I have to keep reminding myself this is AU, and that the plot might be... different. You still have my attention, but be careful. This could go well or horribly so quickly. Here's to your pre-readers and editors that are helping you with everything!
Wow, Twilight's gone two chapters without stuffing her dick in something of her own accord. Aaaand she's kinda a bitch, much more aware of her social status. Interesting.
3457528 Oh... really? I'll see if the next chapter makes her less of an ass, dood.
3472378 I know right... I gotta keep doing the same myself sometimes... but with people throwing ideas at me at certain points... things can get blurred, dood.
3472410 Tempting... but I already have an idea for a decent groundskeeper, dood.
do for myself (alternately, do to myself or even, do to myself for Sweetie Belle.)
3472378 Actually, this is pretty fun to help out with. I'm really warming up to Photo Finish The world needs more PhotoLight. 3472390 To be fair, there are times you have to be a bitch or your subordinates will run roughshod over you.
3472690 are you going to be using OC's in this when it comes to her harem? cause if so, then why not have a relative of photo finishes be behind the camera? it could be a cousin named Picture Perfect or something like that.
Considering the situation of this alternate reality, I hope that Twilight was downplaying herself about if she ever met Princess Celestia, that she's actually her personal student but because of security protocol for both her, her family and the princess she must deney ever met her, the fact that now she's hinerite the royal title is not as much of a big target than being Princess Celestia's student (same would go for Sunset Shimmer) and the other universities and colleges she went to study were actually part of the cover given to her by the Royal Secret Service ML:9
Also I do wonder how the the other Mane girls would be:
So far we know that Rarity was hired to be the house "buttler" (read: Maid and probably Silver Sparkle anoyed her too much for her to start to reffer herself as a buttler and even wear the buttler uniform rather than the risquie Maid outfit Silver always insisted her to use), personal gourmet chef (and eye-candy)
Applejack would still be a farmer of her own family farm, but due to some economic problems (same that may have made Big Macintosh take a job as part time male-model in Sparkle company) she works part-time as the Sparkle House's gardener and maintainance gal. (and eye-candy)
Pinkie Pie would still work for the cakes at Sugarcube Corner but she's hired as the especial events organizator, entretainer (not in the way Silver Sparkle would had prefered but in the clean way) and even personal pastry chef. (and eye-candy)
Rainbow Dash may work as a the head of the local weather team, she's still aiming to join the Wonderbolts, but because her job doesn't cover most of her expenses she was hired by Twilight's uncle to be his personal trainer (and eye-candy)
And Fluttershy would actually be a rich girl, heir of the Cloudsdale Weather Company, so rich that she will never have to actually work but not as rich as Silver Sparkle, she prefers to live a peaceful, simple and not glamourous life in her cottage at the edge of the Everfree Forest (she's so shy indeed) and find herself a job as a forest ranger, part time veterinarian, and part time pet trainer, however when she met Silver Spark she saw how loney was the old stallion, and in her kindness she even offered to visit him regurary, he even offered her a job as the household animal caretaker and sometimes part-time gardener, despite the fact that she always told him that she never needed the money he insited to giving it to her so she could donate it to the local animal shelters, besides, he knew he could never repay her kindness and friendship with money, he appreciate her so much as close friend that to him she was almost as if she were a family member. (She would be the only one who wasn't seen as an eye-candy, not because she's ugly, quite the contrary, she would be the definition of natural beautiy not just on the outside but on the inside as well, however when Silver Sparkle would had tried to look at her in a lecherous way even for a fraction of a second, he would feel that doing it is something completely horribly wrong and shameful thing to do to such beautiful being that could be considered an angel who had accidentally fallen from the heavens into this horrible world not worthy of her presence)
I can't wait for the time Rarity accidentally discover Twilight's secret... and like it
Got en hiemel! This chapter was amazing! I'm loving the story and the rather complex characters. Now I'm wondering if we'll see Hilda getting pounded since you mentioned griffons. Also, why was Big Mac a model? Anyway, I won't destroy Prinny kind dood, now you can rest easy. lol
So Rarity is going to be more careful around Twilight now? I know she is going to freak out when she finds out about Twilight's 'extra equipment.' BTW, was that Rainbow Dash as the receptionist? That was my first thought as to who she acted like.
