• Published 12th Dec 2013
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The Apple of White's Eye - DraconequusMaximus



Braeburn & White have been through alot in a short time & now due to a death in the Apple family the pair must travel to Ponyville were White will meet his Lover's family. But will they soon be his family as well?

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Honeymoon

The newlyweds were finally settled into their cottage outside Whinnypeg, it had taken several hours of flight to get there & neither stallion had been fond of it. White loved the night sky but riding a chariot is nothing like flying under your own power, Braeburn fared even worse as he was an earth pony & felt more & more airsick the longer the flight took. This was made up for by having two weeks to themselves to look forward to. However before they could start the rest of their lives there was still closure to be had.

The stallions awoke early the next morning, a gray dreary day suited to the task at hand. White cooked the couple scrambled eggs as neither knew how to make much else. Breakfast was eaten quietly & quickly. Braeburn then lead the pair down a long dirt road further into the countryside. After a two hour walk the pair arrived at Solemn Spruce Cemetery, the resting place of Braeburn's parents. Braeburn's mood didn't visibly change as they walked through the rows, but White could practically taste the hesitation & anxiety that permeated the air around him. Eventually they reached two graves near the center of the cemetery that read:

"Bismarck Apple devoted father, loving husband & Brina Apple caring mother, faithful wife."

Braeburn positioned himself directly in front of the headstone of his father, White stood next to him where there were no stones & draped a wing over his husband, as a show of moral support. All was silent for a moment until:

"Ma, Pa, I know you would have loved me no matter who I loved, but I was too busy being foalish to realize it. By the time I knew it it was already too late. I separated mahself from the family & ah didn't even go to the funeral. I completely ignored the reunions & was even cross with Applejack when she tried to help me. But eventually I met an angel in disguise, he was even more broken then ah was. But we fixed each other, White became royalty & I even became friends with the princesses. We just got married, I know you were always trying to get me to find a nice mare but I've never had any interest in em'. I wanted to tell you so badly, but I was too worried that you'd be disappointed in me. I'll always love you & do my best to remember you but i need to get on with life & White is my life now." Braeburn said through tears. But when he finished he began to smile through it all. White pulled him tight & there they stayed embraced for a long while. White wasn't sure about it but he could almost hear the wind whisper, "thank you". After saying goodbye the stallions promised to return at least once a year. But for now it was their honeymoon & they intended to enjoy themselves, & now that the weights of guilt had been lifted the loving couple had the rest of their lives to live through good & bad.

Author's Note:

Okay so I'm not super fond of leaving them there but I have plans to revisit their continuing life together eventually. For now however I intend to do a story about two main characters, I already have them picked out. It will be a M/M fic as will most stories I make in the future.

Comments ( 12 )

When will there be more :fluttercry: need new story!

3628335 working on it, been kinda depressed & I'm not sleeping well so it's slow going.

3628707in that case story can wait

3628740 I'm sorry, but making happy endings for stories just leaves you kinda empty when you aren't happy.

3628756 *grabs ur mane and yanks you into a kiss*

3628792 Ya know I wouldn't mind having a special somepony like you. Is that weird to say?

3628848 hehe thats alright i wont tell your husband but i know one thing i found me a very very special somepony and i cant wait to be with him everyday!!!:heart::eeyup::pinkiehappy::heart::eeyup:

Just wanna let ya know I read this series before I had an account and its so my favorite series ever ^-^

Ok, its been a while since I read this but let me start buy saying that DraconquusMaximuss I worship the ground you walk, you write so very well so this review will be for all the works of yours that I've read that are finished (Spike x Mac, Spike x Discord, and this) ok starting with this, I really like the chemistry that these two have together, granted that can be said for all the stories you write, the work well together. You also gave life in my eyes to a place (Appleossa) that I always hated and found very dry and bland. Everything else really goes for all of them, I love them together, they seem to really care for each other and you are so good a writing! now the only reason you get this score is because I don't give 10-10, unless its perfect in all ways so here for all your finished stories that I've read

9.8-10

I can't wait to read more of your work

Question: When White & Braeburn decide to have foals, will they adopt, use a surrogate mother, or use a spell and/or potion to turn one of them into a hermaphrodite temporarily to have their own foal?
Please let it be the the last on! :pinkiehappy:

6457275 I had plans for them to adopt, but I'm not sure if I'm gonna continue the series.

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