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DARKPHANTOM13


A phantom of shadows and darkness that wander this site in search of Spike fanfics. May the darkness be with you.

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On his way from visiting Zecora he finds a black gem that he decides to eat and grants him the power over shadows and darkness. Pranks and chaos ensues as he uses his new found power's to have some fun on Nightmare Night.

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Comments ( 33 )

sofar as much as i read, i like it. :pinkiehappy: keep this up and you will please many:derpytongue2:

also the originality is perfict:eeyup:

3391211 Like I said, this is just a little something for Halloween. I'm might make a more serious story later with this idea but it's up in the air.

3391249 *grabes story idea and gives it to phantom* now its with you:scootangel::raritywink:)ya i did that:derpytongue2:(

If it involves the words 'Penal Code' 'Shrinkage' 'Gangsta' or other funny stuff.

You might wanna proof read your story next time while adding some spaces in between some bits but otherwise, a pleasant read :pinkiesmile:

Awesome! I like THIS story. Keep it up! :pinkiehappy:

3391249 would love a huge adventure with this

Please, for the lovely the queen, fix that grammar.
Get a proofreader and or editor.

The premise is good, and I see a lot of potential, but the grammar makes me want to cringe, like when I saw Chrysalis come out of the shower... *shudders*

Should have known this story was going to be riddled with errors from the onset, what with the incorrect usage of the word incuse in the synopsis (I believe you meant 'ensues').

incuse [ɪnˈkjuːz]
n
a design stamped or hammered onto a coin
vb
(Clothing, Personal Arts & Crafts / Crafts) to impress (a design) in a coin or to impress (a coin) with a design by hammering or stamping
adj
stamped or hammered onto a coin
[from Latin incūsus hammered; see incus]

You should make him do incantation and stuff. that would add to the story line:moustache:

need to prolong writing, chapter and detail.. and more story! :flutterrage:
but i like it so have a dashie :rainbowwild:

the lulz are at the end.:eeyup::moustache::moustache::trollestia::rainbowlaugh:

he floor, walls, and ceiling was made up of stone slabs. In the center of the chamber was a pedestal. On that pedestal was a pitch black diamond.

Black diamond....oh no. Did spike just eat Chaos' Emerald?! (Archie STH comic)

"ZULL, YOU SPOILED BRATS, ZULL!!!"

NOSTALGIA CRITC FTW :rainbowwild:

btw its Zuul not Zull

great story, amazing idea, though the execution (like grammar) really threw me off at times...

either way, I love the idea and the potential

This needs a sequel, such a good start to... Shadow Spike? Zuul Spike? :rainbowlaugh:

"Spike wake up!" She yelled." Why is this place a mess? You have some explaining to do!" Her yelling aroused the sleeping drake who sits up for his make shift bed.

Aroused? Didn't know spike like it like that. :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

Wair, it's done?3391249
NIOOOOOOOOOOOOOKKKKOOOOOAW

Please make a sequal of this story. You cannot make a great story and not make a sequal when the after effects of it could be realized.:twilightsmile:
Also random mustache :moustache:

I absolutely loved the idea! :pinkiehappy:

SEQUEL! SEQUEL! FOR THE LOVE OF CELESTIA, PLEASE DO A SEQUEL!!

This story is an absolute delight to read.

MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!¡!!!!!!!¡!!!!!!!!!¡¡'bjvvh!¡!!!
Please! :applejackconfused:

4921957 i agree a sequel would be nice

when do we get to read more of this wonderful misadventure in the making?

What if there was a sequel where shadow spike meets king sombra what could happen because king sombra is darkness and so is spike after consuming that gem but not evil but unlike king sombra he is evil and he has shadow abilities so what could go down

Comment posted by Just A Guy Browsing deleted Nov 30th, 2021
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