"Ich bin fasziniert, aber sind sie wirklich anders als ihr Onkel, Fräulein Sparkle?”
What is the English translation? 3472819 I love how you picture Fluttershy.
Prinnies For too long we have been abused, Dood! Yesterday we have been used as bombs, Dood! But today, today, we are the masters Because of this masterpiece! Dood! *cough cough* And Twilight pounding her cock here and there, dood *Cough cough*
The Prinnies will rule the Netherworlds (And Equestria) someday, Dood
3472917, not exactly, aparently it seems to be that She doesn't know her well enought to trust her, especially since the closest thing for interaction she had to a sparkle family member could be considered constant sexual harashment on daily basis and she fears that Twilight may be the same as her uncle.
3473057 Thank you, hopefully the author will take it as its headcanon.
3473339 You may be right, her reaction sounded as if she isn't into mares herself though, so it looks unlikely that Rarity will be interesting in Twilight.
3473392 until she finds out one of her secrets, and stat to have recurrent dreams about it while using certain maid outfit and some especial kind of lingerie inside it
3472787 That would be awkward for the relative, dood.
3472819 Actually, Twilight has never met Celestia in this story. Doesn't mean Celestia isn't involved at all though, dood. And as interesting as ALL that sounds... so they all work part-time as Twilight's servants dood.? I dunno.
3472857 Thank, dood. Big Mac will be explained later and thanks for not killing us prinnies, dood.
3473408 Unfortunately... that's how Rarity cracked in the MIsadventures... I want Rarity to start wanting the D in another way, dood. But good idea though.
3473603 1) I can't wait to see how Celestia (and Luna) will get involved into this, will they eventually join her marem? (please let it be a yes! let it be a yes!) Also is cool of you to put this idea into consideration,
2) Thank you for taking my idea on the previous post into consideration, it would be great to see the girls working for Twilight part-time at first before they start to get a warm fuzzy feeling for Twi
3) Oh well, it was worth a try, however I can't wait to see how Rarity will discover Twilight's secrets and eventually will submit to her new mistress deep desires
3472690 Well, remember that PF had several mares attending her in the episode in which she appeared. Personally, I'd go for the follower with the pink mane working the camera, while the make-up girl with the asian-like eyes "assisting" PF and Twilight in their fun (somebody has to aim that monster while they're so busy necking after all, not to mention make sure they are both properly lubed ). I also like WingZero's interpretation of Fluttershy, but if you already had something firm set in mind for her that would interfere with the story to change, then stay the course.
3473919 Thank you for liking my depiction man, sorry for not being able to talk before but I kind of lost the track of your stories and still got suck on the first chaptes of "The Sorcerer, The Teacher and The Wonderbolt", I will try to do a power-read one of thses day and get up to date, so far I like the chapters I had read, and I am more intrigued to see how this will turn out on the sequels, once again sorry.
3474024Thanks, all I have to say is that keep doing such awesome job (And I know yo do considering that I have yet to read the two other sequels as well)
“I didn’t think schools worked like that, when I got my Bachelor’s of Arts in Trottingham. I recall being in school for five years, and they were a grueling five years of study,” Rarity replied, in mild surprise.
Hm, wouldn't Twi be curious how Rarity ended as a maid/head butler when having a bachelor of arts? Or maybe she will ask about that later, I guess? This does feel like the first hint Rare gave Twi of her talents as designer so maybe Twi will somehow keep that in mind and with time and more hints find out what job Rare is truly meant for.
“So you and Twilight are best friends?” Sweetie asked, curiosity burning in her eyes.
“Yeah, we are…” Barb said, a small smile forming on her lips as she continued her picture.
Wouldn't "Yeah, something like that..." fit better here given Barb's intentions to make Twi her lover/have sex with her (which clearly isn't something you normally do with your sis/mom and arguably with your best friend either)?
You could do that, but I think Twi behaving a bit like an ass/a bit terse fits her character quite well as you keep her close to her episode 1 apperance with the expection of having one friend and a dick. Besides even after Twi got all her friends there were still a couple scenes where she was a bit of an "ass" so I think your way of describing her till now had been just fine. Ofc if you want her twenty percent nicer, then go for it, just don't make it 200% that would be creepy. ^^
Nice chapter, I do hope though the lack of staff members gets mentioned and taken care of in the next chapter as I wanna see Shy, RD, AJ and Pinkie and the others join the harem, ähm, I mean the house staff. XD
The thing that cought me off gaurd was Twilight openly stating that she likes mares. I expected her to keep something like that to herself. That was surprising, well done, good sir.
