Ice4smaster
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Looks good so far. I'll start the editing as soon as I get the chance...
By the way, who drew your story picture? It's really well done.
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Yeah, and how much did it cost (if anything)?
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Are you asking for the Picture? If so, it wasn't to bad, send a PM and can direct you to my friend
Mildly interested in reading the story, but your description has too many errors...
Just read it out loud it out loud...
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The author is aware of these errors and I have taken it upon myself to edit them out. I already finished editing the story description so I do not know why the author hasn't replaced the unedited one. There are reasons for the authors grammatical and spelling errors but it is not my choice whether to divulge this information.
Edit: Disregard most of what I just said. The author is updating, but I'm editing too slowly...
Any comments on the story so far? I'm open for suggestions too
If I look past the several grammar and spelling mistakes (which I already have) this story is actually very good. So far your character crimson is good, and the idea is even better! I'm kind of disappointed this hasn't got that many views or thumbs ups it totally deserves them
May I suggest putting the story in a group? possibly Equestrian Vampirism that's a good one. GL bro! 
The grammar and missing words is getting ridiculous at this point, when I was reading the scene about Trixie letting Crimson out of the telekinesis I could not tell until later in the scene that she actually did let her out. If you were to go over these again and fix the mistakes then make it more easily accessible I think this story could do quite well.
Thank you! And i need to dust them off and work on it, past month got another addiction of RP-ing on Pony2 I think i'm improving but i sure do need some edititng
Maybe soon there be updates