An amatuer writer who loves Pinkie Pie and Discord.
Wait! What!?
After a chance meeting, Rarity finds out about Discord's amazing ability to put patterns together. Plaid and polka dots? He can do it. Now the King of Pizazz has the Queen of Drama bugging him morning, noon, and night to teach her his skill. Obliviously, he's not going down without a fight.
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Well, for one thing, I really like the dialogue you've written for your characters. It does a really nice in setting mood and tone, and seems to be pretty well in character. One thing you could work on, however, is your grammar and punctuation rules. Start with checking for commas, apostrophes, and ellipses that you've misused or should've used in several places. It can be a real turn off to many readers to read a work that wasn't combed over for grammatical mistakes.
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Just one of those annoying things. 
Thank you. I work hard to try to stay in character.
I don't often have an extra set of eyes to look over the story so any mistakes are the ones I couldn't find myself.
If you want to look over another story, there's Bubble Buddy. It's currently my 'best' story on level of writing.
*Spittake*
Wh-what?!