3473603 I realized later on, after I made my comments, that she indeed may have just reacted out of fear. The fear that Twilight was going to turn out to be a creepy lecher type as her uncle was. However if Twilight treats her with resect, which she has been so far, then Rarity may warm up to the idea.
3474157 I got a plan for that, dood... don't you worry, dood.
3474241 Good thing I don't write my stories with 'dood' in all the paragraphs then, dood. I'm glad you enjoyed it... let me finish Lyra/Bon-BOn and my Disgaea Futa-Rape story before chapter 4 starts, dood.
3475015 It will save us all in the netherworld, dood.
3475747 That... was actually me not thinking... but NO ONE HATED IT, so sweet, dood!
My flippers were FREEZING in the process of this comment, dood.
I see, then I will wait for chapter 4 or whatever chapter that plan will be shown.^^
Voltrasin is right though as this does fit Twi. State she likes mares but keep the D a sort of family secret. The only thing I wonder about in this case is Sunset Shimmer again.^^;
As in why didn't she said "or princess" in chapter 1 since Twi admits to like women. I find it really hard to believe that Twi is okay with stating to be a lesbian in a room full of strangers she has meet for the first time ever in her life while keeping Sunset Shimmer, the only friend we have seen of Twi, in the dark about what sex she prefers. I can see her not wanting to tell Sunset about the D, but it is a bit weird that she can tell strangers she likes women and not her friend who she might have known for a much longer time than those strangers who she doesn't know for a whole day yet.
I dunno, that's the only thing that pokes me as a bit odd about this confession, as much as I like it for Twi to be said so openly I would have liked to see that Twi was also this open with her friend or that there was a hint that says that Sunset knows about her friend's preference. Like either saying after the prince comment "or princess" with a wink or that she makes a bit fun of it as a good friend sorta like this: A seven on the weirdness scale Or something else.
I have around two dozen webcomics to share, whenever they are good or not are up to you. You want me to sent the links to you? Though I guess you might know some of them.^^
3502922 Indeed she is, It's a RARITY that somepony figures out, usually they have to DASH every option aviable before that, until either it takes them from dawn to TWILIGHT to try to figure out, meanwhile I can't help but try to eat a slice of PIE during the wait until they either SHY away from the guessing or admit they not know JACK about who my best pony is.
To be true: I don't have exactly a Best Pony per se, I consider the whole mane 6 BEST PONIES (althought there's something about Fluttershy that draws me into prefering her, sctatch that she's my best pony!)
3527066 She's awesome like that, actually I didn't made a fuss when she became an alicorn unlike many others because I knew that she was going to become that since the beggining (actually I accidentally predicted it in a deviant art chat) once again She's awesome and addorkable!
don't be like that Twi, you know is true, take some pride on your achivements
3527070 I actually had no problems with Twilight becoming an alicorn... or her turning human for a movie... the only thing I've ever been against Twilight was the whole Flash Sentry thing, dood.
Like... what does he even do, dood? He can go die in a fire... then burn as he watches Twilight bend Sunset Shimmer over a rail and fucks her ass... IDEA, DOOD! (No I'm not doing this because I can't write pure hate and Twilight already tapped that particular brand of ass and knocked it up, dood)
3527096 Indeed, neither do I with her transforming into a human, also I concur with you regarding Flash Sentry, he was such a lousy guard that makes me wonder what rank did he actually have, If he even made it into Lieutenant we can say is a miracle for somepony who all what he did tried to do was try to filrt with the new princess trying to pull a "Shining Armor" with the sister of the pony now mentioned (besides, the comics had just reciently shown that the romance between Shining and Cadance was already going since highschool *assuming that caddance was sent there to adjust herself to the time's society and customs since aparently she was arrived fifteen or some more years earlier into the future than the rest of the Crystal Empire*)
He can't even properly guard Twilight's chambers or stop Sunset from stealing Twilight's Element of Harmony let alone protect her! He should be thankful that Sunset only was interested on the Element of Magic's tiara instead of killing twilight because his head would had rolled and his flank would be posted as a trophy in the barracs of the royal guard. (How literal is this figurative speech is up to you)
Also it makes me wonder if Sunset will return to Equestria to officially become part of Twilight's herd, and the girls also going with her (And then we could have Double Rarity acction, Double Applejack Action, Double Pinkie Pie acction, Double Fluttershy acction *plus knocking her up by her will as well as the equestrian self* and finally DOUBLE RAINBOW! acction *It's so intense! Double Rainbow! I don't know what does it means!*)
Also I do wonder how Daring Do would be dealing with the "Twilight Sparkle withdarwl syndrome"? Same goes for Spitfire and her now only doctor in Canterlot yet former nurse (also her official first)
It might be just me to gush over something so marginal but I was so happy when I saw Photos thought about Twi (the whole thing in flawless german, I mean). I mean, I butcher the english language on a daily level so I am the last person that should be allowed to talk and I´m propably sputtering nonsense right now but nontheless. It´s the little things that make my day. This thought/sentence just did.
