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Loss

IN HONOR OF JEFF TALOR; MY BEST FRIEND

What do you do when someone who has helped you grow in life suddenly just isn't there anymore? When one second you are happy and looking forward to a great new year, what happens when you get the call that changes your life...forever?

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Toffee Bean #1 · Dec 31st, 2013 · · ·

This might help.

SirRage

SirRage #2 · Dec 31st, 2013 · 2 · ·

I'm really sorry to hear about your loss.

I would like to offer some constructive feedback if you don’t mind. From a story perspective it would be nice if you didn't so much first person. It was hard for me to tell who ‘I’ was suppose to be most of the time. I suppose ‘I’ was Dash but I wasn’t sure. There were a few other things I saw too but this was the most distracting thing I saw.

Still its nice you did this for your friend.

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AkemiTheSunbro #4 · Jan 4th, 2014 · · ·

I'm so sorry.

I dunno what you believe faithwise, but I, as a Christian, will be praying for comfort in your tough times.

Don Kefistor #5 · Jan 29th, 2014 · · 4 ·

pvtread

pvtread #6 · Feb 10th, 2014 · · ·

Just went to his service on saturday; he's really gone. Live your lives the best you can, cause you never know if you will see tommorow.

Sketch D Tail #7 · Mar 4th, 2014 · · ·

He must've been a really great friend, I'm sorry he's gone man. Hope you're okay.

Crimson Sketch #8 · Nov 3rd, 2014 · 1 · ·

Not joking, I got a tear in my eye.

ShatteredHeart #9 · Nov 29th, 2014 · · ·

*hugglez*

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