• Published 5th Jan 2014
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Cutie Mark Crusader Life Ruiners - Decimal



After attending an assertiveness seminar by Iron Will, the Cutie Mark Crusaders set out on a mission which they should have done long ago: Give Diamond Tiara the worst day of her life.

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The Best Day Ever

Scootaloo, Sweetie Belle, and Apple Bloom sat in their treehouse. Scootaloo sat at a table and read off the list of activities they could try to get their cutie marks.

"Mountain climbing, juggling, firestarting, stunt performing, doctoring, potion brewing… Darn. We've tried everything on the list at least four times and still haven't gotten our cutie marks!" she complained. "And I can't think of anything new either."

"Maybe we should ask some of the townsponies how they got theirs?" Apple Blooms pointed her hoof out the window, in the general direction of Ponyville.

"Yeah!" Scootaloo said. "We can ask other ponies about their cutie marks. Come on!"

She climbed down the ladder to the treehouse and motioned to the other two Crusaders to hop onto her wagon. As soon as they got on, she sped up to full speed and raced towards the Ponyville market. The ride took only a minute.

"Wait! Didn't the mayor ban you from riding your scooter in the market?" Sweetie Belle said.

"Oh yeah. Darn." Scootaloo hopped off her scooter and was followed by the other two fillies. They walked around the market, searching for ponies who they haven't asked the story of how they got their cutie marks. After walking around for several minutes, they noticed the market seemed especially devoid of ponies today. The only ponies there were the ones who ran the market stalls, and most of them were sleeping or doing other things that weren’t attending to customers.

Scootaloo was the first to complain about the absence of ponies. "This sucks! Where is everypony?"

"Maybe it's some sorta holiday?" Apple Bloom suggested.

"Nah, there's still weather ponies cleaning up the clouds and stuff. See?" Scootaloo pointed her hoof at some pegasi who were pushing clouds away from a large maze made up of plants.

"Don't weather ponies still work on holidays, to make sure it doesn't rain or anything? "

"Well yeah, but what about the ponies at the market stalls? They don't work on holidays."

"But what if somepony wanted to buy something on a holiday? What do you think, Sweetie Belle?" Apple Bloom turned to see the unicorn filly staring at the large plant maze where pegasi were pushing clouds away from.

"I think everypony went to that big plant maze thingy," she said with a deadpan voice. Scootaloo and Apple Bloom turned to look at what Sweetie was looking at, and saw a large crowd of ponies entering the hedge maze.

"Oh yeah. Well, we don't have anything else to do, wanna see what's happening in there?" Apple Bloom said.

The other two Crusaders shrugged, and motioned for Apple Bloom to lead the way. When they arrived, they saw a large banner with a depiction of a large red head with horns. There was a sign on the side:

Assertiveness Seminar, by Iron Will. Three bits entry.

"Um, did anypony bring money?" Sweetie Belle asked.

"Don't worry, I have some bits in my bag." Scootaloo said.

They entered the hedge maze and saw hundreds of ponies standing before a large stage. Large red flags waved around and above the stage. There were two giant hedge minotaurs on the side. The three fillies stood near the right side of the large crowd, where there were a few short ponies in front of them so they could see.

Speakers began to play at the same time that a spotlight shone on the stage, which became covered in smoke. From the smoke, a large figure emerged from behind. A goat walked onto the stage from the side and pulled off a cloak that the figure was wearing to reveal a minotaur.

"What is that thing?" Sweetie asked.

"He looks kinda like a bull. Must be a different type." Apple Bloom replied.

"No way!" Scootaloo said. "The only thing that makes him look like a bull are those two horns. Other than that, he stands on two legs, and has way more muscles in his chest."

"Shh! The show is starting!" Sweetie Belle said.

The three fillies switched their attention to the minotaur, who began his presentation.

"Welcome friends! My name is Iron Will. And today is the first day of your new life! I want to hear you stomp if you're tired of being a pushover."

The crowd of ponies stomped, and momentarily drowned out all other noises. When they stopped, Iron Will continued.

"Stomp if you're tired of being a doormat."

The crowd stomped again, as they did the previous time. Iron Will waited before continuing.

