The Apple Blooms

Apple Bloom feels down about not having a cutie mark yet. Applejack comforts her with an explanation of the meaning of her name.

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Dragonis999

Dragonis999 #1 · Jan 7th, 2014 · · ·

Sweet and short I like it can't wait to see more

NecroLeprechaun

NecroLeprechaun #2 · Jan 7th, 2014 · · ·

This is cute. I've wondered what food applejack was since I watched the first episode where the apple family gives Twilight their respective foods. (I always assumed it was some sort of pastry) Have my like and fav and I'll be watching.

WhitewolfStormrunner

WhitewolfStormrunner #3 · Jan 7th, 2014 · · ·

An excellent beginning to what looks to be a great story. Can't wait for more!

I especially liked learning about the Apple family names. I'll have to remember that for later on, maybe for use in one of my own fics.

I only have one slight quibble with it though, and that's the way you spell AJ's name. "Applejack" is one word (like the liquor: Applejack), not two, like you've spelled it: Apple Jack.

Just tossing that in, and like I said, it's a minor quibble. You're not the first author to do that, and I'm sure that you won't be the last.

Grey Faerie

Grey Faerie #4 · Jan 7th, 2014 · · ·

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I think that was just my computer putting her name that way. I'll have to go back and change it.

It was interesting to see that in cases of Apple Bloom and Applejack, who's names don't have the typical foretelling of their talent, their names do match who they are.

WhitewolfStormrunner

WhitewolfStormrunner #5 · Jan 7th, 2014 · · ·

3751237 Ah, I see. Automatic spelling correction, I'm guessing. That stinks, doesn't it? I mean, it's cool most of the time, but when you want it to not auto-correct, it's a big pain.