Artist and Writer from Florida. I draw art commissions, role play online, play video games, and watch Pony cartoons.
It was a party so wild and crazy that Pinkie Pie and Rainbow Dash awoke up unable to remember the details. They must retrace their steps however, because they are in possession of Celestia's crown and she sends them a threatening letter that the game is over! Can Pinkie and Dash fix the mess they created and find forgiveness before it's too late?
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This looks interesting.
You got this from 'Dude, Where's My Car?' didn't you, ya sly bastard?
Oh Ok.
Curious to see just what the heck happened...
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Vaguely. I never actually watched the movie though.
Oh. This looks like fun...
For some reason it had me thinking of " Maderia M'Dear", but without the cake. And without the unfortunate implications. I'm either showing my age or badly need sleep. Or both.
I have no idea what is going on, like, at all
But it's good to see you back in the writing game.
Only two chapters you say? I guess I won't have to wait long to know what's going on, maybe.
Have my traditional list of mistakes, because ... tradition!
3373047 well its a good movie, I'll tell you that.
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This one is a bit random and might seem like an odd story line. It might make more sense in the second chapter as things resolve. Or maybe not, as I started drinking when I wrote that part.
No s---t. It helps if alcohol is involved in reading it also.
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I'm not sure what to make of it, but I guess once in a while you just have to go nuts and write something completely, senselessly random.
Might seem like an odd story? Well, yes, I would have to agree
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Well, well, well, Deeg, you've got royalty checking out your writing once again.
Story's off to a good start, though!
But is Pinkie Pie a high enough level of Witch or Sorceress in order to cast Defenestrating Sphere?
No. No. You did not just toss in the Trap Disarming Device into a story about ponies.
This is the craziest mix of Pokémon, Gurenn Lagann, and Arfenhouse I have ever read ever. And I've seen Arfenhouse before.
Overall, still an excellent short story... NOT GOOD ENOUGH F MINUS MINUS *buzzer*
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Hahaha, good times. Except for the "Trap Disarmament Device" comment. I'll have to explain that one someday and then face my crimes against ponanity.
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Yeah, just be thankful that I didn't do the Trap Disarmament Device when I started running OPRI, or that would've been another TPK.