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Spelling errors in the short description do not bolster confidence...
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Fixed!
Thank you for taking the time to point that out to me.
great story! i loved reading every bit of it but my only problem is that Dash was the one who wanted the break. it doesnt seem like her
at first I thought that I was going to lose interest but as I read more I could not stop reading, the story pulled me in. Great work!
this is excellently written, and if it werent a clopfic it would be amazing, amybe you could kind of, make story about the effects of rape, because the ending seemed very realistic, and intriguing, thats my advice
I got all the way through but I dunno this slave thing just doesn't sit right with me
3950091
It's not supposed to have a happy ending.
Just finished and though at times I thought I was done with it I finished and im glad I read this thanks for a fun read
3950190
Your avatar made me read that in Tirek's voice, and it was glorious.
Well... I guess that if you do release a book or books, could you tell me the titles?
The feels!
They hurt!
And so does the dog foot in my back...
Would you mind if I worship this fic?
It is so good!
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Yes, of course! Don't worry, I'll figure something out.
Part of the reason I even started writing fanfiction in the first place was so I could build up a following of fans like yourself to read my books when they come out.
Oh, but I should mention they won't have erotic components to them like this series does, so if that's a deal-breaker for you ...
I'd really suggest you put a link where you say a prequel to "a poison most intimate"
5209091
Is there not a box to the side labeled "Sequels" with a link in it on your screen?
5217982 not on mobile it isn't
wow this sorta reminds me a little bit from Corruption of Champions where Rarity has the Feeder perk and Rainbow Dash got Marble's Milk perk tho addicted to Rarity's milk and not Marble'.
It's been a good fic, unfortunately I'm getting the vibe that all men are pigs, please tell me I'm wrong. Btw I'm a guy.
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Thank you for the kind words, but no. No misandrist undertones were intended in this story. The thugs depicted in Chapter 3 were supposed to be - well, just that. Thugs. Not all men are pigs.
But these guys were.
I prefer small breasts over big ones
This story is fairly old and already completed, I realise. Still, since this features ponies with obvious human characteristics, I would suggest at least considering giving it an "Anthro" tag now that we have one!
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It's supposed to be humans. Granted, when I first started writing "A Poison Most Intimate," I was entertaining the thought of them being humans with pony characteristic - tails, ears, horns, wings, that kind of thing, I've sinced phased that out, but they were never meant to be 'anthro.'
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Really? Sorry for the confusion then. It was mainly when I read Rainbow being called a Pegasus that I thought these were more pony-ish than fully human.
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Well, she does still have wings, and pegasus/weather magic. But she's a human with those features.
At the least, calling her a "pegasus person" is fewer words and easily understandable to someone familiar with the show lore than calling her "one of the weather tribe" or some such.
7480044
Understood. Thank you for clearing that up.
Daaaaaaaaaaanm!!!
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I’m not really sure about that one.
Isn’t Sweetie Belle in the next room?
Yeah it does!!