*clears throat awkwardly* Anyways, this is an interessting story so far and I am pretty curious how it will play out. Back to reading. Me, away!
I have to keep reminding myself this is AU, and that the plot might be... different. You still have my attention, but be careful. This could go well or horribly so quickly. Here's to your pre-readers and editors that are helping you with everything!
Wow, Twilight's gone two chapters without stuffing her dick in something of her own accord. Aaaand she's kinda a bitch, much more aware of her social status. Interesting.
Here's a suggestion: How about you use Zecora as the Groundskeeper? Since she lives in nature she would be the most qualified to care for it.
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3457528 Oh... really? I'll see if the next chapter makes her less of an ass, dood.
3472378 I know right... I gotta keep doing the same myself sometimes... but with people throwing ideas at me at certain points... things can get blurred, dood.
3472410 Tempting... but I already have an idea for a decent groundskeeper, dood.
3472432 , dood.
Thanks for mentioning me
Like I said, if you´re planning more german lines for PF send me a PM.
3472632 I don't think Photo will appear for a while, but I'll keep it in mind, dood. Thanks!
Can't believe I missed these, dood.
You're
do for myself (alternately, do to myself or even, do to myself for Sweetie Belle.)
3472378
Actually, this is pretty fun to help out with. I'm really warming up to Photo Finish The world needs more PhotoLight.
3472390
To be fair, there are times you have to be a bitch or your subordinates will run roughshod over you.
3472663 God dammit Wrabbit... NOW I gotta figure out when Photo gets Twi's dick and who is working the camera while it happens, dood.
3472690 are you going to be using OC's in this when it comes to her harem? cause if so, then why not have a relative of photo finishes be behind the camera? it could be a cousin named Picture Perfect or something like that.
Considering the situation of this alternate reality, I hope that Twilight was downplaying herself about if she ever met Princess Celestia, that she's actually her personal student but because of security protocol for both her, her family and the princess she must deney ever met her, the fact that now she's hinerite the royal title is not as much of a big target than being Princess Celestia's student (same would go for Sunset Shimmer) and the other universities and colleges she went to study were actually part of the cover given to her by the Royal Secret Service ML:9
Also I do wonder how the the other Mane girls would be:
So far we know that Rarity was hired to be the house "buttler" (read: Maid and probably Silver Sparkle anoyed her too much for her to start to reffer herself as a buttler and even wear the buttler uniform rather than the risquie Maid outfit Silver always insisted her to use), personal gourmet chef (and eye-candy)
Applejack would still be a farmer of her own family farm, but due to some economic problems (same that may have made Big Macintosh take a job as part time male-model in Sparkle company) she works part-time as the Sparkle House's gardener and maintainance gal. (and eye-candy)
Pinkie Pie would still work for the cakes at Sugarcube Corner but she's hired as the especial events organizator, entretainer (not in the way Silver Sparkle would had prefered but in the clean way) and even personal pastry chef. (and eye-candy)
Rainbow Dash may work as a the head of the local weather team, she's still aiming to join the Wonderbolts, but because her job doesn't cover most of her expenses she was hired by Twilight's uncle to be his personal trainer (and eye-candy)
And Fluttershy would actually be a rich girl, heir of the Cloudsdale Weather Company, so rich that she will never have to actually work but not as rich as Silver Sparkle, she prefers to live a peaceful, simple and not glamourous life in her cottage at the edge of the Everfree Forest (she's so shy indeed) and find herself a job as a forest ranger, part time veterinarian, and part time pet trainer, however when she met Silver Spark she saw how loney was the old stallion, and in her kindness she even offered to visit him regurary, he even offered her a job as the household animal caretaker and sometimes part-time gardener, despite the fact that she always told him that she never needed the money he insited to giving it to her so she could donate it to the local animal shelters, besides, he knew he could never repay her kindness and friendship with money, he appreciate her so much as close friend that to him she was almost as if she were a family member. (She would be the only one who wasn't seen as an eye-candy, not because she's ugly, quite the contrary, she would be the definition of natural beautiy not just on the outside but on the inside as well, however when Silver Sparkle would had tried to look at her in a lecherous way even for a fraction of a second, he would feel that doing it is something completely horribly wrong and shameful thing to do to such beautiful being that could be considered an angel who had accidentally fallen from the heavens into this horrible world not worthy of her presence)
I can't wait for the time Rarity accidentally discover Twilight's secret... and like it
Great job so far, keep going!
