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Fire-Dash


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Mondays sure suck, don't they? You wake up early, brush your teeth, try to get ready for your miserable job, step outside-and plummet to your death. Okay, so maybe this Monday was a little worse than most.

Rainbow Dash arrives in a dark and endless abyss without any memory of how she got there. The only thing she can recall is waking up on Monday and falling to her death, nothing beyond that. But no matter, there is one other being there who might be able to help out. His name is Discord, (who is now apparently going by the name of 'God of the Afterlife") and he takes her on a journey through her memories, unraveling them one by one in order for Rainbow to move on.

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Comments ( 3 )

Ok, wow, was not expecting this to be so gripping!

I don't really see any grammar mistakes, and normally I'd fuss about the change from 2nd to first person, but this was done rather well!

+1 Stalker lurking in the shadows~

Hmm I thought it would be unusual for Rainbow to fall to her death, seeing she is a Pegasus but then she snaps out of it like a nightmare becoming reality and it IS reality?!

She committed suicide?!?!?

ITS ALWAYS GOTTA BE DASHIE!!!!! D:

3506764 Thank you. :) I wasn't sure about the switch, but it felt right when I wrote it.

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