Haydrien is a zebra of simple virtues with some personal qualities that he would like to keep to himself mostly. After leaving his hometown of Dodge Junction, he sets up in Ponyville to find his purpose. He discovers that finding love isn't as easy as it seems in his books.
AN/ I would appreciate any criticism and helpful tips in the world of writing as this is my first piece. Also, any misspellings or corrections pointed out would be much obliged!
Edit - 4/15/2014: I'm going to have to put it on hiatus for now. When it started, there was so much motivation and I was all like "Yeah! Gay equines!", but that motivation ran out, and I'm gonna have to shelve it until said motivation returns. I'm sorry. I promise not to forget about youuuu!! .-.
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Actually very cute! If you need a proofreader don't hesitate to ask!
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Thank you very much!
It is good so far and I want to see where it goes. and an up-date on my story will be coming.
Hello there! Thank you for faving my story, first-off!
Second, I saw you had posted a story, so I decided to take a glance through. I'll send you a small review in a note!
4093046 Dude, wow! I don't mean to get all fanboy-ish, but you are like one of my favorite authors on this site. It means the world to me that you would take the time to do something like that. Thank you so much, bro!
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I'm glad that you've enjoyed what I write! I hope that the note I sent is helpful to you. I think you have a healthy creativity that could develop very nicely as you write more! If you haven't already, I'd also highly recommend you take a look at Guy_Incognito - he has written some excellent stories, including several coltcuddler fics!
I do not mean to be rude. It seems that I am remind slightly of a holliday movie. With that of the narrator saying the little extra and it is nice. Also I would like to see more of this it looks like it gets much more juicier.
4094664 Thank you! And sorry if there are some errors, I was not completely focused while writing this, so I was a bit out of it.
Cool
It is a good stasis, but you have to have trigger soon or else the story will get boring.
Glad to know I'm not the only one who sleeps on the couch. Lol, keep a good pace like you are doing now and you'll be fine.
Wait you put the story on hold because their is no hype?
Dude, if you want hype you need to attract more people to your story and the only way to do that is to post more chapters so it will be put on the front page.
4291163 I think I may have misspoken. I have lost MY hype. My motivation. Sorry for the confusion.
4292194 You need to change it because hype and motivation are two different things.
4299099 That's just me talking like an idiot. Sorry about that lel