"Stomp if you want to pay nothing for this seminar!"

The crown stomped for the third time, but their enthusiasm soon turned to confusion. After muttering amongst themselves for a few seconds, Iron Will turned his attention to the crowd which silenced them, and spoke again.

"That's no joke friends. Iron Will is so confident that you will be one hundred percent satisfied with Iron Will's assertiveness tecniques, that if you are not one hundred percent satisfied, You. Pay. Nothing." He learned off the stage and almost pressed his eyeball against one pony in the crowd. "But I pity the fool who doubts Iron Will's methods! You don't doubt me, do you?

The stallion who Iron Will had nearly pressed his eyeballs against shook his head. "Uh-uh, no sir!"

Iron Will leaned back to reveal he was being carried by two of his goat assistants. "That my friends, is your first lesson. Don't be shy, look em in the eye."

The ponies exchanged words amongst themselves for a few seconds before Iron Will began his second lesson. "Now, to demonstrate that Iron Will's techniques will work for anypony, I'm going to need a volunteer."

At this, almost everypony raised their hoof. Iron Will paused for a minute, before picking his volunteer.

"You in the back row!"

In response, the crowd split amongst the middle to reveal a yellow pegasus cowering in fear. She opened her eyes after being called on. "Who, me?"

Sweetie Belle noticed who this particular pony was. "Hey look, it's Fluttershy!"

She was quickly shushed by the other two Crusaders who were more interested in what Iron Will was saying.

"Yes you," Iron Will shouted, "Iron Will wants you on stage!"

"Uh, well…"

"NOW!"

"Okay." Fluttershy made her way around the crowd quickly and climbed up the stairs to the stage. As she walked onto the stage, a goat moved to block her. She moved to go around him, only for him to move again to block her.

"Whoa, hes blocking your path!" Iron Will said. "What are you going to do about it?"

"Um, politely walk around him?"

"No."

"Gingerly tiptoe around him?"

"No…"

"Go back home and try again tomorrow?"

"NO! When somepony tries to block, show them that you rock!" Iron Will demonstrated by giving Fluttershy a small shove, causing her to accidentally knock the goat onto the ground.

"Oh! Sorry," she said.

"Don't be sorry! Be assertive! Never apologize when you can criticise." Iron will cleared his throat before following up. "Why don't you watch where you're going!?" he shouted directly in the face of the goat. He then turned to Fluttershy. "Now you try."

"Um… next time, get out of the way before I bump into you cause I totally won't be sorry when I do!"

After she finished, Iron Will held Fluttershy up by the hoof to give his endorsing speech. "You see my friends? If my techniques can work for this shy little pony, then they can work for anypony!"

The crowd cheered at this, including the Cutie Mark Crusaders. On the way out, Scootaloo came up with an idea.

"Hey girls, meet me in front of the schoolhouse tomorrow, before school. I have an idea." She got on her scooter and drove away before they could respond.

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The next day, Scootaloo stood in front of the schoolhouse on her scooter, waiting for the other two girls. She was about to go and find them when she saw them come around the corner. "Finally! School starts in eight minutes, where have you been?"

"Well, I got up an hour before school but Sweetie Belle wasn't there, so I had to go get her," Apple Bloom explained.

"What? I don't usually get up this early. Rarity said that I need to get 'beauty sleep' or something," Sweetie Belle said.

Scootaloo was too busy looking around the area to listen to the two girls' excuses. She stopped when she saw Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon walking towards the schoolhouse. "There they are. Alright, just follow my lead."

She walked up the Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon blissfully, as if they weren’t there are all. When she got close enough, Diamond made her usual taunt.

"Well, if it isn't the blank flanks. Aren't you supposed to be 'crusading' or something? Or did you finally give up?"

"Nah," Scootaloo replied, "but speaking of cutie marks, we never really got what yours meant. I mean, it's some sorta crown, but you're not a queen or anything, so it means that you're somepony who pretends to be important but isn't?"

"What!? I am not pretending to be anything! And this cutie mark symbolizes my superiority and elegance."

