"I am the Aloof Hermit, the Lord of the Empty Seat. I am the Alpha and the Omega"
Twilight calls her friends over to help her with a spell that with temporarily enable them to use each-others attribute's, such as their wing's, magic, etc. However, when focusing on her spell, Spike trip's into the middle of the spell, causing it to go haywire! Once the smoke clears...the Main Six find themselves...transformed...
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An apostrophe does not mean "oh shit, here come's an s!"
You know, as a mature story or at least with a few teasing fragment here and there this story can be a small gem on this site, otherwise only the comical part and the absurdity of events can give this story the extra push it need to be really noted among many
Just my opinion
I am sure Spike agree
I'm interested into this story,
LETS SEE WHAT HAPPENS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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I'm certain this is one spell Spike is happy Twilight messed up
author please if you will ON TO THE NEXT ONE
Very interesting indeed...
Is this related to the new how to train your dragons 2?
>sees title
>sees cover art
>sees Romance tag
>ohshitI'vebeenwaitingforthis.jpeg
Do I even need to go on?!
Lovely premise, sire. Could use some... touching up from editors though. The asterisks simply must go and those other errors... oh, dreadful!
nice
Q: will Spike be chasing the other girls now too?
3675649 That remains to be seen....
3675724
there is so much potential in this fic 
or will the girls start to see Spike as a suitable mate now that they are dragons and fight over him?
No offense, but I suggest finding someone proofread your story before you post your chapters. While you've got a nice concept, the unnecessary apostrophes everywhere (and some missing where they should be!) are very distracting. Also, there are already a few "mane 6 change into dragons" stories, so be sure that you have a good original take on the concept.
Going to lay off rating this for now, wanna see how the next chapters turns out.
But I'm watching you...
First I'd like to say you need a proofreader and maybe an editor, but aside from thT this hast he potential to become an absolutely amazing fic with some interesting qualities
Dragons, effects, gets, and eyes do not need apostrophes before the s.
This could be interesting because honestly there aren't enough Mane 6 turn into dragon fics. Something I've always found surprising actually now that I think on it. Anyway, nice story.
I concur on the proof reader and editor part.
Also your pacing seems a little rushef and I'm not really feeling the voice of the characters in their dialogue.
For example "alright you proved your masculinity" line not only seems like a not quite dry joke it also does not really make sense as a comment from apple jack, maybe discord or spike but not applejack.
Your and You're are two completely different words.
I also noticed that you failed to move to a new line for a new speaker at least once.
Nice premise, but as others have said, you REALLY need to sort those apostrophes out.
3675041 It doesn't seem like it.
Proofreader definitely needed. That being said, it looks like you cleaned up a lot of the mistakes before I read this. Unicorn, dragon, and pegasus are not capitalized.
Good concept, lots of promise, time to see how it plays out.
3678520
Technically "Pegasus" is the name of a specific winged horse, so it should be capitalized.
3678781 Only if it is the specific winged horse, when used as a species it isn't.
3678819
Apparently you don't understand how adjectives or speciation work.
"Earth pony" -> "pony of Earth"
"Pegasus pony" -> "pony of Pegasus"
It's being used to name the lineage of the winged horses, not their species. Their species is "pony", and their forefather is Pegasus.
3673820
maybe he is experimenting with an advanced warning system
3673820
3678914 lel
3678819
...the species is a bunch of winged horses...
3678952
Subspecies. They can breed with other pony variants, although I don't know why they'd want to breed with sludge ponies.
3678957
i will end you
3678963
Aww... Is da widdwe psychwopaff angwy?
decent start with a few grammatical errors
lets see where this goes
Nothing against Teen rating but this would be a decent start to a clopfic. It takes time for Twilight to figure out how to reverse the spell but before she does the Mane 6 all end up going into heat. Spike inevitably ends up breeding all of them and atleast some end up gravid. Would be better with an aged up Spike if the Mane 6 as dragons are exactly like the coverart.
3678900>>3678952 Straight from an article
Notice the uncapped pegasus ponies part.
I will note that there is no example for earth ponies in this particular piece as they're simply listed as ponies.
Danger Prone Spike does it again!!!
3679401
Way to cite your sources, braski.
3679543 Here all 136 of them.
3679554
Barring the incredible amount of laziness you just displayed, lemme tell you why your sources are bad:
1. Most of the sources are irrelevant. For example, this source doesn't even mention Pegasus ponies, and it's the very first one after the References anchor.
2. Your sources contradict you. This link is the second link after the References anchor. Ctrl+F "Pegasus", and you will find this paragraph:
3. Even the people, who should know the answer, aren't consistent. Compare this and this. The first is an interview with Faust, and the second is a post from her twitter account. Ctrl+f "Pegasus" if you're having trouble.
In conclusion, I hope you've learned you can't just assume you're correct, then throw the book at someone. You have to actually read the book first.
3675751
3677263
I agree on both counts.
Find something interesting to do with mane six now dragons, but also I really would like there to be more mane six are now dragons fics.
3675724
Who's the ship ?
3679769 The main source was the Wikipedia page and if you knew how most large companies work with Wikipedia you would be aware that they normally hire someone to do the pages related to their content with incredible, painstaking accuracy. Hence the 136 sources and the page written like a professional research paper, and is okayed by a Hasbro employ most likely.
Here a direct reference to the subject of capitalization for common names of plants and animals.
3680512
fyi, wikipedia is not accepted as a credible source by any respectable institution
3680637 That isn't even slightly true, it normally goes from professor to professor and depends on the rank of the page as many pages on Wikipedia now require very high almost moderation level of ranking to edit and require direct sourcing to be approved. Back when Wikipedia was first created and the page editing feature allowed sad little trolls to try and fuck with shit, that would have been true. Of course, since this isn't a institutional issue that's really quite irrelevant.
3680684
sauce
3680512
Wikipedia is a tertiary source, a summary of information from disparate primary and secondary sources. Original research is not necessarily reputable, so it must be evaluated for accuracy and bias. Tertiary resources are summaries, which cannot reliably be used to judge the accuracy and biases of original research.
Wikipedia is not a credible source.
Moving on...
You realize this supports "Pegasus" being capitalized, right? "Pegasus" is a proper noun.
Again, you need to read your sources before you claim they support your argument.
Will the mane 6 stay the same as they are now or will they grow and change into dragons around their age group?
3681194 Oh, so what about your Earth ponies? Since earth refers to land instead of the planet in that case, it is therefore is not capitalized. Also, Pegasus is only capitalized if Pegasus was a pony in Equestria and is who their race is named after; otherwise, being their universe and not ours in which the events take place it would not be capitalized as it would simply be a common name for their classification of sub-species within their universe. It would also be all kinds of awkward to bu unicorn, earth pony, alicorn, and Pegasus.
3680707 For starters that's over 8 years old. Second, the founder is not actually in charge of rather it's an accepted source or not. Finally, the last part
is basically a direct claim that academic use is a thing with Wikipedia.