Huh so I'm guessing the Doujin Industry in Kitsuna is full of clean School comedies, Giant robots, Magical girls (wait how does that work in a world where there is magic?) and Card games.
Not big on politics and the like, but I do think that Sweet Breeze is deluded. Having sex with Old Stallion Sparks and then meeting her husband might have caused some confusion over who Fluttershy's dad really is. She believes Sparks is the father and unless pony anatomy on pregancy hasn't changed from eleven months to nine, then she might be correct. Of course, this does mean that she was already set to be engaged to the Duke of Cloudsdale and thus can be seen as a two-timing cheat. On the other hand, there is the very good chance that Sparks may have used a protection spell on him (I've seen it, it's perfectly possible) and didn't tell her and Storm Cloud is Fluttershy's actual father. Besides, Fluttershy is already the recognized heiress to Cloudsdale so why would she want Sparks' land instead? Just a thought, that's all. When I get going, I just don't stop until I've hit every variable I can think of.
Is fine dood. As for clop, that bit at the end made me think of something. Why not give Rainbow a dick? Have her convince Twilight somehow to grow her one with magic and away to Fluttershy she goes.
4114785 Knowing me... it'll be clop involving Futa-Twi, dood. But I might surprise everyone with clop that isn't Twilight related, dood.
4114980 I did have a scene where I don't know HOW it starts but it leads to FutaDash and Futa-Twi banging Fluttershy, Dash wants to stick in it Twilight but it pisses Twilight off and dismisses the spell, dood. Twilight scolds her and gives Dash her dick then they both double team shy.
This chapter was pretty funny. Twi should get drunk more often, especially around Rainbow Dash. I think they actually got along better than usual in that scene. Also, it seems that while Sweet Breeze is eager to hear gossip and secrets about Twilight, she doesn't seem that comfortable with Twi being sexually interested in Fluttershy. I can't wait for the threesome.
Well this was interesting, so this is what i get probably rarity anf pinkie are the straight girls here but pinkie prefer to try to convert the people to become pure like her. Then fluttershy well she was good until she started defending the incest........WtF.........another who defend the inceast ugh specially whe she said the ultimate love just shut up girl, im totally against incest. But well this fic funny anyways XD and finally twilight with her ideal world i know the word for her attitude but. Im not going to said everyone shouls know that word ...
4122371 Pinkie and Fluttershy's argument was more of 'me clashing with myself', dood. While I'm okay with incest as a whole (Would never do it myself), I'm actually against incest when it comes to characters I like, dood.
Now for some dumb stuff: Because of how I see things, Any Male on Twilight is immediately denounced as treason and should be burned forever to me, dood, regardless if it's clop or not. Futa on Twilight is treading on thin ice because Twilight isn't the futa. Futa-Twilight on ANYTHING is basically applauded and added to my bible, dood. But in all honesty... nothing gets my blood boiling in rage more than Spilight, TwiArmor, and Flashlight.... the former two because it's incest and literally can\t work because one is a fucking child and the other is married and the latter can't work because Flash Sentry is a bland useless character, dood.
Short version: I'm okay with incest... but not all of it, dood.
Yyyeah, Fluttershy's 'Mom' is a gold-digger, a manipulator and a user of the worst kind. I really hope that she's either put in her place normally, or Twilight fucks her into oblivion and tells her to never be seen in her presence again. Because I can't STAND people like her.
Can allready think of what rainbow will say when she sees AJ for the first time, "damn she is appleJACKED! " ( please insert other sex puns and or inuindo here in a rainbow dash voice )
Horrifyingly enough, this plot is far more well thought out than half the stories on this site. Pun intended. Please do continue with a slightly abusive Twilight with a side of apathy.
So, Twilight and Rainbow Dash want to f*ck Fluttershy. Deep down, Fluttershy wants to f*ck them both, but wants a relationship with Twilight. Fluttershy is Twilight's cousin. Twilight still wants to bone Fluttershy, but can't because if she does, Barb has every right to bone Twilight. Fluttershy's mom is a money-grubbing bitch. Pinkie Pie is a crazy christian. And Rarity needs her attitude f*cked outta her. ... How much time is left before Twilight loses the bet and has to go out with Barb? How long before Fluttershy gets screwed, literally? (I hope she gets Twilight and Rainbow at the same time.) Is Applejack going to show up soon? Are we going to see Trixie again?