Apple Bloom caught on to what Scootaloo was doing, and picked up where she left off. "So you're like those snooty nobles in Canterlot who think they're above everypony else? Wow, you must really be a snob to get a cutie mark for it! You even have somepony who hates you following you around every day pretending to like you and tell you how great you are just because you're rich! Isn't that right, Silver Spoon?"

"No, she likes me because I'm popular and cool, unlike you blank flanks. Right?" Diamond Tiara turned to Silver Spoon, demanding an answer.

"Um… yeah totally cause you're really cool and stuff!" Silver Spoon exclaimed with a smile slightly too wide to be genuine.

"Hey look! She really is sucking up to you! See?" Sweetie Belle said.

Silver Spoon glanced around nervously, searching for a way to escape from the current situation. When she saw none, she made up an excuse. "Well I have to go to… polish my silverware! So um, smell you later, blank flanks." She quickly made her exit in the direction of the schoolhouse.

Scootaloo quickly picked up on the situation. "Actually, your cutie mark only has one color. It's almost as if somepony just stamped it on or drew it and was too lazy to use more than one color."

"It does look kind of fake," Apple Bloom added.

"It's not fake! I got it when my dad gave me my tiara," Diamond said.

"Hmm, sounds like denial. Wouldn't you agree, girls?" Scootaloo asked. The two other Crusaders nodded their head in approval at the accusation and looked disappointedly at Diamond Tiara. "In fact, you're probably just picking on us because you're actually a blank flank!"

"Whatever. It's real and everypony knows it."

The school bell rang, and Diamond used this as an opportunity to escape. However, the Cutie Mark Crusaders stayed behind.

"I know what we should do!" Sweetie Belle said. "When we go inside the schoolhouse, follow behind me and do what I'm doing." Scootaloo and Apple Bloom looked at each other and shugged, and followed Sweetie Belle to the schoolhouse.

When they entered, Diamond Tiara was sitting at a desk with a deep frown on her face. Silver Spoon sat one row behind her, but looked more nervous than upset.

Sweetie Belle immediately burst into tears and wailed. The other two girls followed her example, but were unable to produce the same results. Cheerilee turned her attention towards them and fortunately, didn't notice the horrible acting of Apple Bloom and Scootaloo.

"What's wrong, girls? What happened?" Cheerilee said, with concern in her voice.

"It was… Diamond… Tiara…" Sweetie Belle took a second in between to sniff before continuing, "she was making fun of us for not having cutie marks! And then she said we're freaks for not having them and we were gonna be failures!" At the end of the sentence, Sweetie Belle broke down into tears and rolled on the ground, wallowing in her own misery.

Cheerilee gasped and gave a harsh stare to Diamond Tiara who tried to back into her seat.

"Diamond Tiara, is this true? Did you make fun of them for not having cutie marks?"

"No! They're just being stupid and stuff and…" she trailed off when she noticed Cheerilee was now looking at somepony behind her.

"Yes, Miss Cheerilee, she was. I saw her doing it today, and before that. She's been doing this for years." Diamond Tiara turned to see who said that. When she saw it was Silver Spoon, her face turned into one of shock, then betrayal, then anger. However, she wasn't going to take such accusations without a fight.

"No I didn't! She's lying! I was just asking them about it, then they made up a story about me making fun of them!"

Cheerilee looked once again at Diamond Tiara with a disappointed expression. "Considering she's your best friend, I don't think she'd be making up stories about you. As a matter of fact," she paused a moment to regain her posture, "I am expelling you, Diamond Tiara, from the Ponyville Schoolhouse, for repeated bullying and harassment."

Unbeknownst to Cheerilee, the Cutie Mark Crusaders stuck out their tongue at Diamond Tiara.

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"You what!?" Filthy Rich pounded his hoof on the table and glared at his daughter.

"I was… expelled. But it’s not my fault! Those stupid blank flanks made up a story about me picking on them, and then they pretended to cry to get the teacher mad at me and-" She explained before being cut off her by her father.

"I did not raise my daughter to be like this. I can't believe that you would stoop as low as picking on somepony for not finding their cutie marks. But getting expelled from school? This is unacceptable."

