Its a good start! I wonder who will find Spyro?

An interesting idea, look forward to more.

i love spyro when i was a kid but a barely remember anything about it LOOK FORWARD TO READING IT

right after i own with leona

PSX Spyro????? YES!!!!!!!!!!!!! I WANT MORE!

I love Spyro! I HAVE to track this!

This looks interesting and I'm definitely looking forward to reading more.

An excellent start to a good looking story. Kudos.

The first sentence of the description made me think about spyro, and it turns out this is a spyro story. You should get a pre-reader as there are quite a few grammar/spelling mistakes. Not me though, busy cleaning carburetors, you know how small engines are...(no you don't) Otherwise this story is promising and i will watch it.

fantastic

I fondly remember playing the spyro games when I was younger. I hope this story turns out to be epic.

This...shall be EPIC!!!!

The number of spelling and grammar errors is quite large, but hey. This story is good enough for me to not give a shit.

By the way, the thing where the speaker trails off is done as "..." as opposed to what you've been doing.

MORE MORE MORE!

Needs proofreading, smoothin' out, but looks AWESOME!!

MORE! i this story so far keep up the good work.

Wow this is actually pretty good. You got a track out of me.

I just barely started tracking and you upload another chapter! That's what I call convenience! Can't wait to see more out of this.

Awesome! Spyro is a childhood fav of mine and ya just made it even MORE awesome!

This is starting to look good and interesting

Wow.. just... wow! Not bad! By the way, LOL@Rarity

~Parajack

I don't know if it just because I'm reading so many shipping fan fics or if you are really thinking about it, but I sense a possible awkward relationship between Spyro and Rainbow Dash... Which if you did, I would be ok with that, I think. Oh and I noticed something "Ah think it don't matter. Once sis gets wind of this, she's gonna send us up inside the house as quick as Soarin eatin her apple pie," Um I believe Soarin is a guy...

>>323460323460 Yeah, Soarin is a guy. However, I read that as Soarin eating one of Applejack's apple pies. I could have just been grasping at concepts to make the sentence make sense, though.

>>323460323460

I believe it was meant as "Soarin eating Applejack's apple pie." Which is an unfortunate double entendre...

>>323782323782 >>323814323814 Aaaaah alright... That makes more sense.

i'm interested in where this is going.

>>323460323460>>323782323782>>323814323814

Fixed that sentence to make it sound better.

"Ah think it don't matter. Once sis gets wind of this, she's gonna send us up inside the house as quick as Soarin eatin one of her apple pies."

spyro is boss...

>>325279325279 Alright thanks... I still want to know about the other topic I brought up though...

>>325279325279

I didn't mean the accidental double entendre was a bad thing!

fantastic

This chapter was awesome man, I really liked it. Keep up the good work.

Very cool story so far, but I did want to point out out at least one inaccuracy.

The cloud Spyro's lying on couldn't have been retrieved by Rainbow Dash since her wings were frosted over and she's too stuff to fly. So Fluttershy had to be the one who got it.

DUN DUN DUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUNNNNNNNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Not bad! Continue please!

~Parajack

The number of Spike and spryo crossovers,

IS TO DARN LOW!

Track, will read.

And...here we go.

And BOOM goes the ignorance bomb! Nice story so far man!

~Parajack

Great... Why can't everypony just get along and just ask them first before jumping to conclusions?

>>358073358073 Ignorance is bliss, I heard.

>>358076358076 In due time provided tensions do not blind one from the truth.

Very cool story you have here.   Just found it this afternoon and can't wait for more.

I was :notsureifwant: at first, but the comments seem good. Maybe I'm just being a little biased because I have never played Spiro before.

Will read. Reaction commentary pending...

for some strange reason..im really looking forward to this meeting between the dragons and griffons.

I can't wait!

ohh WOOO WOOOOOOOO! First!!!

Holy moley!

You, my friend, have a perfect 60-0 like-dislike ratio on this story. AMAZING.

Good job with the chapter btw. no complaints here.

me gusta

Hmm...bringing Dark Spyro into the picture. The two times he appeared in the LoS series, Cyner had to coax him out of it. What happens if he resurfaces again?

Dun Dun Dun!

i could pre-read for you

cuz my moostosh is amazing no but srsly ill preread for you.

Run CMC, run for your lives!

>>425410425410

Isn't it obvious? Orbital Friendship cannon to the face! Otherwise known as the Elements of Harmony.

I'm enjoying this. Can't wait to see how things go with the meeting with the princess.