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Kaf_Kraked_Poni


Artist, Author, Asian... Trifecta Perfecta~

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He's not given a name, but then again that probably isn't the most important aspect of him. The Griffon stops at a local bar to ease his spirits, but one remark later and he gets thrusts into a bar fight that may or may not be what he had originally intended. This leads to a succession of events that forces allows this unconventional protagonist to fight everypony in Equestria. Everypony.

Art by kittehkatbar

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 8 )

Sounds good. Nothing sticks out to me as wrong, and I'm not quite sure how you could make it better. (I'm here from the Struggling Authors group)

There is nothing wrong with this at all. Its great. Trust me, i know a good action scene when i read or see one. Just remember to express it really good like this one, and you shouldn't have any future problems or fears with making action scenes in stories at all. I see this is going to be a great story.

Wow, imagine if Gilda's episode was PG-V rated...:pinkiegasp:

Yeesh, this guy has royal business and ponies keep picking fights with him. Gotta give that kid some respect though, being his only "competent" opponent so far.

Whatever story's supposed to spawn from this...
...I'm sold.

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Ka-ching, tank yu come again!

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