4204967 Pretty much, dood. As for your questions...
- I actually forgot all about the bet and had begun re-stilling it back into memory using the next chapter, dood. - It'll be a bit, not as long as a Twilestia chapter in Misadventures, amiright, dood? - Applejack is in the next chapter, dood. - I don't know when Trixie will appear again, dood. She's in the story as it is and will need to be an actual character at some point, dood.
You know, rereading this chapter gave me an idea for a sex scene. Have Sweet Breeze attempt to get Flutters to seduce Twilight, but she gets frustrated and takes over, and both she and Flutters sex up Twilight really good. Mother/daughter threesome with a futa girl!
Tartarus for all eternity where books are burning all around you forever, but then you become a badass with words flowing out of your hair like Celestia’s mane and have a weird relationship with Rarity who doesn’t want it or Trixie who wants to follow you everywhere… or something like Trixie, no relations to our Princess’ Student mind you, so…”
'backwards through the mirror' reference i tip my hat to you good sir
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This chapter hurt my brian ot hktni bauto.
Huh so I'm guessing the Doujin Industry in Kitsuna is full of clean School comedies, Giant robots, Magical girls (wait how does that work in a world where there is magic?) and Card games.
Ookay... that happened.
Not big on politics and the like, but I do think that Sweet Breeze is deluded. Having sex with Old Stallion Sparks and then meeting her husband might have caused some confusion over who Fluttershy's dad really is. She believes Sparks is the father and unless pony anatomy on pregancy hasn't changed from eleven months to nine, then she might be correct. Of course, this does mean that she was already set to be engaged to the Duke of Cloudsdale and thus can be seen as a two-timing cheat. On the other hand, there is the very good chance that Sparks may have used a protection spell on him (I've seen it, it's perfectly possible) and didn't tell her and Storm Cloud is Fluttershy's actual father. Besides, Fluttershy is already the recognized heiress to Cloudsdale so why would she want Sparks' land instead? Just a thought, that's all. When I get going, I just don't stop until I've hit every variable I can think of.
4114635 I'm sorry to hurt your brian, dood.
4114649 Nothing but safe Christian fun from the folks in Kitsuna, dood.
4114686 Drunken ponies do stupid things, dood. Sweet Breeze represents this in my mind.
4114732 Yeah, she's definitely deluded herself.
I'm still thinking that Fluttershy and Pinkie are going to have sex before her and Rainbow and Twilight together (as a threesome or not). XD
New chapter?
Oh man, oh man, oh man.
Is fine dood. As for clop, that bit at the end made me think of something. Why not give Rainbow a dick? Have her convince Twilight somehow to grow her one with magic and away to Fluttershy she goes.
No clop, but plenty of stuff that made me laugh, so I'm perfectly fine with this chapter.
Of course, I expect some hardcore clopping eventually
I demand clop for the next chapter
That last part of the chapter makes me THINK I know where this story is going.
And I'm loving it.
Wait, so you give us awesome sexy anthro futa Twilight, but then tell us there will be less sex? You're a cruel, cruel demon penguin thing.
Awesome chapter though :D
bit confused is breeze trying to guilt trip twilight into handing things over? pay fluttershy and her off? arrange a marriage? just be a total bitch?
4116055 All of the above minus the marriage thing, dood?
4114785 Knowing me... it'll be clop involving Futa-Twi, dood. But I might surprise everyone with clop that isn't Twilight related, dood.
4114980 I did have a scene where I don't know HOW it starts but it leads to FutaDash and Futa-Twi banging Fluttershy, Dash wants to stick in it Twilight but it pisses Twilight off and dismisses the spell, dood. Twilight scolds her and gives Dash her dick then they both double team shy.
4115119 Next chapter, dood.
4115260 I'm not good at secrets, dood.
4115270 I don't want this to be like Misadventures where there is a sex scene each chapter, do I look like a Fox Demon to you, dood?
4116105
I wouldn't throw that idea out just yet "dood" it might be a keeper.
This chapter was pretty funny. Twi should get drunk more often, especially around Rainbow Dash. I think they actually got along better than usual in that scene. Also, it seems that while Sweet Breeze is eager to hear gossip and secrets about Twilight, she doesn't seem that comfortable with Twi being sexually interested in Fluttershy. I can't wait for the threesome.
I wondering when you are going to introduce are favorite apple, if you are introducing Applejack.
