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This story is a sequel to True Flight


This story is a sequel to my story True Flight and is basically, as the short description says, a continuation of that universe. I'll be posting any other stories I think of in this universe, rather than create a new story for them. Most of them will be one shots, and occasionally there might be a longer story that spans a few chapters. Expect slice of life, a little romance, and everything you hoped to see me do with the world I made. The first story is one for Hearth's Warming Eve and I have one planned for Heart's and Hooves Day. Outside that I'm not sure, and can't guarantee any kind of update schedule. If I get an idea, and write it, I'll put it here.

Tagged alternate universe because, heck, I made an alternate universe. This story, much like the ones before it, disregard S3 and, of course, S4. The cover art is a recolour I made.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 94 )

LOVE IT, I cant say any more or any less...:raritystarry::pinkiehappy::twilightsheepish::rainbowlaugh:

I love this series, keep it up! :rainbowkiss:

It feels good getting back into the Das-iverse.
Keep up the awesome my friend. I can't wait to see what they have planned for Shine.

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Hehe I think that's enough anyway :twilightsmile:

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I plan to. This is a story that, by it's own definition, can never end :twilightsheepish:

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Aye aye sir!

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There's one thing that's guaranteed, it's gonna be cute :yay:

I love that you continued this story.

More.This may not have been what I had been expecting but MORE.

Also. Das-iverse.

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Me too, there really was a lot left to do :twilightsmile:

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What did you have in mind? I'll see what I can do, or if it's something I already have planned. Unless it was A) the prequel or B) a recovery diary :fluttershysad:

3603469 more or less a story in the same universe that was focused on a different character than Scoots. Like... maybe, Sweetie? IDK, but pretty much when Scoot's got a family I was satisfied. Then you come out with this and my brain was screaming "YES! MORE FOOD! AND IT COMES WITH DESERT!" so I am pleased by this and wait patiently for more.

Sorry. Had a lot to do today. Also went back to 'Future' to read Star Shine's description to make sure that pony with Rainbow Dash and Scootaloo in the art for this story was indeed Star Shine.
Anyway, nice little story. I imagine Scootaloo wants her ability to fly to be a sort of Hearth's Warming present for Star Shine. That will be nice (yet screwed up depending on how much time 'til Hearth's Warming.)
I love how Scoot insists on calling Star Shine 'dad'.' After all, he has been more of a father to her than her real one.

Random question: How we, in any way, going to see how DT adjusts from being a neglected, rich foal to a poor one that is obviously cared for?

Holy crap, I saw this while listening to 'As the World Turns'...

Ha got you you sneaky dinky linky hideing your new fic hmmm lol nab but I was wondering if you could tell me how to follow you

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Ahh I see what you mean. I'm thinking about setting other stories I write in this universe. I'm not entirely sure. It depends what I write I think. I'll see what inspiration I get over time :twilightsmile:

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If I can do that then I don't see any reason why not. It could be a nice little idea. To have a story with Diamond Tiara and Firefly that is. It's only a few days until Hearth's Warming Eve, they aren't that twisted :scootangel:

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Heh that's pretty fun :moustache:

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There should be a nice follow button somewhere, I think it might be on my user page :twilightsmile:

WoW
much happi
so fun
real joy
lots smiles
Want hug you
WoW

Now i can finally finish "true flight" knowing I'll be able to continue on the triquel (tree•cwul) aka the sequel of a sequel!

Huzzah! More adventures in the Das-iverse!:pinkiehappy:

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I had a conversation once about what a four part story would actually be called. It's one more than a trilogy. I've totally forgotten what it's supposed to be called. Well anyway, have fun with the story :pinkiehappy:

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The ride never ends :pinkiecrazy:

How sweet. I look forward to finding out what Rainbow and Scoot have planned for Star Shine.
Don't worry about how often you update after this little arc. As long as you let us know when you are working on it (Incomplete) or not (Hiatus). And don't worry about this party ending either,

:pinkiehappy:

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I've heard both tetralogy and quadrilogy for a 4 part story.

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I'll make blog posts when I get new ideas. Or you'll just get an update notification :twilightsmile: If you think this was sweet you'll enjoy what's next. I changed my idea half way through writing this and was all "ERHMAHGAWD That's so sweet."

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That was the discussion I had. I saw a quadrilogy and my dad said that it was technically inoccrect and that tetralogy was right.

another good chapter. I'm enjoying the story up to now and have enjoyed your previous works. keep it up.:pinkiesmile:

I would happily draw it for ya! :rainbowkiss: Unfortunately I have very little experience drawing ponies, so it may take me a while to finish drawing it up. Not that I would be able to resist, even if you hadn't asked; that scene is just too heartwarming to resist!

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:yay:

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Hehe unfortunately there's only one chapter left of this particular little story, but I'll keep it up :pinkiesmile:

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Well I have zero talent whatsover so it'd definitely be better than if I tried it :trollestia: I can say I'm very much looking forward to it. :rainbowkiss: I'll probably squeal when it's done. Emasculation is more magic than friendship. Oh and thank you of course :twilightsmile:

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A story in emotes; the latest Fimfiction classic story :moustache:

I expect this story will actually never be marked complete as this is where I plan to put every other story I write in this universe. Unless I get the idea for an amazing story that definitely deserves it's own story. I'll title each chapter accordingly so that you know when I'm switching stories and will of course post them in chronological order. Don't worry about me stopping a story halfway through to give you another story.

