Young Ametuer California Writer. I Love and am Obsessed with Humanized ponies!!!
Rainbow dash and Scootaloo have had a huge fight. But when one of their lives is in danger, what will one realize about the other?
This is a Scootadoption Story!!!
Criticizem welcome. Also, Thank you to otakuap on deviant art for amazing cover art!!!
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This... is... Awesome
Well there were a few grammars like one or two really not much. As for the story, why did you stop here friend? The story half complete or at least would feel like it to alot of readers. Sounds great it just that its not complete for the fact that you didn't meet the idea of your story. That's all i see wrong with it. Finish the rest of the story and it would be great.
its a good idea and the first i've seen of the plot keep it up!
MOAR plez
can you make moooooooooooooore?????
Ah, I love it! Fights always make me anxious. Seems like Scootaloo never stands up to Dash. I really liked that
through
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Read this and the second chapter. So far there's not to much wrong with it. Good work.
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Thank you!!!! I didn't notice that
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You're welcome. I'm eager to see what comes next
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need moar plz
More!!
Finally!! A few mistakes with spelling and grammar though. Also, a pony's gonna need more than one tube to survive a coma but I am still so happy for a new chapter I hardly care. Please get the next chapter up soon.
i really love this story
i can't wait to read the new chapter....really 
you do an awesome work btw
Im enjoying this story. I am writing a story sort of similar to this one but i started it probably way before you did on this one.
I havent worked on it for a few months now.. I may end up finishing it but idk.. Anyway, you are doing a good job with this. Keep it up!
Lovvee it.
Yippee!!
Just yesterday I reread the story. That's kinda weird. Second or third time its happened. But I'm glad you're getting back to updating. 
just
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This was a good chapter but it was super short. It made me a bit sad, but I know how life goes sometimes. Nonetheless I'm glad it updated.
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Thanks!!!! I would not have caught that!
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You're welcome, and I'm glad that this fic is alive.
Your author's notes actually aren't that strange. But I'm glad you didn't abandon it. It ended up really nicely!
AAAAWWWWWW
this was such a beautiful ending to an awesome story I love it! I'm really glad you didn't abandon it and at least finished it too but anyways fabulous story 
and keep up the great work in future stories 
Hope u do a sequel someday ^^
Great job! Can't wait to see what else you write.
BTW I don't know if I should call you lucky for not having final exams, or unlucky to have a 3 hour lockdown and evacuation. Tomorrow I will be walking into a schedule with 3 final exams and 2 provincials in 4 days, so ... busy schedule.
*cough cough*
~ story page still says incomplete ~
*cough cough*
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Thank you so much!
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I don't plan on doing a sequel, but I am touched that you think this is good enough to have one. On a completely different note, I love your avatar picture
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Its ok, about everyone at my school is like "I know we should be freaked out but can we celebrate just a tiny bit?" Sorry about all your exams though… no clue how I could live through that. Good luck on them though! Also, thank you for pointing the incomplete thing out, I totally forgot about that. XD
4524628 'Welcome.
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Definitely. A good ScootAdoption fic, and it was rather nicely done.
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Yeah, thanks!
And no problem, I will probably forget about the story status when I complete my story too (it's still in the conceptual stage).
If you do have that celebration, have a piece of cake or something for us!
*WolfBow* Well Done. could of used a little longer ending. but other than that the whole story was well done.
Not bad. Not bad at all.
This fic has many elements that are crucial to any riveting story, like conflict (both inner and outer), plot, and believability.
However, some editing is probably a good idea. Several misused, misspelled, and misplaced words are present, of which are easy to correct, if you just sit down for it.
I'd give it a 7/10 (grammar is to blame).
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Thank you!!! I am aware about the bad spelling thing (it runs in the family, no joke) and I do need to sit down and just correct and review this story…
Derpy raided Sugar Cube Corner's entire supply of muffins
Well...sounds like a Tuesday
SEQUEL!!!
6089033 No more like a monday
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A Monday? No. THE Monday’s.
Well this was nice.
Scoot in the water, Somepony save her!
what an interesting start to zee story
The fight was.... abrupt and weird