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Me want MMMMMMOOOOORRRREEEE!!!!
Sweet.
Ink Heart's the bad guy! Amber has a fiancé and is pregnant! The evil law was made by Celestia's father! (I wonder why.) The Crystal Empire is gonna become a country where humans can be free! A princess isn't a king or queen (world building)! Amber used to have a crush on Matt! Matt and AJ are together! Lots of stuff happened! YAY!
i hope flash dies a horrible horrible death and ink heart too
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Sorn-3DHTC8 FREEDOOOOMMMMM
Ouch. It hurt to read this chapter with all of the grammar and spelling errors in it... Verb tenses in several locations are wrong, "ageist" does not mean "in opposition to" (the word you're looking for is "against"), your dialogue grammar can use some work... I recommend getting a word processor that has a spelling and grammar check on it (like MS Word, even it would have pointed out almost all of the errors). This really needs to go through another round of editing.
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shadow ponies really are the dumbest bunch.
the moral is 'love and tolerate'.
they're end shall be truly karmic.
I wonder how matt will take it, that his childhood friend that he has feelings for belongs to another, he is already on the verge of being Suicidal with this dark voice that destroying him from the inside.
It will probably be the thing that will brake the camel's back for him.
As usual, I'm loving this story though Flash Sentry as one of the bad guys?
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Flash is being used for an evil gain, he's just a puppet.
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Applejack and Matt are not together.
4301813 That makes more sense to me.
hmm... i give it an 8 out of 10
good writing, great plot building, and an all around wonderfull story. the speech grates me a bit though, sometimes it doesn't seem realistic.... well as realistic as you can get in Equestria
So only humans died?
What law did he create?
Inbreed pony?
Does it still hurt, now?
A wedding ring?
What else would it be?
Then, what happened?