"I was just joking, but they took it too hard. They were the ones who were a big crybaby and made me get expelled."

"No, Diamond Tiara. I've heard about those three fillies before and they might cause a bit of trouble, but they aren't crybabies and they certainly aren't liars. One of them is the sister of the Element of Honesty.

"You have disgraced the entire Rich family. I wanted you to grow up to be wealthy, but not a spoiled brat. Not only are you a spoiled brat, but you're picking on other ponies as well.

"Pack your things. I don't want to see you around here anymore." Filthy Rich got up from the chair and walked away, leaving Diamond Tiara at the table.

"But I-"

"No buts, young lady. You've really done it this time."

Hanging her head in shame, Diamond Tiara walked up to her room and grabbed her things and shoved them into a bag. She took several pieces of jewellery as well as pictures of her family members, but decided to leave out ones of her father.

She walked downstairs carrying the bag on her back, and walked out the door. Waiting outside were none other than Apple Bloom, Sweetie Belle, and Scootaloo.

"What do you want?" Diamond grumbled.

"Oh, nothing. We were just passing by, but we heard your dad yelling at you." Apple Bloom said innocently.

"But it looks like your dad finally kicked you out! I'm really proud of him." Sweetie Belle added.

Diamond Tiara stomped her hoof on the ground. "You did this! You ruined my life! You made Silver Spoon leave me, you made me get expelled from school, and you made my dad disown me!"

"You're welcome. Now you won't be a spoiled brat anymore, and you can be a miserable not spoiled brat!" Scootaloo said.

"Hmm, I thought he'd take away your tiara, considerin' he was the one to give it to you," Apple Bloom said, as she picked up the tiara from Diamond's head.

"Hey! Give that back!"

Apple Bloom threw the tiara to Sweetie Belle, who threw it to Scootaloo. All the while, Diamond Tiara desperately chased it. When Scootaloo tried to throw it back to Apple Bloom, she overshot and it landed on the ground. Seeing the opportunity, Diamond ran over to it and pounced. However, a mouse took the tiara and ran back into a hiding hole in the side of the house.

Diamond Tiara could only stare at the wall with her jaw hanging. After several seconds, Sweetie Belle started.

"Well now that your tiara is gone, you won't have any more delusions of being better than anypony else. Now you're just a poor foal who doesn't have a home. Maybe it'll help you realize what a failure you really are," she said cheerfully, all the while having a genuine smile on her face. "Now you'll be able to work a hard labor job and barely get the bits the scrape by, and you'll be a miserable wreck. Aren't you glad this happened? You'll finally get in touch with your true destiny, and your worthlessness won't be masked by your family wealth or your popularity in school!"

When she finished talking, she waited several seconds for a response. Diamond Tiara only gave a quiet sniff, then another. When she turned around, they could see tears rolling down her cheeks. In complete contrast to this, the Cutie Mark Crusaders had wide smiles on their faces as they watched.

After giving a few more sniffs, Diamond Tiara picked up the bag and threw it onto her back, before walking away with her head low and ears drooped.

Once Scootaloo was sure that she wasn't coming back, she released her happiness. "That. Felt. Awesome!" Apple Bloom and Sweetie Belle nodded in agreement. The three fillies jumped in the air and gave each other a high hoof.

"CUTIE MARK CRUSADER LIFE RUINERS, YAY!"

Comments ( 58 )

After that the CMC would get the cutie marks they deserved as well.

I was waiting for a story like this! I love it!

Ha, ridiculous. Filthy is least successful parent.

This is brilliant. Many cheers and one like to you.

The whole time I was reading this, all I was thinking was...

Great job on this one, but it seems a little TOO mean-spirited for the CMC. But it still makes me smile that DT is finally getting her comeuppance.

Hm... as cathartic as that ought to have felt, it just doesn't quite work for me.

I know Diamond Tiara is a jerk and all, but there's only so much that being a mild jerk deserves. The CMC managed to be a hundred times worse than Diamond Tiara ever had been in one day.

So, yeah, I'm depressed... :fluttershysad:

Now I enjoyed that! Consider it liked and faved, good sir.

