An amatuer writer who loves Pinkie Pie and Discord.
A continuation after 'Three's a Crowd', Fluttershy and Pinkie stay to take care of the sick Discord. Unfortunately, Fluttershy has to leave to get more medical supplies. That leaves Discord to be watched by an enthusiastic Pinkie Pie. It doesn't go as bad as both would have thought.
Rate Teen for one or two questionable jokes.
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A wonderful story Grey!
Unfortunately I do have one minor complaint...
"In a few days, it'll form a sentimental rock like granite."
I believe you meant sedimental, and as a geology major I feel that I should mention that granite is a metamorphic rock.
Sorry Pinkie and Grey, nothing personal. But seriously it is a wonderful story and touching interaction with decent bantering from Discord and Pinkie.
Edit: Just read this back. Feel like a bit of an arse stating that. Sorry if I came across as a jerk.
I don't think that's a thing.
Also, there's a whole bunch of missing contractions, like when you put did instead of didn't.
Otherwise, this is a pretty cute story.
So here's how I feel:
Nice and fluffy; a few errors in grammar, but it's overall a pretty good thing. Definitely going in my faves
Anyway, I wouldn't mind an extention on this story
I was waiting for a fic with this theme since ever
...well, less than a week, but at any case, thank you very much. 
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I don't know anything about rocks and couldn't figure out how to spell, sedimental. I had thought I got it right. I'll go back and fix it. Thanks!
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In checkers, once you get over to the over side of the board, you can flip the piece over to be come a king. Also, I think I fix all by 'did' errors. Thanks for pointing that out.
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I thought they were playing chess.
Oh! Sorry.
I loved it!
...Sequel, please?
This sounds really good! I might actually read this later! also, if anyone is a fan of shipping fics I made a prologue to a Chrysalis x Sombra that i think you people might enjoy!
This story made my day... Seriously... When I watched the new Discord epi... I seriously thought that ALL of the DiscoLight shippers would surface(like what happened to the FlutterCord shippers in Keep Calm and Flutter On)... But so far I'm seeing a lot more DisPie out of this than I thought! ANd this was just CUUUUUUUUUUTE!!!!
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Thank you! I was hoping this would help make a lot of the DiscoPie shippers feel better about that episode.
Ummm, is it just me, or did you seem to confuse when and went?
Overall good story though.
What did you mean to say?
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Great catch. I fixed the problems you found.
3913757 No problem, I'm glad to help.
You wouldn't mind readimg my story, Prevailing Shadows, would you? I'd appreciate it.
That's not a very good way to say goodbye....
This was a very enjoyable read, and it doubled as an interesting take on Pinkie's past. Well done!
You also have turned me into a discopie shipper with this story5938741
Good, good, let the shipping over take you.
Love me some Discopie. It's a ship with so much potential.