Got en hiemel! This chapter was amazing! I'm loving the story and the rather complex characters. Now I'm wondering if we'll see Hilda getting pounded since you mentioned griffons. Also, why was Big Mac a model? Anyway, I won't destroy Prinny kind dood, now you can rest easy. lol
Awww, it seems Rarity doesn't want Twilight to be attracted to her.
So Rarity is going to be more careful around Twilight now? I know she is going to freak out when she finds out about Twilight's 'extra equipment.' BTW, was that Rainbow Dash as the receptionist? That was my first thought as to who she acted like.
What is the English translation?
3472819 I love how you picture Fluttershy.
3473057 I'm impressed, but are you really different from your uncle, miss Sparkle?
Prinnies For too long we have been abused, Dood!
Yesterday we have been used as bombs, Dood!
But today, today, we are the masters Because of this masterpiece! Dood!
*cough cough* And Twilight pounding her cock here and there, dood *Cough cough*
The Prinnies will rule the Netherworlds (And Equestria) someday, Dood
Keep it up DOOD!
3472917, not exactly, aparently it seems to be that She doesn't know her well enought to trust her, especially since the closest thing for interaction she had to a sparkle family member could be considered constant sexual harashment on daily basis and she fears that Twilight may be the same as her uncle.
3473057 Thank you, hopefully the author will take it as its headcanon.
3473339 You may be right, her reaction sounded as if she isn't into mares herself though, so it looks unlikely that Rarity will be interesting in Twilight.
3473392 until she finds out one of her secrets, and stat to have recurrent dreams about it while using certain maid outfit and some especial kind of lingerie inside it
3472787 That would be awkward for the relative, dood.
3472819 Actually, Twilight has never met Celestia in this story. Doesn't mean Celestia isn't involved at all though, dood. And as interesting as ALL that sounds... so they all work part-time as Twilight's servants dood.? I dunno.
3472857 Thank, dood. Big Mac will be explained later and thanks for not killing us prinnies, dood.
3472917 Things change, dood
3473057 The receptionist was just a random pony, dood. And thanks!
3473225 I actually forgot what Photio Finish said there, thanks for answering him, dood.
3473301 YEA, DOOD. But I kinda want Twilight to be Overelord, dood. Most prinnies lack the spine necessary to lead, dood.
3473339 Cool, dood... I'll start considering your idea from your previous comment, dood.
3473392 As I said, dood... things happen.
3473408 Unfortunately... that's how Rarity cracked in the MIsadventures... I want Rarity to start wanting the D in another way, dood. But good idea though.
3473587 , dood.
3473603
1) I can't wait to see how Celestia (and Luna) will get involved into this, will they eventually join her marem? (please let it be a yes! let it be a yes!) Also is cool of you to put this idea into consideration,
2) Thank you for taking my idea on the previous post into consideration, it would be great to see the girls working for Twilight part-time at first before they start to get a warm fuzzy feeling for Twi
3) Oh well, it was worth a try, however I can't wait to see how Rarity will discover Twilight's secrets and eventually will submit to her new mistress deep desires
3472690
Well, remember that PF had several mares attending her in the episode in which she appeared. Personally, I'd go for the follower with the pink mane working the camera, while the make-up girl with the asian-like eyes "assisting" PF and Twilight in their fun (somebody has to aim that monster while they're so busy necking after all, not to mention make sure they are both properly lubed ). I also like WingZero's interpretation of Fluttershy, but if you already had something firm set in mind for her that would interfere with the story to change, then stay the course.
