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Tebbzy7


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This story is a sequel to My Little Pony The Creation of New Equestria.


in a uncertain world where nothing is what it seens to be. Nyx and her friends Sweetie Belle and Apple bloom start to work at Luna's summer camp.

This story use Nyx is from Past Sins by Pen Stroke-"This story is an unofficial sequel/side-story to Past Sins by Pen Stroke"

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 21 )

Make more chapters please

They fight and defeat them but they are back and it is our turn to take them down.”

fought, defeated.

Luna we should get back to Canterlot night court all be a hand full tonight.

You forgot a comma, could

Twilight look around and turned off the lights and went to bed also.

looked

WHY CANT I SEE CHAPTER 6

good story so fare pleas :fluttershysad: keep going or I will be :fluttercry:

i really :heart::heart::heart:LOVE:heart::heart::heart: this story hope to read more soon:twilightsmile:

more pleas or get a thousand of theses :fluttershysad: :fluttershysad: :fluttershysad:

love it hope to read more soon:twilightsmile::pinkiehappy::raritystarry: and also is Shooting Star now Crystal dad:rainbowhuh:

4864591 You can say Shooting Star is Crystal's father. But Twilight will be a big part of her life. Crystal is a filly growing up she needs a female presence in her life. Like Nyx needs a male presence in her life, in the form of Shooting Star.

4865273 :rainbowhuh: wait did you just give me a BIG hint that twilight and shooting star are going to go out with each other :rainbowderp::twilightoops: .......SWEET:pinkiehappy:

Comment posted by Tebbzy7 deleted Aug 18th, 2014

4867008 i will say i am not saying if they will date. :trollestia:

I did not think you would take me really and get a firkin editor. :heart: :heart: :heart: :fluttershysad:

4868716 okay thank you for letting me know:twilightsmile: also i really enjoyed chapter 9 hope to read more soon:twilightsmile:

Comment posted by Tebbzy7 deleted Aug 21st, 2014

i really enjoyed the story:twilightsmile:

The kitchen stuff was running back and forth between the kitchen and the breakfast bar. Shooting Star when he can make the time he ate with the stuff. He said “we are not better than the stuff. And eating with them is a sign of that.” And Twilight agreed with that and enjoyed eating with the stuff because she still doesn’t see herself as a princess.

It's spelled staff

“I not going home alone I have all the guards here that are undercover. Like that one over there.”

“I wouldn’t really call them undercover, because a cloak over armor isn’t a disguise.”

I would, because they are under a cover.:trollestia:

Dear Pinkie,


I have received shocking reports from parents about Sunset Punch. That she is neglectful of the camper and verbally abusive. This isn’t the first time she been like that with campers. I can’t have this in my camp. Could you dismiss her for me? On a positive note I have heard nothing but good things about the rest of you. I was a little worry how everypony would act toward Nyx, but I am happy to say everypony in her cabin write glowing reports home about her. About Sunset’s position have Perry or Nyx take it. I will be happy with either one taking the advanced magic classes. Thank you for taking care of this matter for me.


Luna

this is way to convient DO BETTER

YOU READ THE BOXCAR CHILDREN TOO?!!

Benny is my favorite!

Applejack has issues letting go of her sister. I am glad she isn't a unicorn or she probably try some sort age spell to keep her sister little forever.

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