• Member Since 30th Jan, 2012
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Zeryurijin


Just the occasional resident dragon here among ponies. Writing seems focused on game cross overs with some originals in the works.

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The sequel to Little Dragon in a Strange New World.

Five years have past since Malefor's attempt to destroy Equestria was thwarted by a young dragon's own awakening. Five years since the world healed. Five years of training under the tutelage of Spyro, Twilight and even the Elders of Avalar to hone, understand and use his talents for the benefit of all.

But one knows all too well, its never wise to rest on the laurels of peace.

A death has occurred in Draconis. A new Queen has taken throne and with it, tensions build between the nations. As Spike and his friends help struggle to keep the peace between the two, a dark threat will be unearthed that threatens not only Equestria but Avalar as well.

Chapters (9)
Comments ( 29 )

Well that can't be good.

Well shit, that can't be good.:twilightoops:

First off. Great story. Good plot so far and paced pretty well. But. There are several grammatical and punctuation errors. Odd sentences. Wrong and or missing words. While not overly horrible it distracts the reader and takes away from the story when the reader has to stop mid sentence to figure out what you are trying to convey. Overall. It is a great story. But you should find yourself an editor or prereader. Someone to go over the chapter and point out mistakes for you to fix before the chapter is posted. Or to fix them for you. If you want someone to help you out with the story I will gladly volunteer. I want to see more of this story and see it become popular. But keep up the good work.

The first story has over 600 like, yet this has 14?

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Sequels can be a hit or miss. It depends on what is involved. This may catch on at a later time.

5291672 Could be that allot of people who follow the story don't follow authors. over 700 people following the first one but only 100 people would see a blog about a sequel. Its why you see allot of people put a 'Sequel is up' chapter in the original story.

The training on using the earth magic proved a little uneven and coarse.

One might even have called it 'rocky.'

Admit it, you were thinking it too!

"I know the locations of a vast array of dark and terrible artifacts which should never see the light of day lest the world weep in blood and choke on its own ashes, so instead of taking this secret to my grave, I'm going to make a guide detailing where each of these foul relics can be found and how to retrieve them, and disguise it as a cookbook."
-Star Swirl the Beard-Brained

Spike is right, that is a whole new level of stupid right there.

Also, it's "archive," not "arch hive." I noticed that particular error at least twice.

please update this story soon i want to read more

Forget that... skin sapphire alive and make sure she lives the whole time. A suitable punishment for most evil-evil doers...

I hope Sapphire get's all her bodily fluids cold-boiled from her body before being impaled on a blunt spear and tossed into boiling water.

rune circles interfering with time and space, making things go all wibbly wobbily."

I can see a doctor who reference! Whoop whoop whoop!

do you have to be so loud?

yes

awesome more please

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I would skin her, then take her skull while it's still connected to the spine...

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...She would make a fine trophy.

Hope to read the other chapters when they come out, that is if you plan on continuing

*sees story has been updated after like two years* Waaaat???? :pinkiegasp:*looks at clock* 1:52 AM, nooooo!!! I need to sleep, but story... :fluttercry: guess I'll read tomorrow.

YESSSS FINALLY :pinkiehappy:

Praise be to the FimFiction necromancers praise be...........now if only I could get to to turn their sights to ponyville goes to the dragons

Will always love LOS, keep up the good work

Are u gonna continue this sequel? I'm about to start reading this and hope to read what comes next in the new chapters. Plus I'm a huge fan of Spyro the Dragon, and with the Purple Dragon of Legend as Spike's teacher and mentor, I know the young Purple Dragon of Equestria can accomplish great things for his home and his friends and family

Was that author's note a Dr. Weird reference?

Amazing story BTW!

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An old Animated show from the eighties. The particular line "Gentelmen, BEHOLD! I give you... This!!!" Has many memes based off of it!

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