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Brony since 2011, and huge fan of FOE. Also founder of Suicide prevention group.
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In honor of Heartswarming Eve I give you a story as close to happy as one can get in the watses of Equestria. Please enjoy.
3680778- To be honest this just came to me, and as it came to me I just typed what came to mind, you do have to admit that it actually has a happy ending at least,
A little short but great for my group, may I add it.
Whoa whoa its convent that the name in this is razorblade
That was a nice(?) little story.
One Shot Reviews has read and graded.
Aside from the massive paragraph spacing, this story is a good read. There are many Fallout Equestria stories with there own characters and back stories. This rendition is cute. Thats about it. Cute. The plot was there but seemed as though it were made up as it went along. Characters could have had a little more depth... even Razorblade seemed a little flat.Grammar flaws were rare but very noticible when found. Scenery was given but described poorly. It's easy to read this and begin thinking of other things as you mindlessly skim over. This story is just... missing something.
Overall Grade: 67%
GOOD
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Possibly the shortest complete plot iv ever read...
Well now.
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Damn. And here I thought my idea was original
, that'll teach me to actually get 'round to writing it next time.
7346769 lol, what was your idea and I'm sorry it just came to me so I typed it. This is the first part of an on going series I am hoping to revive soon I hope.
7347201 My idea was to take a Fo:E raider and do my best to show both how far they'd fallen, how awful they were, and hopefully redeem them overthe course of the story, starting with the simple act of saving a child. The idea came to me when I read one of Kkhat's blogs on raiders (this one I think). The similarities are kinda'... eerie
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Okay so,
I've read this story years ago. And you know what?
It stuck.
It's still there, I can still feel it sometimes.
And when I think of that sad foal who opened her heartswarming present that she got from her dead raped mother to find that sweater?
That broke my heart.
It's still breaking my heart whenever I read it.
Because I just know that there's nothing, nothing at all that will make it the same or better again. Just thinking of that foal hugging the sweater.. it's like a knife twisting in my chest each time and here I am, reading through it again just to refresh the wound.
Damn you, it's been years and it still hurts!