to far.
3743358 Oh. Thanks.
Well...I must say if the intention of this fic was to make those who despise Diamond Tiara uncomfortable by unloading such disproportionate retribution to the point they thought this was way too harsh, you succeeded.
Good job.
Well. I hated the CMC in this story. I was expecting them to at least feel remorse at the end. I feel sorry for DT.
Ok, we get it, we all hate DT. but I think this went way to far, even for DT......
And yet they STILL didn't get their cutie marks.
Would anypony want a bully cutie mark?
you are a bastard.
Silver Spoon abandoning her was enough, being suspended she deserved..
but to be cast out by her own father? Have you no heart?
I want to sit in a tree and pick off each of those little blank bitches with a snipers rifle!
FUCK THE CMC!
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I hope each one of them DIE Blank Flanks!
That was indespicabilly pure evil.
The CMC in this story are fucking monsters! But I can also see where they are coming from. Diamond Tiara didn't deserve to be disowned, or expelled from school, but she doesn't deserve to have good friends. She is petty, dishonest, and a downright bully and a bitch. Silver Spoon was right by doing what she did, and I wouldn't have done it any other way.
Rich should have just send her to military school instead of disinheriting her.
However bad I think Diamond Tiara is I think that was kind of harsh.
Could have seen them ruining her life metaphorically, as in getting her in trouble and then she has to sit detention or gets sent to military school.
As it is it's kind of out of character for the CMC to go that far, and not feel any remorse either, I'd say they're just as bad if not worse than Diamond Tiara.
--Sollace
Okay, I can admit I HATE Diamond Tiara and everything she stands for, but the CMC took things WAY too far. I know she bullies them and constantly harrasses them, but I think she should've just gotten a suspension and a lecture from her father. That would've made me happy.
I do like it when things get a bit dark, but this was a bit much. Funny, but... ugh I can't believe I'm saying this... I kinda feel bad for DT.
(But good story none the less,
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5929924 Why feel bad for her at all? She's a bit of a cunt, in show and out. I think she got what... was.........*distracted*.....Is that the Game Theory logo?
6100259 Yes, I will admit she is a cunt, but being disowned by your father and being expelled from school? I understand that she bullies the CMC, (And I love the CMC) but I think she deserves a harsh punishment from Filthy and a suspension. But, I just think it was a bit too much.
Oh, and yes that is the Game Theory logo.