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At an accident during on of Pinkie Pie's classes Fluttershy loses her vision. Her friends don't know if she'll ever see again. Now Fluttershy has to learn how to cope with this new handicap and deal with the idea of it being permanent.
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Okay. I'm intrigued to read this.
You should be aware though, that spelling mistakes in the description and missed capitalisations in the chapter titles will put potential readers off.
Now this looks interesting...
It's Pinkie Pie. I assume we get an explanation as to why Discord can't heal her?
I loved this, it was so sweet!
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So, I need to capitalize the first letters in all of the words in the chapters?
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Chapter three.
This truly is a beautiful story..
Influential to the core and is majestically worded and thought out.
Thank you for writing this moving story
Not to sound rude, but you misspelled lose in both the short and long description. it should be "loses her vision"
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Thank you for pointing this out. I have fixed it.
I was mildly annoyed at having discord be nerfed at first because I'm a huge discord GOD of chaos fanboy, but I guess having a omnipotent god solve all your issues isn't that great for story writing. In the end I enjoyed this story greatly.
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Thank you. Admittedly working around Discord was a challenge, but I came to the conclusion that he's the lord of chaos, not of order. Thank you for accepting my nerfing, even though any discord fan would hate it. I'm glad you enjoyed the story for what it is.
Aw man, why didn't I read this sooner?
Author's note in chapter 3 sort of spoiled the ending, but I wasn't surprised that such a fic of this length would have Fluttershy's blindness be temporary. Part of me wanted it to be permanent just to see how much things would have stayed the same as different (and because it's sort of my "thing").
+1
This was AMAZING. Silverstream‘s reaction, Discord‘s support... it was all so well written and believable and heartwrenching!
I cried.
Wow
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good read very nice
Why doesn't Fluttershy use a Seeing-Eye-dog ?
So... FlutterShy doesn't know that Light has wings ?
I really love this
Poor Fluttershy.
A period seemed missing at the end.
Angel you little devil, how could you yell at Fluttershy when she's in such a condition? I can't help but feel sorry for Fluttershy.
were
Use single quotes.
A spare "a".
than
wrapped
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A door opens when a window shuts. I am glad Fluttershy has adapted to her new sight.
Use question marks.
into
Use single quotation marks.
excited
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Apart from some trivial spelling mistakes, it is a very sweet little story. Faved.
Um... sorry but I think you meant "what STARLIGHT said" ^^
Anyway that’s a beautiful story.
Wow, that’s one of the best stories of all Fimfiction
