On his way from visiting Zecora he finds a black gem that he decides to eat and grants him the power over shadows and darkness. Pranks and chaos ensues as he uses his new found power's to have some fun on Nightmare Night.
A phantom of shadows and darkness that wander this site in search of Spike fanfics. May the darkness be with you.
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sofar as much as i read, i like it. keep this up and you will please many
also the originality is perfict
3391211 Like I said, this is just a little something for Halloween. I'm might make a more serious story later with this idea but it's up in the air.
3391249 *grabes story idea and gives it to phantom* now its with you)ya i did that(
If it involves the words 'Penal Code' 'Shrinkage' 'Gangsta' or other funny stuff.
You might wanna proof read your story next time while adding some spaces in between some bits but otherwise, a pleasant read
Nice.
Awesome! I like THIS story. Keep it up!
3391249 would love a huge adventure with this
Please, for the lovely the queen, fix that grammar.
Get a proofreader and or editor.
The premise is good, and I see a lot of potential, but the grammar makes me want to cringe, like when I saw Chrysalis come out of the shower... *shudders*
Should have known this story was going to be riddled with errors from the onset, what with the incorrect usage of the word incuse in the synopsis (I believe you meant 'ensues').
incuse [ɪnˈkjuːz]
n
a design stamped or hammered onto a coin
vb
(Clothing, Personal Arts & Crafts / Crafts) to impress (a design) in a coin or to impress (a coin) with a design by hammering or stamping
adj
stamped or hammered onto a coin
[from Latin incūsus hammered; see incus]
You should make him do incantation and stuff. that would add to the story line
need to prolong writing, chapter and detail.. and more story!
but i like it so have a dashie
the lulz are at the end.
Black diamond....oh no. Did spike just eat Chaos' Emerald?! (Archie STH comic)
NOSTALGIA CRITC FTW
btw its Zuul not Zull
3427585 That was brilliant.
great story, amazing idea, though the execution (like grammar) really threw me off at times...
either way, I love the idea and the potential
sequel ploease
This needs a sequel, such a good start to... Shadow Spike? Zuul Spike?
Aroused? Didn't know spike like it like that.
Wair, it's done?3391249
NIOOOOOOOOOOOOOKKKKOOOOOAW
Please make a sequal of this story. You cannot make a great story and not make a sequal when the after effects of it could be realized.
Also random mustache
I absolutely loved the idea!
SEQUEL! SEQUEL! FOR THE LOVE OF CELESTIA, PLEASE DO A SEQUEL!!
This story is an absolute delight to read.
4921957
I agree!!!!!
MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!¡!!!!!!!¡!!!!!!!!!¡¡'bjvvh!¡!!!
Please!
4921957 i agree a sequel would be nice
more ! more!
sequels please
6410148 what she said
when do we get to read more of this wonderful misadventure in the making?
What if there was a sequel where shadow spike meets king sombra what could happen because king sombra is darkness and so is spike after consuming that gem but not evil but unlike king sombra he is evil and he has shadow abilities so what could go down