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In the deep recesses of the morning light, she flew. High into the sky, she danced to eliminate the tension in her body and the tension in her mind. She was truly free up here.
In the deep recesses of the morning light, he watched. High in the sky, he wished he had acted on his feelings much sooner. He was truly regretful up here.
A Prequel to Do You Remember?
Now with a sequel
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Ya dun good.
What a lovely little story! Just goes to show you that you don't need thousands of words to tell a touching story that people can connect with.
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Wear it with pride. :D
-Lumino
3400526 WHY THANK YOU, ON MY PROUDEST WORK NO LESS
I was just writing a sequel to this too!
This was another fantastic one.
Again, the story was a sweet and simple one and it lead up to the "Do You Remember" story very well. Again, I love the romance in this. I didn't seem forced. It didn't seem contrived. It still seemed plausible and real and I'm glad it worked out the way it did. I love how much depth you went into with Thunderlane and how he feels about her and the time they spent together.
The docks scene was very well done. The descriptions in that scene were absolutely excellent and just absolutely stunning. The story was only 1400 words, but it didn't feel like it needed to be longer or shorter. It felt like that was just the right amount. It didn't need to be longer. (Of course it helps that it has the other stories that connect to it, but regardless, I felt it ended perfectly, it started right where it needed to.)
A couple grammar mistakes I spotted, but again, nothing to hurt the story in anyway. It was still sweet and cute and very, very well written. Thank you for letting me read it and I will catch you later. Take care.
honestly, this is one of the nicest, most touching, most genuine romances ever. all three parts are simply beautiful. loved it!