Fluttershy earned his trust creating a wonderful friendship. However, all good things must come to an end, especially when only one friend is blessed, or rather cursed, with the gift of immortality.
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Flora Spectrum
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*snif* what are you looking at!
these aren't tears there sweat.
my feels hurt now......
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I'm sorry! I know it's rather sad, but I get an idea and it wont leave me alone until I write it! Don't be too sad!
I'm guessing this isn't finished?
Me:oh a story I love a story about fluttershy and discord I wounder what's this about.
I'm not cry I have something in my eye
2 minutes later
Me: this is a story
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Actually, I think it is as I have nothing else to add onto it
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I never knew my story would cause so many tears
Right. In. The. Feels!
It's going to take me awhile to recover from this.
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I'm sorry!
But I'm glad my words have such a big impact
3344549 don't worry u might feel everyone better
My usually crying line up is here.
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So many tears!
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The battle against the feels has just begun!
I liked this, but I felt it was too brief and expository.
It didn't go into enough depth regarding their friendship, and I wish you had explored his relationship with the rest of her family more. The generic husband was a bit annoying, and I felt the reasons for why she had trouble finding a suitable stallion were handled in a shallow manner. I did like the addition of a grandchild, who reminded him of Fluttershy, but she didn't feel like her own character.
Overall, I felt this could have been expanded on and improved. Please don't take this as an attack.
I like your ideas. The bit about Discord pulling pranks with Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie was good, but barely touched on. Admittedly, I think that could be another story, unto itself.
I enjoyed the thought of him mourning her, but I thought he could have put his own spin on that with a little bit of innocent chaos. Perhaps him planning on having a large rose-tree growing out of her grave, over time. Something like that.
Do keep writing. There will never be enough Fluttershy and Discord fan fiction in the world.
Edit: I think Discord attending Fluttershy's wedding would be a hilarious scene. That could also be its own story, if her fiance were fleshed out into a full-blown, interesting character.
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Indeed the husband was not fleshed out as his own character as I wrote this as what I can only describe as an overview. I would love to read a story about Discord, Rainbow and Pinkie pulling pranks as well as Discord attending Fluttershy's wedding. However, I feel I am not the right person to write these stories as this is the first time I have ever written a story about Discord and it may even be my last. It is easier for me to write about characters that I can relate to because I fell as if I know them. That being said, I'm not one to cause chaos or pull pranks often meaning Discord is not an easy character for me to write about
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Awww, that's too bad, but no big deal.
To be honest, I'm not any good at coming up with pranks myself, or I would write the Rainbow Dash, Pinkie Pie, and Discord prank-athon. I may have to mention it on the forums, and see if someone has already run with that idea, or if they'd be willing to!
I feel capable of relating to Discord otherwise, so I might try my hand at writing the wedding idea in the future.
The hard part will be choosing a background stallion, or creating an OC for the husband, and that will depend on what sort of story I want to tell. It could be a comedy, a drama, or some combination of the two.
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In another story I had wrote, or rather still writer, Fluttershy's husband was a member of the royal guard. It would be interesting to see her marry someone who used to scare her (ex. the episode in which she takes Celestia's Phoenix, she was invited to attend the party with Celestia but was too scared of the guards). A pony as such might be interesting, or even the common Fluttershy and Big Mac or perhaps Fluttershy and Caramel. There are plenty of options, and with Discord involved, you know it's going to be a good wedding
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I think the guards only scared Fluttershy in that one episode, because she'd taken Philomena, but I like that general concept. Since I don't have a specific character in mind already, I'll need more of a plot before I can start narrowing down who'd be the best choice. It'll just have to ferment in the back of my mind for awhile.
Oooh! If I go with an OC, one of Luna's guard would be interesting. There is still much pondering to be had.
My feels... They are... Feely.
Short and sweet, with a little moment of d'awww there at the end to bring some happier tears to my eyes. Loved this story, I honestly cannot get enough of Fluttershy and Discord friendship stories. Still, just remembering that Discord is immortal while Fluttershy isn't... I think I need a new batch of tissues...
3585054 Yay feels!
Poor Uncle Discord...
3592716 Poor Discord, but at least he and Azura get along well
Why, Fluttershy?! Why do you have to go and make Discord cry?! Why do you have to make me cry?! *curls self beside Discord and sobs*
3594901 Fluttershy can't help that she's not immortal
Besides, this shows, in my opinion at least, that he truly did treasure their friendship
I get you were trying really hard to make me cry during the story, but it ultimately fell flat. The idea was really interesting, seeing what would Discord do when Fluttershy died. The execution was okay, but something about it rubs me the wrong way. I guess it's because everything was thrown right at me rather quickly, never giving any real feel or depth to the relationship between Discord and Fluttershy, and it never gave me a chance to figure things out on my own.
So, this is an overall okay story, not too great, not too bad.
3644339 I thank you for your honest option, and I must agree this is not my best story, Nevertheless I thank you for taking the time to read it and for the fav.
Excuse me...I have to wipe the liquid pride from my eyes...
3653348 So
much 
liquid pride! 
I'm glad you liked it though