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This has to be the Mother of all Wincest fics! :pinkiecrazy:

"Fine, I'll fuck your mother."

Best line in the history of clopfics right there.

serious with getting engadged

1. Engaged.

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I shall be giving this a thumbs up and favoriting. Best of luck on future chapters. :pinkiesmile:

...grab her hands...

Stopped reading there.

sooo velvet , celestia , aaand....zacoora?.....

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Romance Adventure Alternate Universe Human
it always helps when you read there first.....

3336783 who was her babysitter and childhood friend beside Shining?

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The cover art wasn't enough?
It's tagged human for a reason, even if anthro would fit the cover art better.

Sex with the in-laws must have been pretty fucking awkward. Nevertheless, that was some great clopfic :twilightsmile:

Comment posted by Mr Skeleton deleted Oct 12th, 2013

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This has to be the Mother of all Wincest fics! :pinkiecrazy:

Well said, Biker_Dash.

I know this sounds weird, but I wouldn't marry Twi if I had to do this.:facehoof:

If Twi saw this scene, I wonder how she would react. :rainbowlaugh:

3336790 oh , i didn't realize babysitters counted as mother figures now , though technically it appears to make some sense....

Wonder if I'm the only one hoping Night decided to be extra naughty and didn't actually cast the protection spell.

3338028 Well, Twilight did say that Cadance was the best foalsitter in the history of foalsitters.

Whoa, I just love the artist of this pic, and you as well for writing such a nice story. :raritywink:

Wow, pre-reader/editor credit on two featured stories in one day :p

3337566 Bullshit!!!!!! Odds are that, the other two motherly figures are both Celestia and Cadence, So... Do the math :moustache:

3338341 Thanks, the image is actually a bit different but I ran it through ms paint to make it fit better :twilightsmile:

3336828 Yeah about that, I'm not sure to either mark it anthro or human. For me anthro means hoof legs or tail, having wings or horn on a human just seem more humanized than anthro for me.

3338874 For me the deciding factor is the horn and wings, if the characters have them it's anthro, otherwise (if it's got fingers) it's human.

3336223 Finally found it, had to do some digging in my PM's but here is the original.

Gee, I wonder who's going to be the next two? Man, I can't possibly put my finger into it, man. that's what she said.
The second one is going to be Celestia, isn't it? :ajsmug:

Comment posted by Prince Lunar deleted Oct 13th, 2013

*cough* where am I on proofreading? *cough*

3340264 sorry, it's just some of you didn’t contact me through PM so I couldn't find you at first. Adding you now

Totally gonna be celestia and cadence

I have a hard time reading this as you attach action tags of different persons to dialogues of yet other persons.

Please, stay consistent. One paragraph - one person.

She was now on the brink of hyperventilating.

“Twilight, calm down, it’s okay. Whatever this test involves, I’ll do it, just... don’t overreact!” She closes her eyes, takes a deep breath in and releases it again slowly.

“You’re right, sorry I went overboard there.”

Damn confusing. Why not:

She was now on the brink of hyperventilating.

“Twilight, calm down, it’s okay. Whatever this test involves, I’ll do it, just... don’t overreact!”

She closes her eyes, takes a deep breath in and releases it again slowly. “You’re right, sorry I went overboard there.”

?

There are actually some pretty interesting theme developments in this story. I would not have expected a clopfic to use subtle metaphors to display his message like done here.

“Can’t we just go with our love for each other and forget any approval? I mean, I know you want to go by the book which I respect you full out on, I just- argh, I don’t know.”

Either I'm imagining things, or this actually means something a bit more political than what's in this story? If it is a cleverly concealed viewpoint on what I think it is... well done.

3341691 Thanks but I hate to say it's just a stroke of luck. It wasn't meant to be more than him grasping for a way around the awkward Mother Test but I must have thought of something like 'we don’t need rules to be happy, our love is the only thing we need'. Now if that's a standpoint on anything political I don't know, maybe freedom of marriage, maybe something else.

Warning, this chapter contains: bondage, future family-in-law sex, threesome, anal.

Well... this should be interesting.

"Oh, and remember what we've told you," Night says as you stand by the door. "Don't put too much thought into having sex, just let it be natural."

So a clopfic actually taught me something at the end?

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You know a story is bucking awesome when there are a bunch of Fiddler on the roof references in the comment section. :twilightsheepish:

3340743 Thx man. Lol I just felt left out 'cause I have a need to be tagged in everything :pinkiecrazy:

:raritydespair: please let hter be more soon
:raritycry: PLEASE

dude, that was fucking hot as hell, Im definitely looking forward to more of this. :ajsmug:

pretty good. I wish there was some bi though.

I think my main problem is I don't find this weird and find it rather funny

im also going to wing it that celestia and cadence are the next to on our little sexy crusade

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