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The word "as" was used way too much but the story is shaping up good.
First of all: Edit this a bit. It's nothing big, just a bit of spelling and grammar and incorrect word usage.
More importantly: I loved this chapter. Especially the mystery character at the end.
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100% chance the mystery person is Amber. The human girl he mentioned last chapter.
With 60 thumbs down I was expecting this fic to be meh but to my surprise its really good and I can't wait for more
This was awesome. Matt is total hero material. Like, he was freezing and bleeding to death and yet he still saved AJ. Like, you have to be a total badass to do that. A really good person, too.
About the mystery character: Okay, we know that she's a female. Judging how she's referred to "girl" rather than "mare" or "filly," we can assume that she's also a human. Also, she may or may not actually be a kid seeing how she's referred to as a "girl" rather than a "woman." She's definitely someone from Matt's past. But what part? She works at the hospital, so she might be from the time Matt was with Ms. Sawdust. Or maybe she's from an even earlier past. She's likely not Amber since we know Amber got freed and is now part of the rebel group. But Matt said that Amber was his only real friend. So he was either lying, which is not likely, or this girl isn't really his friend but probably a close acquaintance or buddy, or that this girl is Amber. Where does Matt know Amber from again? I can't find her backstory anymore! Anyway, this mystery person is definitely a female human Matt knows that may or may not be Amber. That's all I know.
4160224 But didn't Amber get rescued then join the rebel group Night and Sunset Shimmer had? What would she be doing at the hospital?
it's against. Not agenst
Chapter 6
ageist - against x2
idiot guard feel - idiot guards fell
Calm yourself, you are save here - safe
Now he got two(secretly three) princesses on his side.