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TheTobacconist
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Hmm i wonder who "Her" is.
Also is Rarity sick or something,
cause i dont think she should be making trips to a cave, if shes so weak.
Right in the feels
right in the feels
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No, she's not weak. Gold is really heavy.
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Sorry about that.
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#$%%.
Edit: And I'm gonna have to leave that there too. Competition and all.
Edit2: Actually, it's not part of the story. So I should be fine.
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Competition?
Needed?
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Yes, but again it is too late to change it. Nature of the competition and all that.
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Competition? Ah.
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electreXcessive and I are doing a friendly competition. The premise was 'Spike breaks up with Rarity.' Both of us have to write a fic with that premise.
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Hmmm i cant think of a good way to end this fic...
*Stabs rarity over and over with a rusty spoon*
Can you think of....oh look rarity suddenly died...
i wonder how that happened,
Oh well, best ending ever.
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Rarity's chest collapsed, and, without so much as a shriek or a cry, she was ground beneath the hoard.
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Worth it.
Eh, I understand what you tried to do here (exploring into Spike's dragon nature, which many people seem to ignore), but I'm not sure I like how it turned out. Not because Spike went evil and killed, because that could actually be done very well. You got across the mental anguish of Spike, the confusion, but there is so much that just seemed odd to me.
How would Twilight, his mother/sister/Best friend (Depending on personal view) not be welcome in his cave? I cannot see him growing so far apart from them that would even be possible. Certainly not in the lifetime of the Mane 6. I appreciate the experiment, but I think it deviates a bit too much from what is plausible without some more storytelling to shape the world.
A good story, and one worthy of a thumbs up, none the less.
-Lumino
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Thank you, Lumino. Twilight's relationship with him had actually crossed my mind, and I decided not to go into the details that complicated their relationship, due to the maximum word count allotted for the competition. But Twilight was mentioned, just not by name.
Thaaaat was pretty fcked up. Way to make a mountain out of a molehill, Spike.
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I suppose he did overreact to the situation.
You know, I've never really thought about how Rarilight would affect Spike before I read this.
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I kind of wanted to hint that was his main reason for not allowing Twilight in his cave.
Intense. I really dug the dual perspectives. How the treasure, how the loneliness, meant such drastically different things to Spike and Rarity. Good stuff.
Was going to give this a like, but then you killed her... Because reasons?
Eh whatever. I won't dislike because it was good until that moment. So, thanks for sharing.
Good story.