^~^ I really liked this.
And to Filthy Rich: YOU HAVE FAILED

*sing-song voice* "I needed this"

The feelings... I... don't know how to feel. :rainbowhuh:

Diamond Tiara's punishments from Mrs. Cheerilee and Filthy Rich seem a "bit" too harsh. Of course they could've happened, but not from one mere incident. Great story, needs more fill-in details.

3738718 In taking extreme pleasures from inflicting and relishing in other ponies pain? Yup, a well earned cutie mark indeed.


3738829 So you've waited this whole time to see a story where Sweetie Belle, Apple Bloom, and Scootaloo become heartless villains, and even get Silver Spoon to betray Diamond Tiara for no good reason and thus revealing what a disgusting two-faced monster she's really been this whole time, just to get Diamond Tiara in trouble with Cheerilee? Who ends up kicking Diamond out of school, DT's father disowning her, and the cutie mark crusaders actually relishing every agonizing moment Diamond suffers as they follow her around to ensure they don't miss a beat of Diamond's suffering?

I'm honestly surprised they left out the scene with Diamond Tiara hanging herself with a noose on a tree branch that overlooks the town she's no longer welcomed in with the CMC having been actually helping her get the supplies she needed to get things ready for the suicide as they sat on their chairs and cheered Diamond to get on with it as they stuffed themselves with popcorn, making cracks on Diamond as she makes sickening noises and gurgles the CMC would make fun of and do silly imitations of Diamond Tiara's barely audible last breaths and muffled cries of not wanting to die as her neck finally gives way and lets that snapping sound go through that quiets the CMC...

... Who then burst into a ruckus cheer!

Maybe we can see that bonus chapter later on. I'm sure you must be salivating at the very thought of this "Director's Cut".

@Author: Cheers. I've read many a story with CMC, and while this isn't the worst they've done by far, it's certainly ended up being the worst natured CMC I've ever read, and damn it I read that CMC fic with Sweetie Belle taunting Diamond with a knife as they hunted her down in her own home. These CMC even make the Mafia ones seem tame.

I didn't think it was possible to dislike the CMC. While Silver Spoon's part was expected, as per the usual CMC focused stories go, the CMC going to these lengths and LOVING all that stuff? Doing that to the CMC is worst than what they did to Diamond. Especially given the context of her just having a normal, relaxing day. One typical remark to their crusading ends up leading to the worst day of her life.






This story was BRILLIANT!

Seriously, it's on a level of brilliance I can't even express. Bravo author, bravo. I'm not even kidding. You really achieved your goal here. The comments alone prove that. Bravo.

3739257 ditto... I'm not sure what to make of this exactly... Glad they stood up for themselves but... I'm also a bit depressed.

Is this supposed to be funny? It's fine to get "revenge" and stuff, like in stories with Trixie teasing or playing around with Twilight. But...seriously? Just...no. Diamond Tiara gets enough hate and abuse as it is, and taking the Crusaders out-of-character like this just for a laugh at a misunderstood antagonist's expense is wrong. Really hope you feel proud of yourself. What's next, huh? You going to make Rarity ruin Suri's life? Or maybe Rainbow Dash ruins Lightning Dust's? Or, heck, how about Luna gets back at Celestia? :facehoof:

Honestly, Diamond Tiara does not deserve that harsh of a punishment. I mean, getting disowned because she got expelled? That seems a bit extreme. Okay, DT is a bully, but the CMC are JERKS in this story. They totally ruined DT's life, and laugh as she walks out of town with NOWHERE to go. You must be SO proud of yourself.

Excuse me while I rage.
:flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage:

3739898 Yeah. I dislike suffering in general, especially when it happens to young people.

Well, the grammar was good.

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Do you see a comedy tag up there, dumbass?

I can't help it I was laughing so hard through this story I think I gave myself a hernia.... Does that make me a bad person.

PS. I don't care about your negativity, if you hate it, click on deslike and leave. Have a good day! =D

Everything Wrong with CUTIE MARK CRUSADER LIFE RUINERS, YAY!
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"Maybe we should ask some of the townsponies how they got theirs?" Apple Blooms pointed her hoof out the window, in the general direction of Ponyville.

