Spike and Macintosh have taken the next step in their relationship and are soon to be wed. Spike can even enjoy the comforts of his younger days thanks to the cooperation of his friends and family. However, a startling event just a week before their wedding may upset the future they have together, or possibly make things infinitely better. Only time will tell.
Cover art isn't final, just there until I find something better.
This is the sequel to my previous story Bigger Than Mac
The sequel to this story is out now! The World Is Her Oyster
As always the story is edited by TheAlmightySqueeb
Chapters (9)
I'm already loving it!
Can't wait for the next chapter bro.
lol spike is pregnant.
That was a nice plot twist. I can't wait for the next chapter. Best of luck.
Spike is pregnant..... *sigh* ... time for a long talk with Mac.
Yay! A sequel!Totally gonna read this next!
Wow! I wonder how Mac is going to react to this.
Love the new story! Keep up the amazing work my friend!
i like your stories. Where I live in Northwest Arkansas, homosexuality is highly frowned upon, so i like how your work kinda paints a good picture of things for people like me
4314386 Thanks, that means a lot to me. I'm from the middle of missouri, we were the last slave state, progress isn't a thing we're famous for.
4314407 i used to live in Missouri - first around Joplin, then St. Louis - and now Bentonville Arkansas. progress is slow in all three of those locales
4314412 I feel your pain.
Nice chapter. I'm glad Mac wants to help the baby as well.
4314423 Honestly I can't imagine him being against helping the baby live a better life, he's a good guy and he saw the adult dragons.
I now want to see a story where Luna fights evil dragons with a big dumb hammer.
Thanks a lot.
OMG THE FEEL!
Love it! Keep up the amazing work!
This was Cute
Great job bro
tia's reaction was priceless.
Once again I have to say this..... "Your Celestia for this story (And Bigger than Mac) is just pure AWESOME!!!!
100somthing days until the baby comes. Fine by me. Just means a lot more chapters! (hopefully)
and that's never a bad thing.
why is this getting so many dislikes?
i like it.
Baby on the way!
Loving this story!
I think the reason you're seeing dislikes is you're moving really fast with really short chapters.
It's just my opinion though, and I read around 100 paged an hour (something like 25k words) so I admittedly may be biased...
4319682 yeah I think you're right. I'm taking tomorrow off for planning.
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Users with a bias against M/M. Ignore 'em. This story is sweet.
Shining's in the doghouse now!
So I read this and Bigger Than Mac tonight. I'll leave a review for the first story over there, but I'll add some comments to this one right now. I liked the bit of world-building you did in the first few chapters with the dragons, Luna's hammer, etc. When I first saw this story, I thought there was gonna be some sort of way that Mac impregnated Spike, but this actually makes a lot more sense and opens up a whole realm of possibilities. As far as characters go, everypony seems in character. I especially like your version of Celestia.
Now, I know that you have an editor, but there are a few things that could be improved. First, your dialogue punctuation is off. Here is a link that should help. Second, you could go into a bit more detail, both in describing scenes and character's emotions, particularly their visible ones. I will say that I think writing the first story helped improve your writing, because some parts of this one are already a bit more fleshed-out. A big challenge in writing is being able to paint scenes without being excessive—something I'm still working on myself. Just keep in mind that you wanna convey a solid picture to your readers and to keep the pacing steady.
All in all, I've enjoyed reading these two stories tonight and am looking forward to more.
Also, you should edit the description of the story so that you have this marked as a sequel. That way more fans of Bigger Than Mac can find it.
4321125 It means a lot to me that you'd read my stories and give me input. I've been following you for quite awhile and I really enjoy your work too.
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I'm glad you enjoy my stories! And no problem!
Nice chapter!
everything gose wrong
4339057 Omg your icon is so fucking adorable!
she would soon have a new baby to spoil whenever she got the chance.
This got me laughing
4339662 I couild sayy the same with you I mean spike is cute but your icon takes kt to a n ole new level
Well, warn a girl next time. That was scary, not quite as scary as when Twilight tries to cook, but up there.oh the lawls
4339662 i know
i like yours to
and first comment
That was great. I loved that chapter.
4343786 I think it's the freckles that get me lol
4343963 lol
this was grand if I wasn't a dragon slayer I would admit I love it so its just good *wink wink*
Nopony mess with Spike's hoard!
Peewee deserves a big bag of birdseed today! And Phoenix treats!
tia is gonna spoil her so much.
Pearl is sooooooooo cute!
*Cough, cough* I mean... Nice chapter dude.
Still taking it a bit fast imo...time skip was warranted here but you could have done a lot more in this chapter
(from beyond the grave) Eff you dude for killing me with cuteness
4354740 Yeah, I know I'm working on it. I had to move this one ahead because I scrapped the chapter I was going to put up before this one, it just turned out awful and I got rid of it.
4354854 I take it you liked Pearl then? She took me forever to draw how I wanted.
4355140 now a zombie. i you weponized cuteness so ya
4355130 I've yet to see anything terrible in this fic. The only thing I could even point to as wrong is you seem to be trying to rush through the story as opposed to letting it develop and it's a little jarring to read.
8 chapter in 10 days is great in terms of production, but if you spent a bit longer and put more into each chapter and took twice the time I'd expect few complaints (some authors I read update once every 2 weeks or less and it's not something i ever call them on).
The cuteness! It's too much!!!! You are gonna give me a heart attack!
LOVE IT!!!!
Awww! Little Pearl is so cute!
And she has two great dads.
4355140 pearl is amazing
