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TheTobacconist


...can I even call myself this if I quit smoking years ago?

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Music is beautiful. It is one of two things which can express the inexpressible. But when you do not have music what is the other method of expression?
AN: This is 100% approved by Twilight's Library.

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I guess nobody wanted to break the silence.

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Serious comment: this reminded me a lot of a codependent relationship I had with a musician whose tastes coincided with mine on exactly nothing. I'd nearly forgotten what it felt like, and this brought it rushing back. Thanks for the oddly specific feels.

Brilliant story. Makes me worry about their relationship in all the good ways.

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I like to think that they have a very healthy relationship. They just have no understanding of the other's interests.

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Thank you. Can I ask which part you might be referring to?

3381027 all of it XD but most off all i love how they think of each other, the way they both think there the one that have the reason , the way they also see each other as a child when sleeping is an amazing detail, its show how they both think and want to be the dominating part of the couple.

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I'm real glad that you caught that. It seems all too often in my stories I have themes that don't get mentioned in the comments.

3381320 details like that are the hardes to get right XD a lot of people dont pay attention to detail, thats why i love them so much, its makes the story all the more interesting and deep.

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Agreed. But if just one person picks up on it, then it is all worthwhile. Thank you for that.

This was lovely. The 2 musicians with completely different styles having almost exactly the same thoughts, it was really great.

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I'm glad that you enjoyed it.

This was beautiful. :heart:

I love the symmetry of the story, and the stylistic devices you use.
There are many good VinylTavia stories, but sometimes you just want a short scene like this one.

If I had a hat I would be doffing it to you, good sir. :moustache:

(P.S.: I completely agree. The best comments are those that go into detail about the commenter's favorite parts of the story)

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Thank you, River. You liking it means a lot to me, and your explanation of why you liked it makes it that much better.

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I wrote my own one-shot with those two a little while ago, and it doesn't have many views yet.
Maybe you would like to take a look at it? :fluttershysad:

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Thank you very much, Antsan.

really deep and good story. you Sir have earned a fave

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