3473919 Thank you for liking my depiction man, sorry for not being able to talk before but I kind of lost the track of your stories and still got suck on the first chaptes of "The Sorcerer, The Teacher and The Wonderbolt", I will try to do a power-read one of thses day and get up to date, so far I like the chapters I had read, and I am more intrigued to see how this will turn out on the sequels, once again sorry.
3474013
No big deal, man. We all tend to do that now and again. I know I do, at least.
3474024Thanks, all I have to say is that keep doing such awesome job (And I know yo do considering that I have yet to read the two other sequels as well)
Hm, wouldn't Twi be curious how Rarity ended as a maid/head butler when having a bachelor of arts? Or maybe she will ask about that later, I guess? This does feel like the first hint Rare gave Twi of her talents as designer so maybe Twi will somehow keep that in mind and with time and more hints find out what job Rare is truly meant for.
Wouldn't "Yeah, something like that..." fit better here given Barb's intentions to make Twi her lover/have sex with her (which clearly isn't something you normally do with your sis/mom and arguably with your best friend either)?
3472453
You could do that, but I think Twi behaving a bit like an ass/a bit terse fits her character quite well as you keep her close to her episode 1 apperance with the expection of having one friend and a dick. Besides even after Twi got all her friends there were still a couple scenes where she was a bit of an "ass" so I think your way of describing her till now had been just fine. Ofc if you want her twenty percent nicer, then go for it, just don't make it 200% that would be creepy. ^^
Nice chapter, I do hope though the lack of staff members gets mentioned and taken care of in the next chapter as I wanna see Shy, RD, AJ and Pinkie and the others join the harem, ähm, I mean the house staff. XD
Y'know... i had to go back and look to see if this was story #2 or #3 of yours i've favorited. This makes three, and you get +1 follower, dood.
3473603
Overlord Twilgiht, Dood!
That's like the best idea we ever had! Dood!
I just hope she doesn't go blowing us up like the rest of the netherworld, Dood.
why is it I read through this so fast? good so far, Favorited, thumbs up, and I await the next chapter.
The thing that cought me off gaurd was Twilight openly stating that she likes mares. I expected her to keep something like that to herself. That was surprising, well done, good sir.
3473603 I realized later on, after I made my comments, that she indeed may have just reacted out of fear. The fear that Twilight was going to turn out to be a creepy lecher type as her uncle was. However if Twilight treats her with resect, which she has been so far, then Rarity may warm up to the idea.
3474687 YAY, dood.
3474157 I got a plan for that, dood... don't you worry, dood.
3474241 Good thing I don't write my stories with 'dood' in all the paragraphs then, dood. I'm glad you enjoyed it... let me finish Lyra/Bon-BOn and my Disgaea Futa-Rape story before chapter 4 starts, dood.
3475015 It will save us all in the netherworld, dood.
3475747 That... was actually me not thinking... but NO ONE HATED IT, so sweet, dood!
My flippers were FREEZING in the process of this comment, dood.
3476852
I see, then I will wait for chapter 4 or whatever chapter that plan will be shown.^^
Voltrasin is right though as this does fit Twi. State she likes mares but keep the D a sort of family secret. The only thing I wonder about in this case is Sunset Shimmer again.^^;
As in why didn't she said "or princess" in chapter 1 since Twi admits to like women. I find it really hard to believe that Twi is okay with stating to be a lesbian in a room full of strangers she has meet for the first time ever in her life while keeping Sunset Shimmer, the only friend we have seen of Twi, in the dark about what sex she prefers. I can see her not wanting to tell Sunset about the D, but it is a bit weird that she can tell strangers she likes women and not her friend who she might have known for a much longer time than those strangers who she doesn't know for a whole day yet.
