• Member Since 27th Mar, 2013
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Grey Faerie


An amatuer writer who loves Pinkie Pie and Discord.

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Just for a little bit. That's what Pinkie had said when she asked Discord to watch the bakery and the twins for her. Well, a little bit has just gone out the window. Discord has no idea what a life-changing experience he's about to go through.
A light-hearted comedy with a little retrospective thrown in about what happens to Discord when he has to be responsible.
Picture from Mickeymonster.

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 26 )

I don't like the way that 'help' is in inverted commas. Still, anything with Discord in it gets my fave.

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Would it be better if I italic the word help?

2340113 Sorry, bit of a misunderstanding. It's no that there's an error in the way it is presented, but it's the slightly uneasy notion that Twilight and co. aren't there to help Discord, but rather stonerfy him at the drop of a hat.

hehehehe.....'stonerfy'

Anyway, sorry for any confusion! :twilightsmile: (+ have a mustache on me :moustache:)

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Thanks for the mustache. But yeah, her help isn't going to be what he would hope it would be. Unfortunately, you're going to have wait until I'm done with the next chapter to see what she does.

Dry first, wet next. That is how all recipes are made.

Pinkie, someones I worry about how effective you are baking. :unsuresweetie: I mean, there was that time you tried to ... bake(?) a portal to respawn your already living parents, and there is no way that song of yours really makes cupcakes. Now this?

When Discord is more sane than that, there is an issue. Very big. :ajbemused:

I bet Discord feels useless as the Living embodiement of chaos since the Elements of "Harmony" seem to be doing just a bang up job of causing chaos themselves.:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

Poor Discord... Maybe THIS is why Celestia decided to give him another chance... Hoping that he'll finally see chaos in a light he doesn't really like.

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Well, first of all is that not all recipes ask you to put all the wet ingredients together separate from the dry. I've come across some recipes that ask you to add a wet ingredient then a dry then a wet. I was trying to portray a sense that Pinkie knew how to perfect a recipe or at least make it a little better. Second is that I don't think friendship is witchcraft comes into play when debating over Pinkie Pie's baking. . :rainbowlaugh: She has been taught well by the Cakes. I'm confident Pinkie can cook no matter how absurd it may sound at the time. :twilightsmile: Thanks for the comment. Sorry to have confused you and yes I am a fan of friendship is witchcraft too. :pinkiehappy:

"Great! First I need you make the batter

Proof read your storys around twice so you dont miss anything, even if you have a editor. Great story through, remeber that your using the god of chaos, so try and use him to spice things up. :)

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Haha, great catch! I swear, you can read something three times over with an editor and still miss things. :derpyderp1: Thanks for the comment and don't worry, while he maybe a little OOC at times Discord still is chaos incarnate. I've just got to get a few things out of the way and then we can have some real fun. :pinkiehappy:

and they call him the embodiment of chaos!? XD

yes! i liked this so far! hope to see more! X3
and omg pinkie totally got what Discord was thinking!
when he goes back to cnaterlot i tihnk hes going to be needing to be fixed XD

I could totally imagine this in an episode! :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

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Thank you, that means a lot.

nice, i hope to see a part 2 to this X3

A nice finish, I think. It rounds itself off nice and sweet.

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My other story, With Extra Frosting on Top, is a sort of sequel to this one. It mentions in one part about Discord helping out in the bakery. But, while this is more Discord centric, the other is more Pinkie centric.

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Haha, it's very pinkieXdiscord actually. It's just from the point of view of Pinkie.

2348053>>2494032 while yes he is the embodiment of chaos i believe that since he is he has no control over his powers so his powers cause chaos around him when he isn't using them so it's really not his or the mane six's fault

i've read all your stories and have loved them all you have just earned yourself another follower!!:pinkiesmile:

AJ, Rainbow, GO HOME!!:rainbowhuh::applejackconfused:
Twily, YOU HAVE WINGS FOR A REASON!:twilightblush:
Rarity, Quit trying to dress up the babies, they'll spit up on them anyway!:raritycry:
And Fluttershy, you can stay, just don't use the stare on the twins. :yay:

Leaving Applejack and Rainbow Dash alone was perhaps the worst decision made here.

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