A simple plot, but I know one day, good things are coming our way.
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Scootaloo goes to foalsit the Cake twins after Pinkie Pie mysteriously disappears. There is nothing but silence in the house; the perfect scenario to get some good reading done. Except for the fact that there is a giant batpony on the loose.
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Scootaloo became a snack
this story scared the living SHIT OUT OF ME
3705111 Dude, really? Awesome! Well, it means I did my job
3705119 When are You gonna finish Til Kingdom come?
3705228 Lol. People ask me that constantly. To be honest, I'm being patient with that one, because it has to be executed perfectly. I'm constantly writing down the ideas and changing it as I go along, but I'm not going to post any new chapters until I'm happy with it. I'd rather rush it than post something crap.
Maybe next month. We'll see. And that's just for a new chapter. I'm not expecting to finish any time soon because I want it to be pretty long.
I will mention that it should be stalking, not stocking.
3705242 Oh, you're right. Thanks.
No problem.
Other than that, nicely done, nicely creepy!
3705280 Thank you ^.^
Reminds me a bit of the Angel SCP I heard Cry read a while back. Two Creepypasta, he called it. I find it a lil bit strange that literally like all my bros here are getting into darkfics and stuff as soon as I am, but that's cool. Bring more, sonnyboy who is older than me, bring more
3705722 I'm not really getting into it, I must say. I just wanted to try it out. I'm also making a superhero story to widen my scope, but that one is going to be amazing and really long.
3705740 Like Avengers amazing? Or The Dark Knight amazing? It'll be somewhere between those two tiers of awesome.
And I just found it interesting that as soon as I start a non-pony grimdark and upload one that is pony that you publish one as well.
3705856 That is interesting. Kind of like a mix between The Dark Knight, and the new Spider-Man movie. Very deep, but based off of Spike going on his own adventure in an enchanted comic book, where he has to finish the story to get out, but there are two crazy twists in it. Might not be done for a while, though. I want to upload it when I'm finished.
3705894 Haha, I know that feel. I'm doing a Fallout (my friend finally got it so I can "borrow" it from her) crossover for another fandom that I'm only uploading when it's done because I don't want to leave it at a cliffhanger for a year like with a certain fanfic I've written. Also, I plan on using a French-Canadian character and I should probably know
more than the first semester of French II for.t
3705977 Nice :D
3705228 You'll be happy to know that a new chapter is in the works and is going very well so far
Well I'm officially terrified of a tapping on windows now
3713197 YAYYY
3713461 Always watch your back, because you are never truly alone. Mwahahaha!
Thanks for reading!
I have to say, there were a bit too much horror movie clichés for my taste to legitametly scare me (The ringing phone for instance).
Also regarding the author's note: I feel like the radio news at the end destroys more unambiguity than it creates.
3717197 I guess so, but I kind of wanted it to be a stereotypical story of this type. Scary stories aren't really original nowadays.
Good story first time someone tried to make a scary flutterbat thing besides red juice
Terrifying story......
For a story that is intended as a story that is told by kids to younger kids, this is very scary!
You nailed the horror atmosphere well!
I hope Scoots' isn't the victim.....
3717214
It's all about the atmosphere, not so much the idea.
3801217 Thank you! When A Stranger Calls is quite scary but started off as a story kids would tell each other :)
Maybe we Canadians are just weird.
3713461 Tap, Tap, Tap
Nicely done. Loved the atmospheric elements
3822205 Thanks
Oooooo! Creepy! Love it though!
5101035 Glad to hear
Creepy and cool, love it!
5787153
Yay