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DrTechno


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Dangit, I didn't notice the "Mature" and "Sex" tags until it was too late. Cheesy romance combined with bad, pointless clop. Only idiots would do something like that on their first actual date, and they are NOT idiots- not by a long shot. It seems out of character to be that irresponsible.

Considering your other stories are much more successful, I guess you could just chalk this up to "can't win 'em all". Every writer is bound to have a flop eventually.

2558093 Well their both drunk and have been talking a long time over the internet so I would say that covers t least some of the ground between them.

If this is a humanized story you should say so in the description. Don't assume everyone read the first story and knows.

*appplauds* This was a very cool read indeed; very entertaining. :3

I'm willing to give it a chance. Favorited!

2558093

dat headcanon...

nerds get freaky too man. in fact its the book worms that really get addicted as opposed to the "whores" like rarity.

2558268 I seem to have missed the drunk part. I must have been reading too quickly. I should really learn to stop doing that.

ok... says incomplete, but then we have...

The End

Is this gonna be continued?

erect pink mipples

pink mipples

mipples

You broke my sides. I had trouble finishing the story after that.

there have been loads of really weird reports of some kind of blue box disappearing in broad daylight."

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2558851Well it has a human tag and a huamnized Twilight on the cover.

2560493 yep, couldn't help myselt to reference it. :twilightsmile:

2560097 Yes it will plus I will have someone else do a re-look over it to polish this first one.

Very good. I thought it well done enough that I faved and upvoted it, and I would like to see the story continued.

:facehoof: its like some of these commenters cant read

.there have been loads of really weird reports of some kind of blue box disappearing in broad daylight."

I have nothing particular to say about this statement.
Great way to start. I would suggest editing out the words "The End" if this story is continuing.

Hmm, what is The Doctor up to now

I was the 69 like

Also its me lunar 457 tis new account

2723279 well congrats on that. You may also be responsible for making it cross the 1,000 view mark as well, but I'm not entirely sure. Anyway good going, all of you :twilightsmile: :heart:

Gotta agree with Logan's statement. It is very hard not to think perverted thoughts when the mentioning of "lubing" something up is used.:moustache:

2758089 son of a buck, stupid direct Google doc upload. I don't know why they bring up the comments we wrote, but that was a mistake on my part to not check for it.

As for the 'lubing' this is a clop so the characters will have sub-conscious dirty minds

Did that condom really have to be purple?

Will you Continue this FanFic in the near future?

3540713 Probably, right now I'm a bit busy working on a commission story which involve Twilight, just not Dusk Shine. I also want to put a final lid on the Tunes of Romance, made some progress on the FlutterMac, Frosting the Cake and My Ditzy Lovebird.

Okay, I'll finish Vinyl x Tavi and then do this, promise :raritywink:

is this story gonna get an update anytime soon? cuz its already been a year now

4568739 well if you check my blog, I've mentioned that I will finish The Mother Test before going back to my unfinished stories. I just got a bit burned out with my own stories, hence why I took on the commission. Luckily though, I was quite far into finishing the next chapter to this story so it might be one of the first I will update.

Also, thanks for basically saying you want to see more of this and I'm sorry for hqving left so much unfinished.

4569903 interesting enough that i am also reading the mother test as well. i just find this story to be one of my favorites by you. I I like how you wrote the mother test like a dating sim. freaking hilarious. ............ I mean that in a good way. i'm not being an asshole.

4570012 No offense taken mate :rainbowkiss: Who knows, maybe someone use the story to actually make a dating sim :rainbowlaugh:

i still have hopes for this story because it is still says incomplete even after a year. so thats one good thing.better than cancelled.

4753597 yeah, it will continue. I just reached a point where I lost the drive but I'll most likely come back to it real soon... sorry for a general lack of progress on basically all of my stories

4764285 you should see the blog i posted. maybe it can give you some motivation, and entertainment too.

okay i got to know, will there be an update before the season starts?

4888094 I resiously don't know, I just need to slap myself in the face and get back to this. I'm really sorry for this massive delau on everything

4894893 *SLAP**SLAP**SLAP* is that enough or should use my right hand next

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