This is a small collection of stories I have written on the children of the main six. Nothing too special, but at least now this is out of my head and on paper.
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Flora Spectrum
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a bit fast pace. and lacks details. *sighs* i hope the next one is good
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Hmm... was a bit fast paced wasn't it? I'll try to slow it down and improve the next chapter
Great story so far
It was a bit fast-paced, but I will be eagerly awaiting more chapters
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A second commenter to say it is fast pace... Yeah I definately think I'll look over the second chapter and see if it needs slowed down any. However, I will say these are meant to be short and sort of glimpses and not full fledge stories.
I love stories that involve next generations, so I'm excited to see what comes out of this!
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That's cute can't wait for more
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Thanks!
A little bit fast-paced, and some grammar errors, for example
"After Rarity told the story of defeating Nightmare Night"
Change 'Night' to 'Moon'
Other than things like that, the story is good.
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I will say I have had I think three comments now stating that the story is fast paced. I am trying, but I will try harder to slow it down a little. As for the grammar mistakes, I will go back and fix that one now and search for others.
Cute and cuddly, just the way I like my Filly Stories!
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Don't forget about the colt! But, yes, cute indeed
Stop being so cute! GAAAH! So sweet, I might get Diabetes if this goes on!
Also, Foxwhelp seems like an odd name for a pony. Very odd. Like calling a human Wolfbitch or Deeroy (No joke, I met a man in Germany whose name was Deeroy. Last name was something else, but I forgot).
Otherwise, fun times all around!
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Well for the Apple Family names, I found this website with names for every apple known in existance and tried to come up with some creative names. So Arianne, Dayton, and Foxwhelp are all names of apples
Also, NEVER SHALL THE CUTENESS END!!!
These are cute!
I like how you didn't use the more common/popular pairings for the Mane 6. It makes it more interesting. 
3502574 thanks! I'm really happy to see how well received my story is
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You're welcome!
Oh no, Pinkies son is like a copy of herself. Will this spell dome for Equestria??
Nah, hopefully Equestria can survive the apocalypse that is two Pies. Cute
Pinkie doesn't know she breaks the fourth wall. That's just a gag in the show. Small things, like Pinkie pulling a marker out of seemingly nowhere, are fine, but not this. Trust me, people can get pretty irritated over this.
Other than that, again, great job!
I do have to note that starting ALL of your chapters nearly the exact same way is a little odd and a bit irritating. While it's interesting, it only was so the first couple of chapters. Then it started feeling weird.
Lets see: Rarity, Fluttershy, Applejack and Pinkie Pie. Only two left!
3507571 you make a good point. When I can get on my computer I may delete that part out...
3507526 Equestria will survive, until Indy gets married has foals and there are three generations of fourth wall breaking, party planning, super hyper Pies!
This is great u culd make way moar than 6 chapters and rock itt!! Great so far keep up the cute werk
Img pinkie pies filly omgomgomgomg so,funny please make moar than 6 chapters
3508617 I'm glad you like!
However, I still only plan on six total chapters and I'm going to have to take at least a two week break from writing. 
Aww no problem but u culd make splinter stories of these ones bout tge foals and there lives to give a lil moar back story
3508701 Hmm... I'll give it some thought but I'm already in the middle of writing two stories as well as working with a new idea that's been forming. Therefore, if I do decide to write more on this it will have to be on the back burner a little bit
Whats the second story ur working on
Also new ones send me a link
3508787 I am still working on finishing Silent Song in Canterlot High as well as writing the sequel to Flora Spectrum.
Great cant wait
Great!! Wish there were moar though culd fill in a lota gaps
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Yeah I could, but that would take time, which is something I don't really have any of
You did great!
3517706thanks!
XD I can definitely imagine Dash spying on them from the living room window
3520877 Yay! That means I kept Rainbow Dash in character!
oh boy.... and here I thought one pinkie was bad... but now theres two of them! TWO! Complete with forth wall breaking physics and Pinkie sense! okay, that's it. Equestria is doomed. No way ot's gonna survive two of that kind running around.
I laughed so hard at Harmony^^ I can totally see a filly twilight do something similar back in her day So i think she got the majority of her character from her mother^^
Btw anyone else seeing Celestia and Luna hiding in some corner while watching harmony causing a ruckus with a bag of popcorn in hoof? I sure can^^
3565735 I can imagine Celestia and Luna helping in the ruckus!
3566810 lol^^ point taken^^
I didn't specifically name which Element of Harmony is their mother, but I think it should be pretty easy to figure out
Yes it is, whit the clues you give earlier:
While he had inherited his mother’s natural love for all living creatures, he had also had her bashful and overall shyness.
forget everything her mother ever taught her about kindness
It's Flutter Shy!
Arianne stopped and looked at her flank, which was now adorned with a green apple standing behind a white fleur de lis. A fleur de lis for being able to socialize with the rich ponies, and an apple for my ties and dedication to my family. I guess this makes me a bridge between the two.
That was just THE BEST idea for a cutimark EVER! 
OH. MY. GOD.
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OH. MY. GOD.
That was EXCACTLY what I was thinking! *Gasp* You got a Pinkie sense!
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Me to!
But I do wonder, who's their dad? My first thought was Spitfire, but she's a girl....
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Yep!!
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Yep!
Twicord? That's new! But it doesn't mean it isn't a good shipp!
3665181 Twicord is new? Wow, you must be new to the fandom^^
Thanks for liking my comment^
^
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And I haven't seen twicord before! But maybe I'm just blind?
No, I have been whit in the fandom for about one- two yers, but that's maby considered as new?
3665594 its prolly the last one^^ Twicord is one of the most famous discord ships, nex only to Discord/Celestia and Discord/Pinkie^^
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My replies to the majority of your comments:
I'm glad you liked the idea for Arianne's cutie mark!
For who i shipped RD with, I kind of thought maybe Soarin' just because of the green eyes, but for each I never really had a specific pony in mind. However, I will say I didn't really consider to ship Twilight and Discord, I just figured another pony. I really didn't want to name specific ponies to avoid arguments or any serious hating. Could you imagine what would have happened if I had shipped Twilight with Flash Sentry? Madness.
Thanks for taking the time to comment and I hope you liked it!
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Okay, I have seen Fluttercord, Pinkiecord, Celesticord and Lunacord thoug! But on the other hoof, I don't usually read so many stories whit Twlight alone as mane character, it is more of Apple Jack, the royal princesses, and as good as all bacround characters!