Ever wondered if Pinkie Pie told the Cake twins bedtime stories? Ever wondered what sort of stories she would tell? Ever wondered about the meaning of life? If you're reading this, you probably have. Even the last one. If you haven't ever wondered about the meaning of life, that doesn't change anything. Sit down, maybe pour yourself a hot cup of cocoa, or just some warm milk, and sink into the dulcett tones of whatever voice you end up reading this in.
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Odd and endearing. This is very well done. It's queerly wrought in spots but it all flows together seamlessly. Bravo.
3418926 Erm, if you could explain what you meant, I'd be grateful. At a guess, I would say Pinkie's story telling excuses me, but I'm unsure whether you're referring to what I think you are.
It's as disjointed as one would expect from a dream fic, and from a Pinkie narration. Still, it's a nice thought-provoker. Considering what it started from, I'd call this a job well done.
Cheers
3419547 *Laughs* Sorry
I was using the old tern of queer simply to mean odd or slightly out of place or off in some fashion. I just meant that it was very strange but fit really well.
That wasn't the best story I've ever read. It was really bad. But it doesn't deserve a downvote. I think you can improve anyways.
3421079 You good sir, know how to right a negative comment. I'm being serious here. You were honest, yet damn well kind there at the end. It's not my best work. I still feel my other one shot was better (they all seem to revolve around Pinkie, my one shots). Thank you ever so much. Admittedly, I AM soooort of confused by being really yet not deserving a downvote, but again, thank you for not downvoting me even after passing such a judgement. I am now confusing myself with my own words, so I think I'll stop here.
Until this comment, i had six votes altogether, 6 comments and 66 views. Happy Halloween Australia!
3421141 ...Why because the idea in question was decent. I personally like the idea of Pinkie telling a bedtime story to the Cake foals. I thought your story was terrible in the fact that it wasn't written consistently, and that in it could have been done so much better. This is why I didn't downvote.
3421299 I shall take your genuine constructive criticism to heart. You're a rare breed.
...It's very well written, but I couldn't handle it. IT'S ABOUT SOMEONE'S BORING, TYPICAL LIFESTYLE! I HATE THAT! Let Doctor Seuss sum it up:
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3424819 Then clearly my next story is better suited to your tastes here
3424822 I see what you did there.
3424836 explosions
3424846 You just changed your profile pic, and there's no chapter up yet for the link.
Edit: Never mind.
3425104 lol. 'tis fine
3425104 btw, do you think the avatar needs thin borderlines between the characters?
3425118 Yes. It helps to divide them, unless you do like Stalin did for me with my characters on that pic on my profile page.
3425271 cool. anyway, hive and seek got approved
3425283 It doesn't look like it's doing well right now....I'll just press the dislike to give you TWO dislikes without reading a story!
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3425530 you obviously enjoy yourself too much
3425533 That's a mean thing to say.
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3425548 ... no comment (badum tish)
I actually enjoyed it. quite interesting and the fact that Pinkie was
actually narrating in a normal manner instead of her usual animated
offf-the-wall style is quite refreshing. I would like more of these stories.
5883378 can't promise you much, but i'll do my best