"Yeah!" Scootaloo said. "We can ask other ponies about their cutie marks. Come on!"

Didn't they do that before? Sure, it was the Mane 6, but they could choose any(pony) else. So why are they repeating themselfs? +1

"Oh yeah. Well, we don't have anything else to do, wanna see what's happening in there?" Apple Bloom said.

The other two Crusaders shrugged, and motioned for Apple Bloom to lead the way. When they arrived, they saw a large banner with a depiction of a large red head with horns. There was a sign on the side:

They could've asked the ponies at the town market, after all, they had nothing to do. +1
Did they just forget their goal out from scratch, and none of them mentioned it? (Now, i know this once is probably forced, so i'll leave it as it is.)

"Don't worry, I have some bits in my bag." Scootaloo said.

This bag wasn't mentioned previously. +1

In response, the crowd split amongst the middle to reveal a yellow pegasus cowering in fear. She opened her eyes after being called on. "Who, me?"

Im going to assume that this fic is played at the same time at Putting the Hoof Down because Fluttershy is there, however, you do not mention it anywhere (Not even on this fic's cape) So..or this is playing at the same time, or Fluttershy is just PLAIN STUPID and is back there. +1

"Don't be sorry! By assertive!

This grammar error. +1

So um, smell you later, blank flanks."

Coincidence that this is also used by an ass? +1

"Yes, Miss Cheerilee, she was. I saw her doing it today, and before that. She's been doing this for years." Diamond Tiara turned to see who said that. When she saw it was Silver Spoon, her face turned into one of shock, then betrayal, then anger. However, she wasn't going to take such accusations without a fight.

Why did she do that? +1

"No, Diamond Tiara. I've heard about those three fillies before and they might cause a bit of trouble, but they aren't crybabies and they certainly aren't liars. One of them is the sister of the Element of Honesty.

So? One of them is sister of the Element of Bitchyness Generosity, why does he prioritize Applejack is unknown. Sure, it may be because she's from the Apple Family and all that, but he doesn't say anything about why he prioritized Applejack to begin with. +1

"Pack your things. I don't want to see you around here anymore." Filthy Rich got up from the chair and walked away, leaving Diamond Tiara at the table.

Okay, now that's simply overreacting. Seriously. +1

"Oh, nothing. We were just passing by, but we heard your dad yelling at you." Apple Bloom said innocently.

"But it looks like your dad finally kicked you out! I'm really proud of him." Sweetie Belle added.

WHAT THE FUCK!? +1

"You're welcome. Now you won't be a spoiled brat anymore, and you can be a miserable not spoiled brat!" Scootaloo said.

Scootaloo is dicks to Diamond Tiaras. +1

"Well now that your tiara is gone, you won't have any more delusions of being better than anypony else. Now you're just a poor foal who doesn't have a home. Maybe it'll help you realize what a failure you really are," she said cheerfully, all the while having a genuine smile on her face. "Now you'll be able to work a hard labor job and barely get the bits the scrape by, and you'll be a miserable wreck. Aren't you glad this happened? You'll finally get in touch with your true destiny, and your worthlessness won't be masked by your family wealth or your popularity in school!"

WHAT THE FUCK 2 = The Return of Darth Vader +1

Once Scootaloo was sure that she wasn't coming back, she released her happiness. "That. Felt. Awesome!" Apple Bloom and Sweetie Belle nodded in agreement. The three fillies jumped in the air and gave each other a high hoof.

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"CUTIE MARK CRUSADER LIFE RUINERS, YAY!"

They usually say that before they do the..Crusadin'. +1

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I was originally just going to have the CMC make fun of Diamond Tiara but that didn't really cut it. I don't think getting expelled and disowned is reasonable, but I threw it in there just because. And yeah, they were out of character and the punishments just stacked on top of each other without enough logical reasoning, but I didn't want to have ten thousand words of Diamond Tiara sitting in the principal's office/getting chewed out by her dad.

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Makes sense, and I respect that. :pinkiesmile:
Overall very entertaining! Thumbs up. :yay:

At last, they have revenge!

I thought it was an assertiveness seminar, not assholery.