4116792 Thanks, glad you enjoyed it, dood.
4116863 If I do this correctly, she'll be in the next chapter or the chapter after that, dood.
uh, wait. why am I a chapter superstar? I'm confused.
At any rate, good so far, dood. there's a part where you used the wrong homophone, though. Past, instead of passed, dood.
4121453 Anyone that comments on the google.docs and helps proof-read becomes a chapter super star, dood.... Unless you aren't Tomas, dood.
Well this was interesting, so this is what i get probably rarity anf pinkie are the straight girls here but pinkie prefer to try to convert the people to become pure like her. Then fluttershy well she was good until she started defending the incest........WtF.........another who defend the inceast ugh specially whe she said the ultimate love just shut up girl, im totally against incest. But well this fic funny anyways XD
and finally twilight with her ideal world i know the word for her attitude but. Im not going to said everyone shouls know that word
...
4121818
ah,okay. that makes sense. Yeah, I'm Tomas.
Heh, I just woke up.
4122371 Pinkie and Fluttershy's argument was more of 'me clashing with myself', dood. While I'm okay with incest as a whole (Would never do it myself), I'm actually against incest when it comes to characters I like, dood.
Now for some dumb stuff: Because of how I see things, Any Male on Twilight is immediately denounced as treason and should be burned forever to me, dood, regardless if it's clop or not. Futa on Twilight is treading on thin ice because Twilight isn't the futa. Futa-Twilight on ANYTHING is basically applauded and added to my bible, dood. But in all honesty... nothing gets my blood boiling in rage more than Spilight, TwiArmor, and Flashlight.... the former two because it's incest and literally can\t work because one is a fucking child and the other is married and the latter can't work because Flash Sentry is a bland useless character, dood.
Short version: I'm okay with incest... but not all of it, dood.
4122969 dood you should read ''100 años de soledad'' if you want more arguments or ideas for your fic, but anyways i like the story its funny
Dood, your. My hero for that reference to backwards through the mirror
4126047 Thanks, dood. I wish that story would update more though.
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaand nope.
Yyyeah, Fluttershy's 'Mom' is a gold-digger, a manipulator and a user of the worst kind. I really hope that she's either put in her place normally, or Twilight fucks her into oblivion and tells her to never be seen in her presence again. Because I can't STAND people like her.
Can allready think of what rainbow will say when she sees AJ for the first time, "damn she is appleJACKED! " ( please insert other sex puns and or inuindo here in a rainbow dash voice )
Horrifyingly enough, this plot is far more well thought out than half the stories on this site. Pun intended. Please do continue with a slightly abusive Twilight with a side of apathy.
So, Twilight and Rainbow Dash want to f*ck Fluttershy.
Deep down, Fluttershy wants to f*ck them both, but wants a relationship with Twilight.
Fluttershy is Twilight's cousin.
Twilight still wants to bone Fluttershy, but can't because if she does, Barb has every right to bone Twilight.
Fluttershy's mom is a money-grubbing bitch.
Pinkie Pie is a crazy christian.
And Rarity needs her attitude f*cked outta her.
...
How much time is left before Twilight loses the bet and has to go out with Barb?
How long before Fluttershy gets screwed, literally? (I hope she gets Twilight and Rainbow at the same time.)
Is Applejack going to show up soon?
Are we going to see Trixie again?
4204967 Pretty much, dood. As for your questions...
- I actually forgot all about the bet and had begun re-stilling it back into memory using the next chapter, dood.
- It'll be a bit, not as long as a Twilestia chapter in Misadventures, amiright, dood?
- Applejack is in the next chapter, dood.
- I don't know when Trixie will appear again, dood. She's in the story as it is and will need to be an actual character at some point, dood.
You know, rereading this chapter gave me an idea for a sex scene. Have Sweet Breeze attempt to get Flutters to seduce Twilight, but she gets frustrated and takes over, and both she and Flutters sex up Twilight really good. Mother/daughter threesome with a futa girl!
4208342 Gosh darn it, dood. Now I got that idea now. AND I'VE ALREADY WRITTEN CHAPTER TEN, DOOD!
I'll take a look at 10 and see if it could maybe fit in?
This
'backwards through the mirror' reference i tip my hat to you good sir
seriosly "cheque please" you coudn't come up with a better joke than that from other tv shows involving finn and jake come on
That was a funny and awesome read .and I wonder if Fluttershy and Twilight are relly cuzs .I can't wait to see what happens next.