Crimson Blaze, a vampony mare, awoke in the middle of the Everfree Forest after she jump through a portal. Soon she realise she's strand in an alternate world and her struggles star a new.
If I look past the several grammar and spelling mistakes (which I already have) this story is actually very good. So far your character crimson is good, and the idea is even better! I'm kind of disappointed this hasn't got that many views or thumbs ups it totally deserves them May I suggest putting the story in a group? possibly Equestrian Vampirism that's a good one. GL bro!
Any comments on the story so far? I'm open for suggestions too
If I look past the several grammar and spelling mistakes (which I already have) this story is actually very good. So far your character crimson is good, and the idea is even better! I'm kind of disappointed this hasn't got that many views or thumbs ups it totally deserves them May I suggest putting the story in a group? possibly Equestrian Vampirism that's a good one. GL bro!