I dunno, that's the only thing that pokes me as a bit odd about this confession, as much as I like it for Twi to be said so openly I would have liked to see that Twi was also this open with her friend or that there was a hint that says that Sunset knows about her friend's preference. Like either saying after the prince comment "or princess" with a wink or that she makes a bit fun of it as a good friend sorta like this: A seven on the weirdness scale
Or something else.
3472819 Well I think it is obvious who your best pony is. Rarity right?
You seem to understand her pretty well at least.
3478184I have to thank you for that link you put up. It is hard to look for a good comic for me.
3503344
I have around two dozen webcomics to share, whenever they are good or not are up to you. You want me to sent the links to you? Though I guess you might know some of them.^^
3507282 Yes please, still going through Sandra and Woo, but I would love to have a few more on my list.
3502922 Indeed she is, It's a RARITY that somepony figures out, usually they have to DASH every option aviable before that, until either it takes them from dawn to TWILIGHT to try to figure out, meanwhile I can't help but try to eat a slice of PIE during the wait until they either SHY away from the guessing or admit they not know JACK about who my best pony is.
To be true: I don't have exactly a Best Pony per se, I consider the whole mane 6 BEST PONIES (althought there's something about Fluttershy that draws me into prefering her, sctatch that she's my best pony!)
3527063 I'm rather fond of Twilight Sparkle myself, dood.
3527066 She's awesome like that, actually I didn't made a fuss when she became an alicorn unlike many others because I knew that she was going to become that since the beggining (actually I accidentally predicted it in a deviant art chat) once again She's awesome and addorkable!
don't be like that Twi, you know is true, take some pride on your achivements
3527070 I actually had no problems with Twilight becoming an alicorn... or her turning human for a movie... the only thing I've ever been against Twilight was the whole Flash Sentry thing, dood.
Like... what does he even do, dood? He can go die in a fire... then burn as he watches Twilight bend Sunset Shimmer over a rail and fucks her ass... IDEA, DOOD! (No I'm not doing this because I can't write pure hate and Twilight already tapped that particular brand of ass and knocked it up, dood)
3527096 Indeed, neither do I with her transforming into a human, also I concur with you regarding Flash Sentry, he was such a lousy guard that makes me wonder what rank did he actually have, If he even made it into Lieutenant we can say is a miracle for somepony who all what he did tried to do was try to filrt with the new princess trying to pull a "Shining Armor" with the sister of the pony now mentioned (besides, the comics had just reciently shown that the romance between Shining and Cadance was already going since highschool *assuming that caddance was sent there to adjust herself to the time's society and customs since aparently she was arrived fifteen or some more years earlier into the future than the rest of the Crystal Empire*)
He can't even properly guard Twilight's chambers or stop Sunset from stealing Twilight's Element of Harmony let alone protect her! He should be thankful that Sunset only was interested on the Element of Magic's tiara instead of killing twilight because his head would had rolled and his flank would be posted as a trophy in the barracs of the royal guard. (How literal is this figurative speech is up to you)
Also it makes me wonder if Sunset will return to Equestria to officially become part of Twilight's herd, and the girls also going with her (And then we could have Double Rarity acction, Double Applejack Action, Double Pinkie Pie acction, Double Fluttershy acction *plus knocking her up by her will as well as the equestrian self* and finally DOUBLE RAINBOW! acction *It's so intense! Double Rainbow! I don't know what does it means!*)
Also I do wonder how Daring Do would be dealing with the "Twilight Sparkle withdarwl syndrome"? Same goes for Spitfire and her now only doctor in Canterlot yet former nurse (also her official first)
3527063 Kind words and hidden truth. Not hidden very well though.
3527253 Who said it was hidden?
3545289 heh heh, sorry about that, dood.
do you seriously not know a single other way to say "masturbate"
Isn't making pictures for your sibling a bit too childish for someone who is having sex?
It might be just me to gush over something so marginal but I was so happy when I saw Photos thought about Twi (the whole thing in flawless german, I mean). I mean, I butcher the english language on a daily level so I am the last person that should be allowed to talk and I´m propably sputtering nonsense right now but nontheless. It´s the little things that make my day. This thought/sentence just did.
*clears throat awkwardly*
Anyways, this is an interessting story so far and I am pretty curious how it will play out.
Back to reading. Me, away!
so far i like this story must remind myself to follwo fusion after i hit post comment