Wow...This...Is a bit TOO harsh.

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Who cares about logical reasoning? Have you seen Flight to the Finish? If only she hadn't run out of stuff to take away from her.

Also, right after the ending of the story, all three get their cutie marks.

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Not at all, dark humor is still humor. I remember a European movie clip, I think it was Swedish, where a punchline was a guy shooting a cow in the head. Might have been a headcheese joke.:trollestia:

3741089 And it only cost all three of them their very souls! :D

3741857 Check the mark on that banner a little more closely ;3

3742948 You should write a sequel to this:
Imagine Sweetie Belle returning to the Boutique after the Crusaders' quest of vengeance. And she finds Rarity crying in her bedroom. What's going on? At first, all Rarity can mutter is "Fluttershy." You know where I'm going with this, don't you? :raritywink:

3743336 You'll have to ask the author of this story, I wouldn't know how the CMC would be able to take on Fluttershy within the context of the show beyond doing things to her and or Angel Bunny which people seem to dislike so much during the whole time Fluttershy had had herself tied up.

No pony makes Sweetie Belle's sister cry.

Lots of things can happen then.

Hmm. I guess you reached your goal here. As mentioned by others the punishments were way too harsh and I actually disliked the CMC in the story. Nobody deserves this amount of cruelty not even DT. But meh. It´s just a story :twilightsmile:

Okay, I am for punishing DT, but that went to far.

Well...I must say if the intention of this fic was to make those who despise Diamond Tiara uncomfortable by unloading such disproportionate retribution to the point they thought this was way too harsh, you succeeded. :rainbowderp: Good job.

Well. I hated the CMC in this story. I was expecting them to at least feel remorse at the end. I feel sorry for DT.

Ok, we get it, we all hate DT. but I think this went way to far, even for DT......

And yet they STILL didn't get their cutie marks.

Comment posted by TheAmazingPeanuts deleted Jan 7th, 2014

Would anypony want a bully cutie mark?

you are a bastard.

Silver Spoon abandoning her was enough, being suspended she deserved..

but to be cast out by her own father? Have you no heart?:applecry::fluttercry::fluttershbad::fluttershyouch::pinkiesad2::raritycry::raritydespair:

I want to sit in a tree and pick off each of those little blank bitches with a snipers rifle!:flutterrage::pinkiecrazy:

FUCK THE CMC!

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I hope each one of them DIE Blank Flanks!:twilightangry2:

That was indespicabilly pure evil.

The CMC in this story are fucking monsters! But I can also see where they are coming from. Diamond Tiara didn't deserve to be disowned, or expelled from school, but she doesn't deserve to have good friends. She is petty, dishonest, and a downright bully and a bitch. Silver Spoon was right by doing what she did, and I wouldn't have done it any other way. :twilightsmile:

:yay: DT's finally been punished!

Rich should have just send her to military school instead of disinheriting her.

However bad I think Diamond Tiara is I think that was kind of harsh.
Could have seen them ruining her life metaphorically, as in getting her in trouble and then she has to sit detention or gets sent to military school.

As it is it's kind of out of character for the CMC to go that far, and not feel any remorse either, I'd say they're just as bad if not worse than Diamond Tiara.

--Sollace

Okay, I can admit I HATE Diamond Tiara and everything she stands for, but the CMC took things WAY too far. I know she bullies them and constantly harrasses them, but I think she should've just gotten a suspension and a lecture from her father. That would've made me happy.
I do like it when things get a bit dark, but this was a bit much. Funny, but... ugh I can't believe I'm saying this... I kinda feel bad for DT.

(But good story none the less, :pinkiehappy:)

5929924 Why feel bad for her at all? She's a bit of a cunt, in show and out. I think she got what... was.........*distracted*.....Is that the Game Theory logo?

6100259 Yes, I will admit she is a cunt, but being disowned by your father and being expelled from school? I understand that she bullies the CMC, (And I love the CMC) but I think she deserves a harsh punishment from Filthy and a suspension. But, I just think it was a bit too much. :applejackunsure:

Oh, and yes that is the Game Theory logo. :pinkiehappy:

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