:rainbowhuh:

I am sorry but this is confusing me. Are you saying you never plan on finishing this?

Oh I see. Uh, why not just make one shots separate stories as sequels so I can archive these easier?! >< lol

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No. This will be a series of short stories that will deal with this universe. It will never be marked as Complete because more stories will constantly be added.

I noticed you gave the canterlot exsplentation lol probably clearing everything up huh any who if you want I could try my hand at the picture granted I'm not that good and to be honest I might forget to do it heh but if I rember ill give it a shot. If that's ok with you that is.

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Hehe I'm glad you realised what I was getting at. I would consider that but I don't know about it. It might be easier to just compile them in one story. It seems like too much to make a lot of little one shots. I suppose I'll have to see what happens when I write the first one shot :twilightsmile:

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Yep. Huh, shortest reply ever possibly. No, wait, I once replied using only one emote.

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I practically begged for the picture to be made. I don't mind about quality, I'd just love it so much. Also, yep, I managed to get that explanation in there :rainbowkiss:

That ending. Diamond at least seemed to turn into a more humble and caring pony. I approve.

I hope there is a follow up with DT and Scoots

So, Grey Feather got the punishment he deserves. He got to see Scootaloo fly while he no longer could. She has a happy, loving family while he rotted in jail. He became completely consumed by guilt and practically lost his mind. He was lucky Diamond Tiara came along so he could finally pass on. I believe it was his guilt that was keeping him alive.
Speaking of Diamond, I'm so glad to see her again. That she was able to heal and prosper. I don't ever expect Scootaloo to forgive her, but at least she is trying to make up for it by trying to help others.
Good Luck with your novel, Dasponi, Until the next arc, take care!:pinkiehappy:

You disappoint me sir I was hopeing for something a bit oh how do I say it darker? That might be the one oh well in all honesty I didn't want him to have a happy ending in any form true I didn't like DT but I could live with hers but his i don't think he diserved something so good... Any ways nicely done sorry heh havn't really made that picture yet /)(•*3*•)(\

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I can pull one of those out occasionally :twilightsmile:

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Yay for approval!

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Nah I don't think they'll ever meet again. I said in the Diamond Tiara epilogue that they didn't meet again I think.

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Thank you very much. You've always been able to see things how I have which has definitely helped your enjoyment of the story :twilightsmile: It's also helped me enjoy it. You've been absolutely invaluable and I hope to see you again next time :duck:

3637140
He lived a lonely and unloved life and died in the throes of insanity, alone without even realising it. He died a pathetic shadow of his former self. I think it's pretty dark. I was planning on him dying alone but I guess I couldn't go through with it in the end.

3640566 if they dont and Scootaloo does not forgive then that ia not a very happy ending...

should get scoots a coltfriend too so they can do double dates with RD and DS. just an innocent type of relationship though like how kids have boyfriends and girlfriends but don't know what it means. I say Rumbloo for the win. enjoy your break. we all look forward to your return. il probably be on deployment by the time you start writing again but look forward to seeing your work. You deserve a break though

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I could always retcon it further down the line. Or have Scootaloo send a letter later in DT's personal timeline. I think she'd come to forgive her in time.

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There are feels everywhere :pinkiecrazy:

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I look forward to seeing you come back from deployment. I'll have to write something for you to see when you get back :rainbowdetermined2: I could give Scootaloo someone but I don't think they'd want to double date.

Star Shine would want to follow them around though to make sure no shenanigans happen. Thereby causing many many shenanigans :rainbowkiss:

3645902 exactly. it would be funny to see dash and shine be over protective and see scoots try to fight it and learn what its realy like having parents be parents in every why.

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He wasn't alone DT was there to comfort him and he had some small victory in makeing scootaloo fly that's more then he deserved

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I've written a scene like that for a story before, I could probably do a ponified version :scootangel:

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I can see your point there, I can't say I really have a comeback for that.

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Don't worry I still wubs you. /)(*3*)(\

Why do all the best things end?
Examples: this story. A different story. Life....

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That got dark very quickly.

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Yayyy for wubs and for me finally coming and seeing if comments had been left.


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Hehe well if I get ideas then I'll happily keep writing it :twilightsmile: I'm not sure if I can do anything about the impermanence of life though I'm afraid.

Ha HA!

You used my suggestion! HUZZAH! Now I can say I've done something on this site!

Also... poor Grey. He deserved it, obviously, but still...

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I'm afraid I can't recall what suggestion you're referring to, but I'm a whore so I probably took every idea to this as pandrin as possible :rainbowlaugh:

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My suggestion to have DT help Grey, back in "True flight". I was one of the few who offered a solution other than "KILL THE MOTHAFUCKA!"

And you used it! Feel free to not mention me :P

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Hehe if I openly admitted to using storylines suggested by other people I don't know how well that would go down anyway :raritywink: I actually used a few ideas on what to do, and made them my own. Original credit always belongs to me. ME. :flutterrage::pinkiecrazy: Though, seriously, thanks for helping me get out of a tough bind. I've said it before and I'll say it again; these stories would be very little without the fans :twilightsmile:

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